ArShi OS: The Riverside

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: avikasharma
such a beautiful os! 😊
amazing description of the scenario. loved it!

that was really nice

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JCJS

@JCJS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Just a beautiful os loved it.

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@MeWantBanana

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Oh how indescribably beautiful and charming that was!! :)

i love the vintage touch that the beginning of this piece holds...!!

the ending was just absolutely beautiful!! :)

tc :)

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

if it were not exam time that's in love with your creativity...i would have suggested you to write more...but seriously gal are u sure u a biotech student :D

coz this was ahhhmazingly beautiful :)

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

superb os

thanks for the pm

Twinkle

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Achu

@arshy4ever

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Hey Mavz...😊... This is really beautiful...👏.

The story is the product of an incredible silence and freshness as of the river in your photo...I loved it to the core...

I always love the works which pave me the way to make use of my vivid imaginations...

LOVE you

ACHU😳

Edited by arshy4ever - 12 years ago

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Res but now nini time. Comment tomorrow 😊

Edited:

You had me at the ambiance you created. I have never been to Kolkatta nor have I been to that particular riverside.

Yet, I was with Arnav as he admired the pinks in the landscape or Khushi's countenance for the first time.

I was with Arnav when he had the phone conversation with his grandparents and I was with Arnav when he had their first wedding anniversary conversation with Khushi.

Your writing was so brilliant 👏

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago

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207shikha

@207shikha

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

it was amazing!

the whole scenario and everything.

loved it. :D

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ziya-farhannish

@ziya-farhannish

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

wow! i loved the grandma more than grandpa. clear, to the point and stubborn, or decided, the perfect word being arnavish! hihi. a pat on my back for that. khushi is missing here. i think thats whats lacking to make it perfect! not khushis or the girls viewpoint, but the girl as a whole.. something just above the last few sentences. but then, i got your point and whatever you intended to protray was clearly displayed😊!