FF: Khamoshiyaan T2: last part & VM page 66 - Page 48

All good things... come to an end 😭😭😭

Hey i m silent reader of this ff. First i did nt like this ff but as the story proced i start loving it. I always waited for the update of this ff. Actualy m arni fan. So first i did nt like but as i read 4th chp. I start loving it. Thanku for this. U r awesme writer. Waiting for ur next story on arjun.

amazing ff ..
loved it..
i know it was diff concept as it included aisha and arjun as a couple but seriously loved it yaar..
the way u described each and every scene was mind blowing..
the banners amd the songs in between were well choosen...
and at last the vm stole my heart away...

waiting for ur other ff ..
thnx for pming me in each n every chptr

What a beautiful end to a beautiful Story.

Awwwsssmmm ending
loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing...
Beautiful...
Mingblowing...
Perfect Ending...
Will miss this bably...
thanks for such a beautiful journey...
waiting for new one...

Awesome...Beautiful...Perfect ending...

I wish I could be more late to read this last chapter.

beautiful ending of a
journey with started with the pain
of a woman who thought she'd lost the most
precious possession of married woman
but with the time decided to return back
her precious possession n finally she reached her destination
and met her life, her husband...her Arjun
then the further journey had many hindrances
but Arisha together also crossed them successfully
the welcome by team was really wonderful
Aman's shocked reactions were nice
Aisha making Aman n Sakshi realize was nice
n Arisha moments were lovely
loved the last sequence
Aisha dressed in the white beautiful attire
n her dance was mindblowing
loved the whole journey of 'khamoshiyaan'
n would be missing it
thanks a lot for this story
n the vm was fantastic one!!
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Originally posted by: sashashyam

My dear Kunchu,

As you know, I have been very involved with your Khamoshiyaan since the beginning, and had grown to be very fond of this story, perhaps your best so far. Now that you have wound it up after such a long and extremely moving journey together for all of us, I do not know whether I feel sad that Arjun and Aisha and Baba have left us, or pleased that you have given us that rare commodity, a perfectly crafted happy ending. But then you always were a specialist in the winding up process, which calls for special skills. Other writers can easily spoil a very good story with a clumsy ending, but never you!

The heart of Khamoshiyaan has always been the Arjun-Aisha love story, which transcends everything : separation, the presumption of his death, and his sinking into a hopeless slough of despond. In the early chapters, when you had an Aisha creating a virtual, near palpable Arjun to help her get thru her life, I used to get goose pimples thinking of a love so strong and so deep that it could conquer death.

I knew they would get together in the end, for otherwise the story would be pointless, but the when and how still held a lot of suspense. And your deus ex machina for this was definitely the least irritating avatar of Sakshi onscreen or in the IF! 😉

What I worried about was how you would be able to tackle the post reunion part, without making it saccharine and mawkish. I should not have worried, for that part too was pitch perfect. - the doubts and fears on both sides, the mutual reassurances, the protectiveness on her part that irritates him, the small daily triumphs over his handicap, the shared worries about how to handle Baba when the truth about Aryan came out, and lastly, Arjun's natural nervousness about re-entering his old world . Your Aisha is his ardhangini in the truest sense of the word - his better half, who knows him better than he knows himself.

Your Baba too is a triumph, a man so transparently and so simply good that it makes one feel reassured about humanity to know that such human beings do exist. His stoic acceptance, after overcoming his initial anguish and deep sense of loss, that Aryan is no more,and that he has to be given mukti at long last, is such as to move one to tears.

The others too are minor triumphs, especially Aman and Swati. And Room 121 at Rose Lodge is almost a character in itself, as is Sneh Bhavan. In fact, I feel that I have visited them both!

This is getting to be as long as one of your chapters, so I will stop now, with the sound of Aisha's ghungroos, and the strains of O re piya haye.. resonating in my mind.

One last thought, Kunchu. You are going to miss this one as much as I will.

Shyamala Aunty

thank you so much mam,
I know how much you have appreciated my work. Your support was very helpful always. Every word that you said was an encouragement for me.
Thanks again for trusting me with this story.
Kunchu

Originally posted by: sashashyam

My dear Kunchu,

I have just finished watching the VM, and I was greatly impressed by it, at both the technical and the emotional levels. I have no idea how long it took you to put this together, but I must say you have managed to bring the substance of an Arjun-Aisha love story alive, when in the serial itself there was no material to support it. Given this, you VM is all the more of an achievement.

Besides, watching it made me feel both nostalgic for the ETF as it was originally after Aisha arrived on the scene, not the pitifully truncated version after Rathore vanished, and sad at the wanton mishandling of a very good product that has led to its premature and entirely unnecessary demise.

I say demise because what they are showing now is not fit to be called Arjun at all, and tonight in fact he was there only in a very brief sequence. They had better wind it up. Tomorrow, for the first time since the serial began in August 2012, I will be skipping the Arjun telecast. I have no desire to watch a serial killer murder little children one after the other.

Shyamala Aunty

Thank you mam. It did take a time to make that VM as to get a soft look of the lady Dabang was very tough. kafi mehnath karni padi
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