ArShi OS: The Riverside

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

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Posted: 12 years ago

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meera30

@meera30

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Oh I just loved this One Shot by the riverside. The first meeting amidst such beauty. Did nature enhance her beauty or did she make everything else perfect by being there - would love to know from this Arnav whose heart beats just as passionately for his Khushi as it does for his camera and its subjects!

I love the little Bengali touch - the interspersing of a beautiful language - Shob jani - ah I can almost hear the lilting voice of a grandmother - my own when she does it!

You write nature and elements with such tender care, it's like painting a picture...I have seen artists do this with colors on a canvas.

What a sensual read - I could see, hear, feel...even taste the water of the river!

PS: I don't know what you wanted to write but this was beautiful; You shouldn't be worrying by any stretch of imagination.

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avika_ShArMa

@avika_ShArMa

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Posted: 12 years ago

such a beautiful os! 😊
amazing description of the scenario. loved it!

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meera30
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You reserving. On my story. Me sprouting wings. Floating in bliss. 😆

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fffan123

@fffan123

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome OS. Love it.

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

Awww...just one word to describe this one shot...BEAUTIFUL...
a perfect blend of words and emotions...
awsm...

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Perfect!

Loved the setting and the way they had an eye lock in the beginning.

You didn't really go into details about how he made her agree and etc. But the subtlety was great.

I love how random things inspires you. ❤️

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Water is so calming...and this story had the same feeling of calm and serenity that watching the waves lap to shore gives me. A bit of grandparent interaction gives it a lighter edge. Loved it.

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dilectus

@dilectus

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Posted: 12 years ago

I love you maverick

p.s.-- Itni jaldi se yahi jawab milta hai meri side se 😆

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: neverbefore
Water is so calming...and this story had the same feeling of calm and serenity that watching the waves lap to shore gives me. A bit of grandparent interaction gives it a lighter edge. Loved it.

Thank you. I wanted to bring that effect, and if you felt it, I am glad. :)

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