#2 One Mistake Chapter 27, pg- 12 & 15 (both parts)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awesome..!!! Loved the Update..Virat is such a nautanki..n i guess he is doing all this fr Maanvi to speak up..Eagerly waiting for next nThanks for the PM!

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OMG!! Who's this?? Fariaji u still alive!? Omggg... I can't believe u finally updated. Enough of my drama now -_- The update was very nice. Virat is really cute 😛 Waiting dor the next update. thanks for the pm. PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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amazing update...

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27 part 2

5:59 p.m
A White BMW parked in front of the girls hostel.
Virat was about to call her but she walked down before he cud press the call button. He smirked and smiled while sneaking her through the window glass and then got down before she reach the door.
"Not bad.. You are in time" He said while taking the bags from her hand
M- smiled slightly
V- "make urself comfortable" opened the door for her n then went back to put the luggage inside the trunk.
M- she remained silent trying to be normal, but her facial expression was clear enough to know that she was sad.
V- wore his seat belt and said "are you ready??"
M- stared him for couple of seconds then said "hopefully u won't drive too slow that I will have to miss my flight" :)
V- "don't worry u may miss everything but ur flight" replied with a cute smile
M- "pardon me?"
V- "wear ur seat belt." And he started the engine

Khwab hai tu...Neend hun main...
Dono mile...Raat banein...Roz yahi, maangu dua...Teri meri, baat banein...Baat banein... (this song was playing)

For couple of mins the ride seemed like a grave yard. So quite n odd. None of them was talking but then virat got bored and started the conversation

V- pass port le liya??
M- hmm
V- luggage thik se pack kiya?
M- hmm
V- maun-wrat rakha hai?
M- hmm
V- turned his head facing her n saw she was watching the outside view being a lost minded girl.

M- it takes courage and fortitude to select a decision that might not be in your favor and today she did the exact thing. Making a decision of letting him go, forgetting about him. Although she had some feelings which overwhelmed her previously, but now it doesn't matter. Cuz the man himself is pushing her away. It will be a dumb act if she chase him knowing he won't fall for her, therefore, backing out was a wise decision.

{evil mind pats manvi's back!}

Manvi was so indulged in her depression bubble that she didn't notice wat he was saying! Virat got frustrated after not getting a proper reply, so to drag her attention he said...
V- "u are a bitch!"
M- hmmm
V- raised his eyebrows n looked at her surprisingly. He knew why she was lost, so grinned wickedly n said playfully "May I kiss you?"
M- hmmm
V- shakes head n then pulled over.
Tapped her shoulder "do you know what did u just agreed to ?"
M- didn't notice n still was looking out the window
V- snapped in front of her sight, distracting her imagination
M- huh?
V- I asked you if you are infected by HIV and you just agreed to it
M- wait wat
V- and now you are shooting for the next target which is ME.. How cud you do this to me?
M- what the hell wat are you talking about n when did I say that?
V- "u didn't, I did but u agreed to it"
M- what rubbish
V- exactly
M- wat?
V- why are you sad?
M- "I .." Gulped her sentence
V- crossed his hands against his chest
M- "I'm not sad." Said quietly
V- u don't look happy either.
M- remained silent
V- see I knew it. Why are you sad Manvi?
M- I'm not sad but happy. I'm going back to my life.. My friends n...
V- exactly! So show the excitement na.. Dead body Ki tarha khamosh kyu ho? Cheer up.
M- nodded in yes

They had a light convo but again she became quite and was starring out the window

Few mins later

Maine toh dheere se neendon ke dhaage se, bandha hai khwab ko tere...Mai na jahaan chahun, na aasmaan chahun, aaja hisse mein tu mere...

M- hit the "off button"
V- bandh kyu kiya??
M- it was giving me a headache
V- I thought u like "romantic songs"
M- time changes people so does their taste
V- oh..
M- "you will never understand me" mummer under her breath
V- "understand karne ka mauka toh deti.. Now why are you complaining?"
M- excuse me?
V- did you say something?
M- no but u did
V- do you have a boyfriend?
M- does it matter (she was gonna say something else but this line just slipped out from her mouth)
V- I don't wanna be the punching bag so it matters
M- why wud he punch you?
V- time will say
M- what do you mean?
V- u need to add some more vocabulary words into ur dictionary and delete all the "what, why, how and huh!" From the list
M- then stop circling me with ur odd n strange behaviors
V- you have no choice. I'm like that so accept me who I'm not the one who you want me to be.
M- shakes head. what exactly do you want virat?
V- "you" stopped the car
M- became drum struck by his word
V- bit his tongue "wat I meant to say was I want YOU to accept this gift." Handed her the Jewelry box
M- her face turned dull agin..
V- abb jarahi ho toh good bye gift toh dena chaiye na?? Warna baad mei kahogi ke bare cheap ho ek gift Bhi nehi diya
M- no one knows wat the future might bring .. Will meet again or not is not guaranteed
V- "our life is too big and the world is too short so will meet again. However, if you don't wanna meet then that's a different case :)"
M- well then let the time decide.. Keep this gift to urself and give it to me when we meet again till then it's due from u.
V- but
M- I like your gesture but please I don't want any gifts now.
V- as u wish.

