11/11//2013 - ARHI FF:MASTERCLASS THREAD10: Chapt89 pg114..note pg131 - Page 70

Originally posted by: badfaith4u

😲

You are always bringing twists and turns
Payal is married? Killed her husband?
I wonder what she means by the last sentence...🤔

Originally posted by: DancingDiva.

Naina! We meet after a while!

Thansk for this update! Was waitign for thr PaYash part to unfold!

Locely work :)

Originally posted by: dumas

bloody hell she wanted control because it was snatch from her what the hell did her dead husband do to her that has her so scared and what a kiss dam that was hot loved their chemistry and they are so toxic awesome update thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: luvraj4ever

loved the update...payal is married??????how?when?why???? and she killed her husband too?????? now thats a twist...i like this aakash her...who is truly a raizada not some spineless creature...he is another ASR for sure..

missed arnav and khushi in this chapter...well that's obvious isn't it????hehe

cant wait to read more

continue soon

Originally posted by: manreet_gill

Wow Naina,

What do I say to this chapter! Like Akash I too feel dumbfounded and speechless, sweet Miss Gupta killed her husband? But this is your story, twists and turns greet me at every interval so I won't make too many predictions yet, as more is to come, this is the only certainty I know in the chaos of emotions you evoke in me with every update!

Every character has a justified journey in this story which is why it is one of my favourite FFs you've presented a gripping literary drama here Naina which many wish to create but fail to do so. Hats off lady, what a drama!!

Manreet :) x

Originally posted by: Japonica

Wow, that was a dramatic update.

We've been through one relationship which has reached its sublime heights, though at breakneck speed, mostly because it was a fairly smooth path to get to the top. And that is where they will hopefully stay there despite occssionally scaring themselves that they might topple over or push one or the other teetering over the edge, but they won't; they'll pull each other back,

We're now at the start of another one. This time the climb is a bit steep and is further complicated by the fact this has to be done with one arm tied behind given the revelations that Payal has thrown at Akash. But hey, a challenge makes it more exciting.

This is a more interesting couple than the other- they're like two majestic stags, matched in their strength and power, unlike Khushi and Arnav who complement each other beautifully in a yin-yang kind of way. So let's see what they are going to do with their awareness of each other and the reality of Payal's life.
Bring it on Warrior Princess, you shine best in a battle!😃

Originally posted by: mugdha1029

WOHHH...I ...I mean I...I really didn't think about this twist at all...I mean...not at all...my god...this story is becoming more and more interesting with each passing update...what the naina...you do have superb brain with superb story creating ability...wow...loved it...very much waiting for the next one...

Originally posted by: chavvi16

WHAT THE
wait she was married and she killed her hubby
what was that all about
this is what she had kept hidden
nope never in my wildest of wild dreams or imaginations i thought of this to be the reason
hain how where when why what who
so many questions
talk about throwing a twist like this
all was calm and peaceful when it started
well as calm and peaceful it can be with payash
and then baam we have this
how did ya think about it
but so glad that you did

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Superb update👏

I was wondering about Payal and Akash and here they come with a big bang!!!

Akash like his brother Arnav has a quality to get to know person in one look. That's why he instantly got aware that Payal was hiding something. And somehow he got successful knowing the truth but the truth was very shocking.

Excitingly waiting for the next update to read Payal story.