ArShi OS: The Riverside

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Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

itr was nice os loved conversation between arnav n his grandparents

loved it

thanks for pm

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

beautiful os there... the descriptions wer really really beautiful... loved it :)

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

The way you described the riverside and the girl seemed too beautiful to be true... I was actually thinking that the entire thing might be Arnav's dream... ! But I'm glad it wasnt...

Loved it:)

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Wow,,, that was just magical !

It was short but even within those boundaries all the emotions of a lifetime so beautifully described !

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Wow!! Beautifully written!

A Bong Arnav was enough for me to sit straight and alert . And I am amazed how wonderfully and smoothly your words flow. Nothing much really happened and you can anticipate what is coming .. Yet you would enjoy reading it because the description, the portrayal of emotions .. is plain and simple magical.

Would catch up with your other works slowly. I am sure I am going to have a good time. :)

Edited by Omoraboti - 12 years ago

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sofiaroth

@sofiaroth

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

aw that was really sweet!!

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Mariam Khan

@Mxk3444

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

I'm really sad that this is a one shot I wanted to read more of this :/ it was different from what I usually read and it defineitly lightened my mood up :)