10 mins later they reached the airport n in no time Manvi got her boarding pass.
Meantime Virat's phone ranged while Manvi was doing the security check and luggage claim stuff.

V- "What now.. I'm busy talk to you later"
Raj- have you lost it? What the hell do you think???? How can u drive virat?"
V- insert the key, start the engine, press the accelerator and then control the car.. Need more explanation of how to drive?
Raj- what?
V- don't ask me stupid question...
R- well then handle the police officer who is looking for you!
V- what?
R- exactly... They towed ur car and now heading toward the terminal for you.
V- shit! Can you hold them for 10 mins?
R- virat it's police not my friend
V- I know but do something... Glared at Manvi who was at the ticket counter talking with the customer service...Just 10 mins please...
R- Virat...
V- "bye Raj.." And hung up the phone.
Manvi walk toward him
M- everything is alright?
V- yah perfectly fine.. Wat did they say?? Any issue with the flight?
M- yah it's delayed 1 hr :/
V- oh that's..good
M- raised her brows
V- I mean u'll get time to settle down n ...blah blah blah
His phone was vibrating but he didn't pick up and was talking to her.

Few mins later virat saw that officer was looking for him at far distance.
V- darn..
M- you said something?
V- nehi vo actually...I have to go
M- gazed him for couple of seconds n was like "sure go ahead.."
V- "I'm sorry I..."
M- "it's ok virat.. U r fine.. U may go.."
V- Manvi..
One customer service officer tapped her shoulder n she turned to see who was it.. They told her her connecting flight changed to Delta and it's in 20 mins. She said thank you to the officer and turned to say bye to Virat but he wasn't there. She looked around but he was nowhere to be seen.

Tere khayalo se Tere khalalo tak mere toh hai anajanaaa...mere toh jo Bhi hai tu hi tha tu hi hai... Baki jahan hai beganaa..

M- something's are not written in our density. So it doesn't matter how much we try we won't be able to get the things that we desire. I was naive enough to build a dream that wasn't going to come true. But it's ok.. Not everyone is lucky! His destiny is written with someone else and am happy for him. I will always remember you virat cuz you gave me the second life that I didn't wanted to live. This life is in debt to you, and I will always be grateful to u for the things that you did for me. Hope you have a great life.. May god bless you.. Stay happy! "Lo..v" dint finish her last word n just gulped her feelings.

Outside the terminal, front gate

Officer- "Mr. Vadhera you have violated the rule again"
V- "yah yah I know.. here... You can arrest me" forwarded his hands for the handcuffs
O- "you have no regret?"
V- "for this crime no, but if you don't give me a chance then I might have to regret for the thing that can cause some damage for my future."
O- "what?"
V- "can I borrow your 10 mins please? I promise ill get back to you after the timer goes off."
O- "hack no."
V- "10 mins won't kill u.. And I'm already in ur criminal list so it doesn't matter if I use 10 mins right?"
O- "I can't do that.. Sorry.. Get in the car."
V- "please officer"
O- I'm not asking u but ordering u.. Get inside the car
V- "are you married?"
O- "I said get in " said roughly
V- "do you have kids?"
O- "you are wasting my time"
V- "just answer me na do you have kids?"
O- "yes I do I have two pretty little daughters who are in school now.. Happy? Now get in the car!" He ordered him again being agitated

V- "nice to hear that.. But I hope when their school ends they came across with an accident and just die on the spot"

O- "what the f**k"

V- "I will also pray that you become the unlucky father who won't have the opportunity to even see ur dead daughters and you may..." before he cud finish his line the officer knocked him out
O- "you f n bas***d.. How dare you say that? You are so dead." Hold his collar and dragged him toward the car

V- smiled wickedly. he got a small cut by the corner of his lips n it was bleeding "why are you sad? I'm just giving you a live example of what you are doing to me by not letting me borrow ur 10 mins!"

