11/11//2013 - ARHI FF:MASTERCLASS THREAD10: Chapt89 pg114..note pg131 - Page 71

Originally posted by: sman

Naina..u r online, new update??????

Originally posted by: Kritianya

sry dear was not able to comment on last few updates
they were superb
can't wait for next one indeed

Originally posted by: ASRandKKGSRFan

Hey!

Thanks for the PM.

Hmmm ... well that was a surprise wasn't it ...

I mean I can understand why Aakash is wanting to know why Payal is behaving ... strange ... I mean he sees through her exterior ... there is more to her than meets the eye ... especially to him ...

As for Payal ... her confession ... I'm stumped! Like really?! I look forward to reading how this unravels ... I couldn't have guessed something like this was to happen even if I'd tried.

Originally posted by: beauty14

HOLY SHIT! OH MY FLIPPING GOSH!😲

How did the story go from sweet-lovey dove honeymoon to NOW THIS! 😵

But trust me, I am not complaining at all!😊 However do have one complaint though!

WHY IN THE WORLD DID YOU EVEN BOTHER ENDING THE CHAPTER? 😡

Like you make us so greedy, even though we just got an update, I want you to give us about 50 million more updates now! 😆

Don't get to overwhelmed I know it's not possible for that many updates in a day, so I will give you about two-three weeks!🤣

What a freaking amazing update, Naina! 👏

Seriously, as I was reading not a moment went by where there wasn't any excitement to know what will happen next or what Akash or Payal will say or do!😃

HOW DO YOU MANAGE TO BE SO AMAZING AT THIS?🤓

Loved loved loved the update!❤️

Man, I have always loved Arnav, and will continue to, because afterall who couldn't love him, but seriously in your story, from the chapter I just read you made Akash sound so damn hot himself! I have seriously never read any story where I have seen an Akash or Payal like this, and I am totally in love with the characters, this AMAZING STORY and YOUR FREAKING AMAZING WRITING!😳

Seriously, I think while I was reading this I could picture everything in my head, and alongside this I could see the visual of something like this happening with Arnav and Khushi!😊

Each character in this story seems to have several layers, which is what keeps on bringing me back to this wonderful story!😃

The way every person's thoughts and emotions are described, it's just beautiful Naina!⭐️

Akash also seems to have more to what he shows to the world! And the shocker with Payal! Damn, woman you sure do know how to give people heart attacks! 😆

Seriously, why did Payal kill her husband? Was he abusive or something? Or was it by an accident? And if she did how is she not in jail? So many questions, yet no answers!! 😕

Please do update soon! You can't leave us hanging like this!😛

Hehe..forgot to say..Thanks for the pm!

P.S.

I hope my comment meet's the requirement of being long!😆

Originally posted by: slakhani

Thank you for bringing them back and what a way to bring them back. You blew me away with the last bit in the chapter. I almost missed my stop while coming back from work. I can't wait for the next update.

Thank you so much for a lovely update:)

Originally posted by: S003

3 words...

I HATE YOU!!!!

That's all!!!!

You know I've been waiting for the Payal and Akash chapter forever, and now I'm waiting once more.

Why why do you do this to your faithful fans why!

Amazing chapter, but I wish they weren't all so disconnected, like only Arnav and Khushi or only Payal and Akash, but I can live with it.

Love Always

S