Janmashtami TS:Will he or wont he?*complete* - Page 12

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Res

Thank you for sending me the translation wala PM, U're welcome! I am touched you remember that I prefer to read the English version. So thoughtful of you, I truly appreciate the gesture.Thanks for saying that!

I loved it, her apprehension about 'Shyams' name appearing in the song, causing her worry, as she does not want to hurt Arnav at the same time the confusion and the dilemma of wanting to take part in the dance, but so sensitive to his feelings. She is so endearing, you wrote it so beautifully I could visulise how she was restless not knowing what to do but then she could not deceive him or keep him in the dark...

Glad that Payal supported her and encouraged her to tell him, the bond and closeness of the sisters, such a treat to see.

Loved how she not wanting to break her heart tells her to go ahead but is burning with jealousy and possessiveness for his wife and is unable to remove that image of Shyam from his head...and the plan e makes to get out it without upsetting her...

But our Khushi is astute and observant, and very intelligent, love how she catches that this is his plan to get out of coming to watch her.

I understand both their reasons and so am glad they talked about it and cleared it. I just love his teasing and his flirting with her.

I love their respect towards other people, their feelings and commitments towards their responsibilities says so much about the way your wrote about them.

Love how she is so concerned about him and love how he makes NK take part in the function so that he can kill two birds with one stone...

Loved how she just knew he had come and loved the way they complete each other with their love and support! Thank you for taking the time out to tell me in detail about what u liked about this TS!

You should write more often, really! I wish I could! I do indulge myself every now n then but if things were in my hand,I would've written about ArShi every,single day!

Originally posted by: indi52

hi smita,Hey Indi!

had fun reading this lovely janmashtami tale. asr and khushi in shades of kanha and radha, very very nice. Thank u so much! I'm glad that u enjoyed reading it!

"aapka kuch nahin ho sakta." 😆 and tat dialogue is lovely

Khushi: Haww! Bade kharaab hain aap!

Arnav: Yeh baat tumse achchhi tarah se kaun samajh saktaa hai?

asr's inventiveness around this feeling and khushi's sweet love, uff. i love that you get to the hearty of asr... BIG thanks for saying that! his respect of people, his need to make khushi understand one shouldn't always give up ones happiness for others. how cutely he makes her promise.

light tale, but lots of insights and touches there. thanks. U're welcome!

Originally posted by: indi52

hey smita,

that should read heart of asr and not hearty of asr. 😆Understood. I am the queen of typos so dont worry!

and don't worry about not reading my fanfiction stuff... read when you can, if you want to... do not treat it as a must. 😳 Of course I want to! I've been a fan of ur writing since r crooner days. And more so since I read those lovely one shots written by u. But its just that AD and esp. college is zaalim & zulmi which is y I'm not left with enough time to read what I want to. i send to a few people, in case they want to read. that's all. I know. Plz keep sending me the links to ur work,irrespective of when I read n reply them. Wouldnt want to miss anything (OS/FF) written by u. 😊