O- starred him in strange manner then relaxed himself n said "what will you do with the 10 mins?"
V- "change the world."
O- squinted his brows "what do you mean?"
V- "don't worry not doing a terror attack. Just saving my life"
O- became suspicious n was thinking wat he is up to
V- "don't look at me with those judgey little eyes. You can come along if you want, but don't hover around me."
O- "what are you?"
V- someone that you don't wanna love.
O- Huh?
V- where is my car officer?
O- gone with the tow company
V- "did you just send my baby with those hungry monsters? how cud you? should have asked me before doing this sinful act. I didn't expect this from you officer.." said carrying a frustrated tone
O- totally confused one min ago he was behaving like a normal person and now he is acting like a mentally challenged patient.
V- whatever you are thinking is not true. I haven't lost my screw yet, so you can stop thinking that am a retard.
O- "can you read my mind?" asked him shockingly
V- nope, but I can definitely read your expression which says "I'm a mental case"
O- "ahem" cleared his throat and said "now what does my face say?". he formed a tough looking officer type expression.
V- "whatever you are thinking can't happen, sorry. I'm straight from every angle n I love to hook with girls not boys. So sorry find some else to satisfy your lust"
O-" heyyy" raised his voice
V- "just kidding.. don't be so serious officer or else your blood pressure will go high. Now can we go ? I'm getting late."
O- you are crazy
V- I know that
O- "your time starts now. let's go"
V- "I can't go like this" showed his handcuffs
O- "I can't let u free either"
V- hmm true, but I can't go wearing this though
O- then we shall head toward the police station
V- did you do a love marriage or arranged marriage?
O- I will kill you if you dare to say a word against my family again
V- don't worry I'm not planning a funeral for ur wife. just wanna know if you did a Love marriage or arranged
O- huffed n said "love marriage"
V- that's what I thought. Now tell me when you were about to propose ur beloved wife did you wear ur uniforms or wore a nice shirt?
O- what?
V- do you want me to repeat the question Sir?
O- shakes head! I wore a blue shirt and she loved it.
V- exactly.. if you wore a nice shirt then how can you let me wear these handcuffs n then allow me to go?
O- listened to him being confused but when finally understood his meaning he said "aaa girl problem"
V- "not a problem but a mistake"
O- huh?
V- I'll tell you later, but for now I have to go so wud you mind opening this bangles por favor?
O- may god bless the girl whom you fell in love with
V- you know I pray that too ;P
O- "let's go lover boy." he opened the handcuffs.
V- "appreciated much" both headed toward the terminal

Edited by Faria12345 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Inside the airport

V- hey officer did you notice something?
O- what?
V- I spared your 20 mins regardless of getting 10 mins exception of my own.
O- "you"
V- "I shall check the waiting room she should be there" walk away before the officer cud do anything but Manvi wasn't there. obvious reason her flight changed. He checked everywhere but cudn't trace her. The customer service line was so long that it wud take an hour to get his number.

V- "damn it... you can't go like this Manvi.." someone tapped his shoulder

O- need help?

V- Her flight changed and..

O- whats her name?

V- Manvi Chaudhary

O- "come with me" and virat got the special treat. within mins they traced Manvi n now virat was running toward the other terminal. Finally they reach the immigration check post but he cudnt go inside cuz he wasn't a passenger. But when officer was there why fear? he got in. Virat spotted Manvi but didn't step up to reach her.

Manvi was standing in the line, waiting for her turn to get inside the plane.
O- what are you waiting for? go
V- he was watching her from far distance "I can't stop her.. it's not right"
O- what do you mean you can't stop her? what is not right?
V- she will hate me
O- virat... hey.. you loverboy (virat was talking with his inner mind so didn't hear the officer)
Too sad too bad her number came in and she just got inside the tunnel. Everyone sing with me " na na na na... hey .. hey .. goood byeee"

O- what the hell... you came here breaking all the rules, crossing all the check posts for nothing? have you lost it?

V- he remained silent

O- you had enough for now, ur next adventure will be inside the cell.
V- I have a question!
O- I don't feel it's necessary to answer u
V- but u took the initiative to help me out.
O- and you screwd it up now stop talking or else I'll just drag u out.
V- sighs! But "can I use the restroom officer?"

O- shakes head "make it quick."

V- he left the spot but didn't go to the restroom but went inside the tunnel. (after you give ur boarding pass there is no checking and since the booth was empty there wasn't any security officers to stop him therefore he got the opportunity and just got in. WHY DID I DRAG this well you are about to know)

the tunnel connected the building with the plane. it was almost empty cuz most of the passengers boarded inside except the ones who where giving their handbags to the custodians due to extra weight. Manvi stood last in line since she was the last passenger being lost minded again.

suddenly someone covered her mouth, pulled her up by the waist and dragged her toward the corner of that glass tunnel, where no one can see them properly. He blocked her or shall say stood closely facing her
M- "Virat" she gasped her breath
V- "Hi again" said mischievously
M- was starring him unbelievingly. Both had an eye lock and now virat was losing his self control. :D

Since it was an empty tunnel they cud hear the officers calling for the last passenger. (Manvi of course)
Their voice distracted Manvi and she looked aside, not willing to see him like that. He didn't blink once but was watching her expression changing each passing moment.

M- she tighten her fist and asked him "you are here? how?"

V- "ssshhh you ask too many questions. I don't like when people interrogate me" put his index finger on her lips

M- looked at him blankly. She cud feel the passion arising inside his deep hazel brown eyes which made her stomach flutter. Don't know why but she felt something was about to change. Maybe a hope of light was going to bright her gloomy world? The things that she just gave up on was going to come true again?

There was some awkward silence which sent some strange shiver inside her spine. Her voice wasn't coming out due to his intense gaze. It seemed like he was communicating with her by the eye contact. He was saying something that cudnt be express in words and wanted her to comprehend.
Manvi gathered her courage again and asked "why are you here now"
V- "I didn't get the chance to say bye to you"
M- blinked in amusement. Few mins later, "you are here to say bye?" that's all she cud manage to say cuz once again she fell from the sky n now broke her back. lolol
V- "were you expecting something else?" Asked carrying a husky voice.

M- looked down, unable to answer.

V- he stepped a little closer, making her heart race like never before.

