#2 One Mistake Chapter 27, pg- 12 & 15 (both parts) - Page 13

Wow you weren't kidding when you said it's going to be long,

Originally posted by: NushIsh

Wow you weren't kidding when you said it's going to be long,

That's y BELIEVE wat u read n wt I say :p

Originally posted by: princess_sara

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Finally i m here commenting !!
yayyyiii i feel sooo good...
i know i know i disappeared nd didn't commented on ur story from long...but My Life u see... its not always a cake walk...anyways
cuming to ur updates till now !!!
i m all Confused(not really though), sad, Happy, excited, SHOCKED(Virat is dead ? then u r dead too..i wont spare u honey)
i honestly luved the twist nd turns u got in the story lyk really luvd it...!!! suppper awesome thinking u hav... imagination hats off !!!!
Did i tell u i luved the special parts in ur updates when u write ur own comments in between then updates.. that always cracks me !! hahahaha... u r too gud !!!
i hav an evil mind so i luv ur evil mind too...confusing yet engaging ur readers..hmmm gud one ha..!!
keep up the grt work...
and update soon
i hell wanna know how on earth u made my boy dead(or not really) sumthing a mystery i know...! little do i know about ur evil little mind..
so dont lemmi wait more...
and update soon..

i will show up on ur story again sumtym later...
Luv u honey... muuahhh


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Glad to read ur comment!!! All the best for ur exams :) rock it!

Awesome and Superb Chapter...Virman Airport part was amazing...Loved it...Virat Reason is also too good..

awesome update
super long update
loved it
airport tunnel part is nice
but then again he broke her heart
virat gave a cockroach as a gift to manvi
but hated it when viren told virat is dead
I don't want virat to be dead
I want virman together
continue soon
thanks for the pm

wow super duper jhakkaas update😆👏
loved the airport scene...and loved virats reasons for hurting her...so realisitc dear...
i feel virat is nt dead but is assumed to be dead by all and mystery.. guess he will bet the one who will bring back manvi frm coma...just a mere guess though
virats last page quote u used was super awesome loved it dear and s death part was shock...
waiting for more dhamakas and also love the way u talk in btw the stry😆
do continue soon dear will wait fr ur updates
am in love with u r stry too and a big🤗frm me to u 👏
thanks fr the pm too😊

awesome update

Originally posted by: Faria12345

Glad to read ur comment!!! All the best for ur exams :) rock it!

forget about mee...!!!
update it soon..
i m still wondering the mystery behind "virat is DEAD" sentence !!!! its surly not possible but cant trust ur evil mind !!! Allah jaane kya soch rahi ho tum... plzzz update soon

Originally posted by: virmanfan013

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<font size="3">when i read the last line i was like😲🤢virat is dead and i was staring on the same line more than five minutes. my eyes welled up after reading that line but i hold my tears back b'coz my mum was sitting beside me😳</font>

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<font size="3">ok one curious question is viren disclose that virat is dead but why didn't his family know about his death😕ab ismein bhi kya tumhara koi evil plan hai kya, nai agar hai toh bata do so that we can prepare ourselves to get another shock😆</font>

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<font size="3">hayeee virat is really a bad boy and i love this bad boy too much😳what does he exactly want from manvi. does he want her suffer and dying every moment. or is he taking revenge from her :p</font>

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<font size="3">ohhh ab mujhe samaj mein aya that why didn't he stopped her. kahi aisa toh nahi that he had some disease and he knew that he is going to die soon😲if it's not like that then what is he planning.</font>

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<font size="3">bash mere paas itna hi hai bolne ko😆</font>

<font size="3">waiting for the next part do cont soon this time</font>

<font size="3">take care</font>

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<font size="3">regards</font>

<font size="3">shivali😳</font>

There is a story behind his death which u will know soon but for now enjoy past cuz u r yet to see his craziness!