ArShi OS: The Riverside - Page 5

Lovely...OSes make me want more..but it was short et sweet!

Wow Mavs... if u ask me honestly...I love to read ur Oneshots too much more. After reading this os, and remembering the earlier ones, I just came to conclusion tht ur true talent at writing reflects way more in these OS's. I feel ur words and way of presentation is really really awesome in these whil in ff, the magic of ur words get a little subdued by the reader's anticipation for the story of ff. But, here only ur words reflect..as we r expecting nothing in particular in terms of story. I m really really impressed with this one.

like I said above, I m most affected by the way of ur presentation. Its really mesmerizing. and honestly, agar tumhare hisab se dis os is not close to the beauty of what u imagined...then m really curious to know...how could this scene be presented any better.

U totally did a marvellous job! I m in love wid ur writing talent all over agn!
Ab agar tum itne awesome OS's likhogi na...toh sacchi bol rahi hoon...main dua karne baith jaungi tumhare exams roz ho. 😛 keep up!

Originally posted by: crazy4ArnavSR

Wow Mavs... if u ask me honestly...I love to read ur Oneshots too much more. After reading this os, and remembering the earlier ones, I just came to conclusion tht ur true talent at writing reflects way more in these OS's. I feel ur words and way of presentation is really really awesome in these whil in ff, the magic of ur words get a little subdued by the reader's anticipation for the story of ff. But, here only ur words reflect..as we r expecting nothing in particular in terms of story. I m really really impressed with this one.

like I said above, I m most affected by the way of ur presentation. Its really mesmerizing. and honestly, agar tumhare hisab se dis os is not close to the beauty of what u imagined...then m really curious to know...how could this scene be presented any better.

U totally did a marvellous job! I m in love wid ur writing talent all over agn!
Ab agar tum itne awesome OS's likhogi na...toh sacchi bol rahi hoon...main dua karne baith jaungi tumhare exams roz ho. 😛 keep up!

I don't know if you'll like my saying this, but I love your OSs more than you FFs.

I have read Timshel n after that This is awesome...
Firstly I liked the scene where he was focusing his lense n Ended up zooming in n out on Khushi...
The scene where Arnav was sitting on stairs...His convo with his grandparents was cute...
N the last part about coincidence...Wo to Hona hi Tha...:)
Very nice...Thanxx alloot for PM...

It is beautiful...

Beautiful OS. . .
Just loved it. . Ur desription of d river side was superb. .

Originally posted by: maverickmartin

Even I started thinking the same after Timshel. I really am better at short prose pieces. I'm thinking, that, I should probably take sanyaas from FF/SS writing and produce OSs by the dozen! 😆😆

Bahut bahut dhanyavaad for the comment! Hum aapse I love you dammit!

This was so beautiful!