Cockpit captain told the other helpers or jo bhi kehte hai unhe to look for Manvi n now they were announcing her name in the walky-talky

M- "Virat I have to..." Still not looking at him
V- "you have to go I know" he stepped back, making a way for her to leave
M- slightly crumbled her ticket. Looked up and said "take care Virat. Wish you a good luck for ur future. Stay safe!"
V- he flashed a half smile n said "you too!"
M- slid aside with heavy heart n head toward the door way before she cud breakdown again.

V- "hey Manvi.." He halt her move
"Won't I get a good bye hug?"
M- she wasn't in state to say or do anything. She controlled her emotions when he disappeared like a lightning and now when he appeared again, he is asking for the things that she didn't wanted to do. (Say good bye of course)

V- I guess this hug will be due to right?
M- closed her eyes. All the good memories which they spent together was flashing in front of her eyes. She was becoming weak again and now the barrier that she built to leave him aside was crushing down. She cud feel his footsteps. An uncertain chill ran through her body when he hold her left shoulder to turn her around.
She swallowed in nervousness, closed eyes, head down, trying to think and breathe properly, but it wasn't working anymore.

V- "Manvi" he whispered softly and lifted her chin slowly.
M- compressed her knuckles tightly, taking shallow and steady breaths
V- "I want to say something" said in deemed voice
M- slowly n steadily she opened her lashes n was lost in his hazel orbs.
V- "do you know you are little silly and bit naive?"
M- blinked twice, trying to understand why he was saying that
V- "you try so hard to hide your inner feelings but just can't do it!"
M- *confused*
V- cupped her face and said coolly "I can read on you baby. It's all written in ur eyes. I know what you want!"
M- her eyes grew wide, but she lowered it instantly. Now that he know wat she feels it was obvious to expect the next step! But she didn't wanted to think anything cuz poor girl was just nervous and embarrassed.
V- Manvi.. I love
M- she hatched her breath on his last word
V- stepped ahead n repeated again little louder "I love"
M- when you get the unexpected thing it makes you overwhelmed n speechless. Similarly when she got the hint about what he wanted to say, she became motionless. Manvi didn't know wat to do or how to react. Her mind n brain were completely black out.

V- circled his right hand around her waist and cupped her cheek with the left.
M- her heart beats were bouncing like a Ping pong ball. It was beating so fast that she felt like her heart will just jump out of its distinct position.
V- he leaned toward her face n said "calm ur beats down baby, they are making me craahzy" (stretching the CRazy purposefully)
M- she hatched her breath again as his knuckles tenderly traced her cheek.
she didn't know why he was doing what he was doing. All she knew was, he was seducing her like a bad boy.

V- he caressed her lips n she stiffened her body. Each touch of his was creating havoc inside her muscles. She felt 440 volts of electricity was running through her vain and if he don't stop she will die.

"I wud love the taste of you lip-gloss" he whispered seductively near her ear.

M- her heart stopped beating.
V- "wud you let me taste it ?" He back down n starred her lovingly without even blinking.
M- her goose bumps rose up, cheeks turned deep red, heart became heavy, her knees was weak n zillions of caterpillars were transforming into butterflies inside her stomach.
V- "may I?" He asked again
M- she stood numb carrying a pin drop dead face. it's not like they haven't kissed before *wink*
its just everything was going so perfect that she cudnt handle the happiness. She was expecting him to say I love you first then do watever but.
V- "I won't touch you until you allow me to do so therefore u don't have to be nervous .. I won't bite you unless u r very tasty"
(I didn't not write that OK?)
M- she was melting like an ice cream.. He cud see her taking long breaths n her lips were trembling.
V- he frowned and begin to loose his grip
M- she gulped nervously n closed her eyes shut, signaling him to DO it!!!
V- he observed her for sometime and grinned proudly with a naughty smirk, then pulled her closer again, almost touching her nose

{evil mind stabs her heart... Nehiii yeh nehi ho saktaaa!!! Maat karoo! lut gayeee ha lut gaye...
Wat! Why are you all laughing? Not funny ok? I'm serious. >_< }

V- he bend closer toward her juicy quivering tempted lips.
She cud feel his breathings matching with hers as his grip got bit tighter yet gentle

M- she cud sense the heights of happiness which were Abt to knock her door once again n this time she cudnt control her tears to roll down. Not much but two small drops of tears escaped from the corner of her eyes.
Virat was about to capture her lips in to a passionate kiss, but then he kissed those tears instead.
She was overwhelmed by the gesture n slowly opened her eyes.
He wiped her left over tears n kissed her forehead affectionately.

A girl don't need anything but a golden heart man who understands her. Loves her heart more than her body. Cares about her tears more than the kiss. Protects her from the world under his strong arms. And Today she got that man n now she was cheering that precious gift/ virat by a tight bone breaking hug. She found her heart in him and didn't wanted him to let go. However, she was weeping silently not being sad but being ecstatic.
He rubbed her back gently, pacifying her and kissed her head once in a while.
After some mins or so they broke the hug.
V- "i didn't even make you breathless yet and you already started crying? how mean is that Ms. Chaudhary?" he frowned sadly.
M- look down blushing all shades of red and just slammed his chest
V- "ouch it hurts"
M- she looked up ..about to say something but before she cud do that his lips begin to dominate her mouth. Each passing second he was going wild and bold. He didn't let her breathe nor did he let her give up on him. He was on a roll so does she.

