ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 5 - COMPLETED

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45678

@45678

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Posted: 12 years ago

#471

omg. such a amazing update. loved it. don't have words to describe it. I can only say my heart is beating at the faster rate

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819504

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Posted: 12 years ago

#472

--unres--

What should i say abt ur update deepthi ji...

Ur maha update was indeed maha update bt i could'nt get enough of ur writng ji...
While readng it i want it more nd more..lol...;-)
if it is wat u wrote in rush then wat u would have write on slwly slwly...:-)

it was a beautiful nd sweet update dr...
I loved every bit of it...

kaka nd khush cnvo abt pooja preparatn...
Khush Laddoo makng...
Payal nd khush cnvo...
Arnav too kept fast fr her only..hw cute..:-)
tea time again lips droolng procss arnav teasng her more aftr listening to her blaberng...takng smal smal sips...

the song selectn was superb dr
arthi time was emotional...:-(
nd then dinnr part was amazing kaka
tellng the mistry behind the ladoos...khush signalng him nt to say...
Nd those kisses hayee...:-)
lovd it...

Thanx fr the pm ji...nd wil be waitng fr next...
Cntinue soon...:-)

Edited by Asiyamajeed - 12 years ago

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shubhi15

@shubhi15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#473

Superb update
Loved it...
Adult diapers... 😆
Khushi is fullon crazy..
Also loving this romantic Arnav...

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rini_kat

@rini_kat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#474

Amazing threesome updates😃...Its so cute and amazing.I don't have any words...Slowly two friends r returning to their comfort zones...😊

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pooja_sanu

@pooja_sanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#475

it was breathtaking!!!

i was al the way was laughing or u can say smiling reading ur mahaupdate!!!

surely it is a mahaupdate!!!

loved it!!!

i wish this changes the diff btw them!!!

thx for the pm!!!

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@06Pallavi_Arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#476

Awww wat an update!:D
i was so engrossed reading it Di zat wen it finished,i kept on scrollin lookin for more!:P

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beenish

@beenish248

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#477

wow wow wow man u left me speechles ...

one word marvelous update ...

love arnav teasing ..

eagerly waiting

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Diya Ganguly

@Careless_Artist

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Posted: 12 years ago

#478

Wow maha dhamaka update!! Janmasthami would be memorable for Arshi forever... Little sharing things, stop running away from that we think will give us pain, care and concern, little secret revealing of childhood and last but not the least THEIR FIRST KISS.. Really an awesome update... Ab sirf thora sa realisation baking hai.. Waiting for next..

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l.savitree

@l.savitree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#479

That was cute,sweet lovely maha update👏❤️🤗 Just perfect & well written...i love it love their cute lovey dovey , teasing moment the song & scene in the mandir was emotional

thanks for pm & continue soon