Janmashtami TS:Will he or wont he?*complete* - Page 10

Originally posted by: salooni

you are rockstar di Thanks a lot!

i mean how could you this

there are two meaning of magic for me

one arshi and other your ff Thats really sweet of u! Thank u so much for saying that!

you are rockstar

thanks a lot for making my day

it is awesome

waise what will happened in next jamastami U got the drift!😳

😉

Originally posted by: ..Smita..

Originally posted by: arshifan91

Beautiful story narrated wonderfully 👏

I really appreciate your efforts for writing such a long story and making it interesting and enjoyable by associating it with this adorable couple.

The possessiveness, guilt , regret , love ,trust, care , concern were beautifully blended in the story . Thanks a lot!


The way she asks his permission to participate in the competition and lets him know the reason for her hesitation in dancing to that song were wonderfully narrated. Instead of behaving in the typical ASR way , he gives a thought to his wife's wishes and accepts it inspite of burning inside. I feel its so real. Any person would have felt that anger and possessiveness if his wife praises / feels good about his enemy . Shyam is worse than an enemy here !! I just love this Arnav. But true to his ASR style he thinks of taking refuge by tagging Aman along with him but alas got easily caught.

I just loved the scene where Khushi found out that Aman is lying and her reasons were bang on. So KKGSR bhi ASR ke saath rehne mein uske dimaag aur bhi shatir banjayegee (PS: I dont know hindi that well, so sorry for any mistakes in the above sentence😛). This also shows how long they have come in their relationship and how beautifully they understand and compliment each other😊

Her explanations to his feelings and the promise she takes from him were beautifully written. I just loved the scene where she messaged him about his responsibilities to make Aarav drink milk and her reasoning for him to sleep that late.

His guilt that he had again hurt her unintentionally and his jest to make the wrong right are really to be appreciated. This shows her effect on him and the changes which she had brought out in him unknowingly.

The scenes at Khushi's house were so enjoyable like his concern for her in making Aarav carry the tiffin knowing that she would not have eaten anything , her perception that he is around her , his reasoning as to why he hid himself from her, their confessions, his determination in making her realise that she is the most important person in his life and asking her to also think and care about herself first . These scenes were written so vividly that i was able to feel as if i was witnessing the same in front of me.

Their nok-jhoks, sharats , teasings , blushing and their reminiscing of the moments they spent together through the lines of the song were really cute and adorable.His dislike in dance but at the same time conveying his feelings for her through the song which he made NK dance was very nice. I felt Khushi is really sanki when she told him about how she wants the bed to be decorated and how she dislikes artificial flowers without any blushing or hesitation as if i it were a daily ritual 😆This was sucha lovely summary of the TS in ur own words! Loved every word that u wrote! Thank u so much for telling me in detail about what u liked in this TS!

I hope their deal is on with regard to their kisses and their suhagraat on Janmashtami 😳☺️ Yup! Its on! and i am also waiting for the agle saal to witness the same !!!😉😛


Thanks for writing such a wonderful story and i enjoyed my time in reading it 😃Thanks for taking the time out to read it n then posting sucha long n lovely comment about it!

Happy Janmashtami 😊 (I know its belated but better late than never !!😛)Thank u so much!

Originally posted by: ..Smita..

^^^ me in bold.