{ I can't describe the kiss anymore. You know how it works so why waste ur time n make my hormones cranky? Saving the life cutting short! Also DTs r being a police here .. I don't want to get an ass kicked so early unless I decide to quit ;) but yah one update will do all the naughty stuff without caring Abt any DT or rules... Ssshhh secret hai batana nehi Okkk? Are you grinning? Don't do tht cuz that's my job! Ur job is to ... Buhahahaah pata chal jayega... Aagee read Karo! PICTURE Abhi baki hai mere dost *evil laughs*}

Few mins later thy broke up unwillingly. {evil mind takes a deep breath n settles her heart}
M- was panting of course .. Bad boy literary took her breath away n now he was grinning wickedly watching her taking long breaths, catching some air.

V- touched her forehead with his n whispered seductively "strawberry flavor was ok, but I like the watermelon better.. Next time apply that please."
M- her cheeks turned tomato red once again, she was looking down thinking why he is commenting on every single thing?? It's so not cool. Making me shy over n Over again
V- "I think you sud stop buying new make up kits, cuz I can be the new makeup products who will give you the same effects or better treatment for free." Kissed her nose n lips lightly
M- her face was flaming red. She didn't know where to hide her face, he was making her blush to the extent that she actually didn't need a makeup. in nervousness Manvi begin to bit her lips, her palm was sweating.
V- are you like those typical girls who becomes shy just cuz a boy kissed her?
M- looked up n he winked, she looked aside n blushed more
V- wat??Now you want a hug? very demanding girl ha... and just pulled her closer by his heart in a warm possessive hug.
M- you can't estimate the amount of her ecstasy. It was boundless and infinite. Once again he stole her heart away and made her feel like the queen of this world.
V- gently kissed her head n pacified her in his embrace.

Edited by Faria12345 - 12 years ago

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However, every coin has a second face and Virat Vadhera never does a move without a complete plan :p
One of the air- hostess was coming forward n he knew why she was coming.
"excuse me ma'am" the air-Hostess said, distracting the cozy moment of ur beloved Virman.
Manvi broke the hug n stood beside virat
AH- Are you Miss Manvi Chaudhary?
M- "yes, I'm manvi"
AH- Thank god we found you. we are about to take off so wud u please come inside ? we already delayed the boarding cuz of you.
M- "I'm sorry that you had to wait for me but I'm not com.."
V- "you can take her luggage's away.. she'll be there in 1 min" didn't let her finish the word and just answered for her
M- instantly turned her head toward him, glaring him shockingly as well as confused too.
AH- "ok but please hurry , we can't delay anymore."
V- she'll be there no worry
M- and once again she had a great fall from her dreamy land. I think she is humpty dumpty's sister ... jab dekho girte rehtii hai.. badi hi giri hui ladki hai . hahahahahhahahahaha lmafooo runs b4 u throw ur shoes at me.
AH- ok.. will wait a min for her.
V- thank you. air hostess left and virat turned to her
M- was watching him as if he was an alien. stunned and heart broken
V- he took out the same gift from his pocket which she rejected inside the car and placed it on top of her palm
M- look down toward the gift and then his eyes.
V- " I guess we met again.. so I'm releasing myself from the debt.." smiled and remove his hand out of her hand
M- her face flushed into te same color when she was with him like the day he almost killed her while he was drunk (terrace scene yaad aya?)
V- I guess you sud go or else they will come n fetch u again. Before she cud argue, at least 10 security guards along with the police dog entered the tunnel. they circled around them and was pointing the gun against their shoulder.
V- relax officer.. there is nothing to be scared off.. I didn't fit a bomb inside the plane.
O- I sudnt have allowed you to come.. guards check him
they were checking virat and manvi but cudnt find anything. so let them free except the bad boy.
V- happy now? I told you before nothing is there
O- ill see you inside the cell
V- hope you don't hit on me.. *wink*
O- sniffed n said "escort this crazy head please."
V- he laughed n stepped back " I hope you have a safe flight and good landing. take care of yourself manvi.." He shouted b4 disappearing from her sight. Officers took him back inside the building while one officer took her inside the plane as she was still numb with the shock. she didn't hear wat the police was saying. All she heard was his last sentence. A heart will be a heart although its broken. happiness is not ever lasting and not every dream comes true. her small heart was shattered into zillion pieces. funny thing was she allowed him to break it.
throughout the flight she didn't sleep nor drank or ate anything . was just starring at the gift that he gave her and was burning herself inside. she didn't cry nor wept silently but hold her tears inside her heart. when people get angry they say "I'll make ur life a living hell" but can't do it eventually HOWEVER, he literary made her live a hell out of lust by playing with her emotions n feelings. 24 hrs of long journey wasn't easy for her. Usually people have jet lag due to the flight transactions but her case was worse. she became a hospital patient.
After lading at London airport se was admitted to hospital. For 7 days she stayed there due to fever n some stress issues. She didnt talk to anyone not even her family.
Finally on the 8th day she returned to her apartment. She was Ok now but one thing she had to do was FORGET but NOT FORGIVE that jack ass who made fun of her feelings and played with her emotions. Virat Used her like a tissue paper n then threw her away like a trash ( I hate to talk bad about my boy dekho manvi mujhe kya karwarahi hai... I won't spare her for this humph)

She was unpacking her cloths and suddenly that gift box dropped from her bag. Manvi got frustrated n mad looking at that box again n kicked it so hard that the gift box got broken n the actual box was visible.
For hours she didn't pay attention to that box neither went near it but when it was about to clean the room she had to pick it up n throw it out.

