11/11//2013 - ARHI FF:MASTERCLASS THREAD10: Chapt89 pg114..note pg131 - Page 72

Originally posted by: Maz786

WHAT THE!!!!?? Of all the things that I imagined along with Akash (about her secret) this certainly wasn't it. WOW!! You really threw a spanner in works so to speak. That wad amazing. I have to say, I'm used to seeing this type of chemistry only with Arnav and Khushi and maybe that's why I never really pay much attention to Akash and Payal, but you have really made sit up straight and pay attention this time. Loved it and can't wait to find out how on earth she was married and also managed to kill her husband, but I hope the next chapter is on Arnav and Khushi. Don't want to start having ARSHI withdrawals😉

Originally posted by: rulama

Just loved it Naina.

Akash got hit where he was most vulnerable and it did hit him hard.

Wonder what he will do next. Make her come out with everything?

Waiting for the next.

Originally posted by: gifttag

Awesome chapter.
Did't see that coming..she could't have killed her husband, it must have been certain circumstances and she has some guilt and blames herself..wait for all to the facts to revel itself before I judge her..so I reserve my judgement on Payal.

Akash bitwa has it bad..and attraction or love has turned him into a caveman who will act in a alpha male manner to get the reaction out of Payal and boy did he get the reaction out but only problem is not the reaction he was expecting.

Loved the whole interaction between Akash and Payal..wonderfully written.
Please continue.
Thanks for the PM.

I will be inactive on IF for a month as I am travelling. Pls font take me out of your PM list.

Originally posted by: varsha2KD

My expression after reading this chappy 😲 😲 😲

You are an amazing writer... first you gave us the Honeymoon track with all lovey dovey Arshi and now the dark side of Payask... mindblowing 👏

Ok so this update for Aakash n Payal...Missed this couple...

Akash's behaviour terrified me... what an outburst... he was super scary... guy got a lot of shades to his character... not like our lovey dovey Akash from IPKKND... loved the change in character 😃

But super surprising revelation about Payal's past...Never knew there was some sort of tragedy behind Payal's behaviour. She was married and killed her husband 😲 😲 😲

Cliff hanger...why or why 😭 Eagerly Waiting

Originally posted by: vaishiksg

ha ha this is what i wrote... ??? 😲 i guess i got a bit rude.. trust me i didn't intend too...

Lols to be honest , i was really pissed off that day so i kind of took it out here.. I wasn't liking anything.. True i wanted the honeymoon period to be over for the said reason but not because i didnt like it but because it was just manipulating my mind- you know like raising the expectation bars for the person whosoever is written i my destiny (lucky guy though..:p )...

Originally posted by: Mina420

oh my god, there you find an update and expect some Arhi moments and find this...🤢. Payal killed her husband... how, when, why, whom... gosh, this was so unexpected that it will have to give it time to sink in.
Wonderful, though, that you are giving this story another side. This way we have something else then purely Arhi, giving the story a nice variety...
brilliant. Loved it, am eager to know more about Payal now...

Originally posted by: deeswarna

happy to see that you are back with akash and payal track, loved the amount of importance u gave them. i felt that they were kind of sidelined in the show and its nice to see them in this kind of avatar with a personality of their own other than in relation to their siblings.

it was a very interesting update and akash truly shocked me with his behavior and payal confession in the end was the icing to the cake for this update!

looking forward to the next part

Originally posted by: _disha_

What the !!! Yeh kya bomb pehka hai !😕

I am sure this is going to be some sort of misunderstanding or accident where Payal blames her self.

But the earlier part of this update before this revelation was just superbly written , never have i loved Akash ever before.

Originally posted by: nerdy_Nisha93

That was really unexpected! I was like what the hell? There was no way I could have ever seen that coming. While reading the update all I could think was maybe Payal was manhandled or a victim of sexual assault or some sort of betryal like her boyfriend trying to use her or something along the line. But I could never ever think of her being married and killing her husband. I seriously can't wait for the whole truth to come out.

There is sth I must say. I have read so many different Akash and Payal versions on IF and some of them I have really loved. But none of them has intrigued me this much.

While there is this curiosity regarding Payal's past, at the same time you have surprised me with how well has Akash come to know her and the way he has handled her by forcing her to tell the truth and yet assuring that he is there for her. There is more to come and I can't seem to wait.

Originally posted by: smile1412

Ah... The much elusive Akash Payal story... I dont know if I'm commenting for a second time... I forgot if I commented after I read the update!!!! Read the update again!!!!! Lovely ... What's with Payal's past? Need to know soon... So update sooner !;) awesome one naina!!!