#2 One Mistake Chapter 27, pg- 12 & 15 (both parts)

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shirhid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

hey it was not just good it was super goood

poor manvi she dnt wanna go

nd virat he such a evil

loved the whole update

cont soon

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Tejeswy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Where is 27 part 2.!? 😲

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rasp_berry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Hww updt kar diya aur bataya bhi nahi...very bad
it was awesome n hilarious updt...virat is such a pyschopath...but i loved his sense o humour...cont soon

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

it was awesome update

loved it

poor maanvi

virat is a bad boy

plz cont soon

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

TEASER!(ll update tomorrow)

V- "I can't go like this" showed his handcuffs
O- "I can't let u free either"
V- hmm true, but I can't go wearing this though
O- then we shall head toward the police station
V- did you do a love marriage or arranged marriage?
O- I will kill you if you dare to say a word against my family again
V- don't worry I'm not planning a funeral for ur wife. just wanna know if you did a Love marriage or arranged
O- huffed n said "love marriage"
V- that's what I thought. Now tell me when you were about to propose ur beloved wife did you wear ur uniforms or wore a nice shirt?
O- what?
V- do you want me to repeat the question Sir?
O- shakes head! I wore a blue shirt and she loved it.
V- exactly.. if you wore a nice shirt then how can you let me wear these handcuffs n then allow me to go?
O- listened to him being confused but when finally understood his meaning he said "aaa girl problem"
V- "not a problem but a mistake"

Edited by Faria12345 - 12 years ago

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NushIsh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

So he wants to propose before she goes away

Finally he's coming to his senses

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: NushIsh
So he wants to propose before she goes away
Finally he's coming to his senses

Hawww u calling my boy nonsense indirectly tch tch how mean... Mai bardasht nehi karungi !!! I will take revenge from manvi humph

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prathe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

wow super update...👏...nt at all boring...😊
sry am nt gud at givng long comments but honestly i enjoyed u r update as always 😊

do update soon ...do pm me if possible dear...😊
will wait for your updates😊

Edited by prathe - 12 years ago

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niki795

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

awesome update faria
loved it
I didn't know that you updated it
I just came here to check and post plz update
but see here you updated and didn't inform😔
coming to the update
its superb
loved it
loved virat teasing and annoying her
loved her pov
update the next part soon