She didn't wanted to touch anything related to virat but she had no choice eventually she picked it up.

There was a letter attached to the box and it was sticking out. She didn't wanted to read but did anyways!!

Letter
Open the box before you read..
She opened the box with an aim of crushing watevrr was inside!

Box was opened n then "aaa" She screamed so loud that her neighbor came inside her room!

Neighbor - manvi dear are you ok? What happen??
M- "co.. "Was stammering..
Neighbor- "yeah? Co wat?"
M- "cockroach" pointed toward the box!
Neighbor- wat??? Oh dear.. I thought don't know wat happen.. Gosh.. N cockroach.. It's dead manvi .. Relax..
M- please take it away..
Neighbor- "yah.. I'll phewww dear coackroch let me take u where u belong!" Took the box n threw it away! "You ok now?"
M- nodded in yes..
Neighbor - "ok.. I'll see you later.. Take care" n she left! Good neighbor ( Faria stabs herself don't worry I know I'm pakaoyinh u! Thori der aur bardasht karlo Abhi big surprise baki hai)

M- she was shaking in anger/frustration. Once agin she cudnt resist to hold her feelings for him. And once again he hurt her. She crumbled te letter n burned it!! Silence before the tornado is most dangerous thing cuz u can't estimate the amount of destruction that can turn ur world up site down!

Manvi didn't cry once after whatever happen.. Something's were kept inside n something's were burning. Now what will her future be only I know!

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Virat's POV (he is talking to u!)

Hey baby dolls.. Wats going on why ur faces have that frowning expression? R you all sad? Why are you sad? For manvi? Oh come on she will be fine. ;) no big deal.. Aise choti choti baate bare bare desho mei hote rehte hai! Chill karo.

Manvi Chaudhary.. Sur name has a weight and seems like a hardcore control freak member of a Chaudhary clan, but her nature is totally opposite. She is too naive, extra innocent n very soft hearted girl. Anyone can look into her eyes n say wats cooking inside her brain! And when she becomes emotional, it's like a piece of cake to know wat her heart wants.
Did u all see what did she do that day? miserably fell into my traps like Tom failed to screw Jerry. Gosh how can someone be so innocent to not to notice the reality?? But then that's wat makes her special from the rest. And I love her speciality cuz that gives me an extra advantage to play with her :p

I know I broke her heart by being a jack ass. Probably she hates me now right? But I had no choice. I had to leave her for my own selfish reason!

Reasoning #1
blame Nyfa and my upbringing for that! I wish I wasn't a valedictorian and then the situation wud have been different then now! You see I rank as #1 student for the most prestigious Film Academy of 21st century / New York Film Academy, and I can't lower that reputation for her. Are you thinking I'm a nerd? Hahaha I'm everything except a nerd but yah.. Well according to the Universal statistic "women's are the #1 reason for men's destruction" no offense ok? But u all pretty ladies have that incredible power to distract us with ur divine beauty n sweet gestures that we can't help ourselves from paying attention to U n ONLY u n forget about the rest of the world. Honestly speaking I don't mind being occupied with the girl I love but this period of time I can't do that!
My graduation is in 6 months and I can't afford to go off track with my studies. I worked my butt off all these years for the position and the status I needed to reach my dream. n for her I can't step back! I can't let my family's pride down.

Reason #2
well this one cud have been an alternative way to continue the relationship but I don't like this solution. She cud have been transferred here but like I said se will be my distraction n I won't be able to give her enough time to settle down the things that are core base of a relationship. I had another option too. Social networking! BUT I don't believe in being a online boyfriend. It doesn't work n I can't keep up with it. Suppose we were in relationship n she was in London then She wud always have that insecurity feeling of "whom am I with or if any girl was around or any such!
100 phone calls in a day.. Giving her details about my traveling, eating, sleeping even party schedule n wat not" psh... Who's gonna do that man? Not me ... Well I prefer to flirt with other girl in front of her rather then arguing with her over a Facebook picture with some random girl in root bar.. Also I ll be worrying for her as she will be living alone n I won't be able to hold her, hug her n u know.. Not happening .. Therefore I had to leave her..

Reason #3
She was sired bond to me. Good news in a way but bad too cuz she wasn't thinking from her mind but was just following my instruction blindly. I want a human who reacts back, not a toy whom I can control with a key! I want her own opinion. I want her to fight back ... Want her to stop me if I'm crossing my limit. In short I want a girl who have the attitude n courage to give me a fight back!

