ArShi OS: The Riverside

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

That was perfect! The story, your words, that moment, everything seduced me! God! Wonderful!

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ruby-red

@ruby-red

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

aww, that was beautifull, so sweet.

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

beautiful OS.. simple but beautiful

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Updated comment on pg 4 😊

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Pavina

@Pavina

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

it was beautiful, so innocent and sweet...
lobbd it...

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

This is the kind of OS which picks you up right from your location to were the story is based. In this case, I could feel the breeze on my face and feel the dampness in the air :)

A beautiful OS :)

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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Very beautiful...❤️

Loved the description of beach...👏

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IPK007

@IPK007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

This was such a beautiful OS. A colorful slice of life. Really loved the way you described the beauty of Khushi in continuum with the surrounding nature. It was brilliant. You should really write more :))

Loved it to bits.

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arshifan91

@arshifan91

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

A beautiful OS written impeccably 👏

I just loved your writing style. The way u have vividly described the river side and its surroundings made me feel to be a part of it though i have never been to Kolkatta .

The talks between Arnav and his grandparents were really adorable😃 I have read this quote which says that "Life always throws surprises at you when you least expect it ". I feel u have conveyed it through this OS in a subtle and serene way 😊 The ending was very warming ⭐️

Calm river side , beautiful sun set , romantic couple , what more can i ask for !!!😛

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Nice one. Thanks for the pm.

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