FF: Khamoshiyaan T2: last part & VM page 66 - Page 50

Originally posted by: pihu_angad

awesome ending...

thank u pihu

Originally posted by: rizwanaa

beautiful ending of a
journey with started with the pain
of a woman who thought she'd lost the most
precious possession of married woman
but with the time decided to return back
her precious possession n finally she reached her destination
and met her life, her husband...her Arjun
then the further journey had many hindrances
but Arisha together also crossed them successfully
the welcome by team was really wonderful
Aman's shocked reactions were nice
Aisha making Aman n Sakshi realize was nice
n Arisha moments were lovely
loved the last sequence
Aisha dressed in the white beautiful attire
n her dance was mindblowing
loved the whole journey of 'khamoshiyaan'
n would be missing it
thanks a lot for this story
n the vm was fantastic one!!
👏

thanks dear
lovely summarising of the story
glad u could link to it
thanks a lot

wow a lovely end in whole I loved this story so much, emotion that you shown I just imagined those, thank you so much for giving us this treat, awesome ff
I loved vm you put everything so perfectly loved it

Originally posted by: sashashyam

My dear Kunchu,

As you know, I have been very involved with your Khamoshiyaan since the beginning, and had grown to be very fond of this story, perhaps your best so far. Now that you have wound it up after such a long and extremely moving journey together for all of us, I do not know whether I feel sad that Arjun and Aisha and Baba have left us, or pleased that you have given us that rare commodity, a perfectly crafted happy ending. But then you always were a specialist in the winding up process, which calls for special skills. Other writers can easily spoil a very good story with a clumsy ending, but never you!

The heart of Khamoshiyaan has always been the Arjun-Aisha love story, which transcends everything : separation, the presumption of his death, and his sinking into a hopeless slough of despond. In the early chapters, when you had an Aisha creating a virtual, near palpable Arjun to help her get thru her life, I used to get goose pimples thinking of a love so strong and so deep that it could conquer death.

I knew they would get together in the end, for otherwise the story would be pointless, but the when and how still held a lot of suspense. And your deus ex machina for this was definitely the least irritating avatar of Sakshi onscreen or in the IF! 😉

What I worried about was how you would be able to tackle the post reunion part, without making it saccharine and mawkish. I should not have worried, for that part too was pitch perfect. - the doubts and fears on both sides, the mutual reassurances, the protectiveness on her part that irritates him, the small daily triumphs over his handicap, the shared worries about how to handle Baba when the truth about Aryan came out, and lastly, Arjun's natural nervousness about re-entering his old world . Your Aisha is his ardhangini in the truest sense of the word - his better half, who knows him better than he knows himself.

Your Baba too is a triumph, a man so transparently and so simply good that it makes one feel reassured about humanity to know that such human beings do exist. His stoic acceptance, after overcoming his initial anguish and deep sense of loss, that Aryan is no more,and that he has to be given mukti at long last, is such as to move one to tears.

The others too are minor triumphs, especially Aman and Swati. And Room 121 at Rose Lodge is almost a character in itself, as is Sneh Bhavan. In fact, I feel that I have visited them both!

This is getting to be as long as one of your chapters, so I will stop now, with the sound of Aisha's ghungroos, and the strains of O re piya haye.. resonating in my mind.

One last thought, Kunchu. You are going to miss this one as much as I will.

Shyamala Aunty

Superb ending to a beautiful story
loved the way you decribed each emotions
Aisha's dance and the song at the end was awesome
thank you soo much Kunchu for this worderful story
its going to be missed
VM was amazing
will be waiting for ur new story

Originally posted by: SplashRain

wow a lovely end in whole I loved this story so much, emotion that you shown I just imagined those, thank you so much for giving us this treat, awesome ff
I loved vm you put everything so perfectly loved it

thank u so much dear

Originally posted by: yas23

Superb ending to a beautiful story
loved the way you decribed each emotions
Aisha's dance and the song at the end was awesome
thank you soo much Kunchu for this worderful story
its going to be missed
VM was amazing
will be waiting for ur new story

thanks a lot buddy
glad to know that u loved it

It was awesome and amazing ending di...
Just loved it.
Thanx for the beautiful story

The vm was super amazing di

I am so sorry Helna di, I am terribly late but I couldn't help it. Caught up in a lot of stuff!