Reason #4
It was my mistake to ask her for lunch cuz she thought it was a date.. Indirectly it was but then something happened to her which screwed my mind n I did all the crazy stuff.. Thora bura lagatha when she rejected me but then re-thought and got myself in control. I jumped 2 steps ahead n tried to do everything at once so got a hold back! Therefore I stepped back 4 steps behind so can take baby steps n do it slow.

As far as I know her.. She is hating me right now but hey I want her to hate me... Hate me to the extend that when she loves me she won't dare to think about hating me ever again... Every story has good n bad side n I will start of with hatred just to see where it ends up being.

Also she need some time and space to pull herself back together n form herself into the lady that I wanna be with. Cuz baby dolls I'll be the biggest asshole n won't let her live in peace.. Will torture her n love her at the same time.. hey I'll save her from this crude world n give her all the love, protection n attention that she needs NOT wants! But the question is "I'll save her from the world but who will save her from me?" ;) ssshhh don't tell anyone but I already did the attack... Now she will hate me but I'll be hovering her mind all the time cuz she don't know why I did what I did. But there is a possibility that she might move on with someone else n forget me HOWEVER, do u think she will do that? Mmmh I don't think so. She didn't backdown the day when she got to know about Jeremy then how will she backdown now? That day I was so close to rape her but she had that unnatural magic that stops me from hurting her. Even after leaving her like that I cudnt sleep properly... Her dead eyes haunts me down everytime I close my eyes. I didn't wanted to hurt her but I had to. But all is good now cuz she is stuck with me in a penalty box until my breath ends.. Now that you know why I did what I did.. Do u think I was wrong? Ahem adios seoritas :* I got some girls to entertain :) see ya soon!

Note: why police took him to jail cuz he violated the rule by driving ;) u remember he is not allowed to drive for 6 months? So ya... Why he didn't get the taxi instead? Well that's where man's ego n proud comes to play... Car ke hote huye taxi eeh not happening! Also that's reason 5 too cuz here U can't go anywhere unless u have a car.. So he can't take her out n he can't look helpless infront of her...

Oh the tunnel drama?? That crap wasn't in my writing list either, I added just cuz I wanted to give te roaches ... You see if it gets to te scanning machine they will throw it away n then she won't have hated him na !
With all that say Sayonara to California baby!!!! Cuz now story will shift to INDIA ...HOWEVER u will return back here toward the END of this story... <3

Wait don't go yet Abhi toh Maine asle script post he nehi kiya... Game begins here... Hold ur breath cuz u r about to read something unexpected...

Future
Operation Theater

Doc Mehta: "patient is bleeding.. It's not good.. she has to wake up.. Baby is in danger. Nurse get the life support. "

Doc Rahul- "oh no her pulses are dropping... Nurse get the Intraaortic balloon pump fast.."

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"mumma... Mumci..."vihaan was clutching jeevika's dress tightly and was hugging her being frighten

Jeevs- "vihaan ... Calm down beta Don't worry she will be fine.. Just fine.. " hugged back him more tighter. She looked at Viren, who was in deep thought n was starting at the ICU glass.

Viren's POV (he is talking to you)

Our life is like a dot of a circle. Doesn't matter where we start we will end up being at the same place toward the end. History repeated again... Same place, Same spot but different person. I wish I cud go back in time and fix every damage that has been made. Sometimes I feel so handicapped n helpless that I can't do anything except watch everything being destroyed in front of my eyes.
The thing that I was most afraid of just happened. Manvi shouldn't have read the diary and now I don't know how to stop the tornado that is coming toward us. I have been keeping a secret since long time for the sake of my families happiness but now I think it's time to tell them the truth... Something that they sud know but wasn't aware of due to the situations and consequences.

His trails of thought was distracted by the doctor's arrival

Doc- "I'm sorry to say but we cudnt save the baby..."
Now I can't describe the family reaction usually wat families do u know psh skipping that... And I told u before not to worry about the baby ... Now u happy??

Vanshiksa- "and manvi??"
Doc- she survived but her situation is very critical. She is babbling someone's name... Mmm virat.? Ha virat do you know where is he???

Everyone looked at each other but they didn't have any answer.. Cuz they don't know where is he except viren...

Doc- our medicines are not reacting in her body.. Something is holding her back from coming back to life.. It seems like she don't wanna live that's why not responding.

Jeevika- I know how will she react..
Everyone gazed her with a confused look
She whispered something in vihaan's ear and the next moment vihaan enter the ICU

Nurse- "hey what are you doing here?? U are not suppose to be here"
Vihaan- "I'm here to see my mumci..." And he sat on the bed without a second thought
Nurse- get off right now.. Or else
Vihaan- squinted his brows and said "you got something in ur shirt.. You might wanna wash it" and giggled
Nurse- what?
Vihaan- pressed his colored - gun n just covered her top with the blue colors! "There"
Nurse- :O look down n then "doctorrr" she ran to make a complain..
Vihaan- Yesss... "Mumci look this gun worked again"
"Mumciii... U are looking like a power ranger robot!"
"See u even have that mask too.. I want one for Halloween ok??" Pointing at the oxygen mask.
"Mumci you know that' nurse wasn't good at all... She was looking like a clown.. And he mimicked the nurse"

Doc Mehta- what the hack is going on here??? Why that kid is inside the ICU?? Get him out now..

Doc- Rahul: no wait.. check the respiratory machine! Her heart beat is showing stable.. I think he can help us to make her come back to life again..

Doc M- really... U think this kid will do this miracle?
DocR- children's are form of an angle and they work as blessing so I think this kid will bring her back
DocM- it's not drama ok? It's reality.. She is in Coma and she won't wake up for long.
DocR- sometimes drama becomes our life so I won't lose hope..
"Hey beta wats ur name?" He asked
"Vihaan" he replied
DocR- vihaan can u please continue talking with her?
Vihaan- aha.. I will but then can I sleep with her too?
DocM- no
DocR- mmm yes
DocM- doctor Rahul I think u forgot the rule?? It's ICU not a general ward
DocR- my patience is dying and I can't leave a chance to save her so I think ICU can be a general word for the night.
DocM- fine show ur mahanta at board meeting.. See you.

Vihaan- "hey fatty doctor..."
DocM- he turned n said "did u just called me fat?"
Vihaan- no.. I didn't ... I just wanna say.. Something is in ur shirt.
DocM- look down.. Wat? Where?
Vihaan- "there n colored him with te deep blue ink" happy holy!!!

DocR- laughed n said "bura na Mano holy haiii"
(The clock strike 12 /midnight)
Mehta left with an angry face...

Time passed but manvi was still unconscious. Vihaan was talking talking n talking that the doctor got tired with his talking n left the room for another patient. Nurse was there but she was just frustrated with vihaan. Why? Cuz poor nurse had to answer all his question about all the machines, utilities n everything that they applied on manvi .. And then he use to restate them to manvi..

Doc R- came again n was checking her
Vihaan- doctor can u hear her heart beats?
Doc R- aha.. U wanna hear?
Vihaan - " yesss!!" Doctor plug in the stethoscope inside her earbuds
Te heartbeats were steady.
"Ur machine is wrong!!!" He unplugged the stethoscope
DocR- really...
Vihaan- her heart beats are beating more faster then this..
DocR- "and how you know that naughty boy?" Ruffeled his hair
Vihaan- "cuz it's right here..." He hold manvi's hand n placed it on top of his heart... "See it's beating faster.. Right mumci?"
DocR- smiled at his innocence n said "OMG we need to change our equipment thank you vihaan"
Vihaan- "u welcome.."
Doc ordered the nurse to check on her every 2 hrs n left the room. It was midnight n vihaan also fell asleep cuddling manvi carefully with a hope that she will play holy with him tomorrow morning.

Morning
It was 7 am when suddenly manvi's heart beats begin to beat faster. She was having difficulties to breathe.

At one point it got stable n manvi became conscious. But then she wanted to see virat...
Only jeevika n viren was present at the hospital when she was conscious.

Viren- manvi.. Please relax.. Don't take stress.. Everything will be fine..
M- "viraat..." Said in deemed voice.. Her pulses were dropping again.
Viren- "manvi..."
M- didn't have the strength to ask him more but her eyes were asking him "if watever he read was true or not"
Viren- didn't look into her eyes n left the room.
M- took a deep breath n turned her head toward the Celling. Some tears escape from her eyes and she smiled n recalled wat was written on the last page of his dairy...

She closed her eyes n went back to comma for eternity...

Outside the ICU

Viren banged the wall and just kneel down heart broken...

Few mins later vanshiksa came in (she n vihaan went back to the cottage n freshen up)

Doctor came n gave the news that manvi went to comma

Everyone was shock, depress n crying..
Viren walk upto vanshiksa n said
"Ma I have to tell u something.."

Vanshika- "what is it?"
Viren- it's about virat...
Vanshika- "virat..."
Viren- "maa virat.." Pause in the middle n closed his eyes
Vanshika - observed him for sometime then raised her eyebrows n was like "viren not now... I have to tell miss Govanza about her child... (It wasn't manvi's child she was a surrogate mother :p) Manvi is in commaa n I ..."

Viren- it's high time u sud know that..
Vanshiksa- "I said not NOW" shouted at him
Viren- "maaa" hold her shoulder
"Virat is dead..."
Vanshika- se froze on her spot...
Viren- he hugged her tightly..

"Viren jii" jeevika said from the back.. Shock to accept wat he just said..
Viren looked at her n closed his eyes.. Tears roll down his cheek
N with all that I end this chapter..

Good bye until I feel like writing :)

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Yayyy!! Am the first one to comment! The update was so long that I can use only 1 word for it, 'P.E.R.F.E.C.T.' I loved the update to its core! Please continue soon. Don't take that long time this time naa! 😊

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Originally posted by: .LiveLaughLove.
Yayyy!! Am the first!!😃The update was so long that ai can use only 1 word for it 'Perfect' Loved the update!!

Too long no. ? Sorry.. I wrote too much n after I did I dint had the energy to cut short

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Originally posted by: Faria12345

Too long no. ? Sorry.. I wrote too much n after I did I dint had the energy to cut short

Heyyy!! I didn't mean it that way. Infact its so nice of u to give us an update of that much words! The longest update anyone has ever given on IF and making her fans happy! 😉