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Posted: 12 years ago
It was awesome!You write so descriptively that it seems i am watching a movie. You make all the characters and scenes come alive! Thank you for this lovely story!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
🤗awe deeps ur maha update is maha in emotions and sweetness :)
simply too too too too too good,loved it :)
starting from khushi and kaka talks on pooja...the way he remembered how arnav mom used to do that...and he praised khushi for keeping the tradition...it was awesome...
payal and khushi convo was damn sweet...loved there friendship...aik k saath aik free...hahaha...that was super...i think payal and akash wedding will going to be fun to watch...hmm as arnav and khushi will be there too with them...i am eagerly waiting for that now ;)
so finally his hospital visit secret is no more secret...and this news makes khushi realized that indeed he cares abt her...:)...awe and that sweet tu ho hi was superb :)...really khushi needs to do phd...hahaha

u have brought hospital news and ladoos well in time back in story :)

finally she remembered the ladoos...and garima was fun..when she said abh kiya musibaat agaye...hehehe...she knows how crazy her daughter is...
that minute details from making bun of her hair to taking care of bundi's so that they would not burn was great yar...ur decription is always fabulous :)

hyee he was missing her remembering their morning encounter...hehehe...and ur use of " uff" and his "pagal" ...was like wah wah wah :)...used very appropriately :)

her ap outside and tum in privacy is really sweet deeps...the way arnav teased her ...she blushing and closing her eyes..that all seemed so romantic yar

awe there question and answering on fast ...for u ...for me...for our home...for our family is latest tag line...i swear ...it stoled the show ....hats off for writing such a beautiful convo btw the two :)❤️

u know u r in habit of taking the breathe in every update...earlier mango juice was all on nerves and now even u r making me crazy on a cup of tea...hyeee deeps...ok back to earth...yaaar arnav is so clever ...he understood her so well...that after hearing her blabbering...he enjoyed teasing her...he knows that she is drooling over his lips...like us ;)😳

that all there pool side talk ...her craziness...really khushi diapers...lol...omg deeps...ur sense of humour in this whole scene was not at all from this world ...u have written it in such a beautiful way...that really thought of khushi along with arnav that she is crazy...love u for writing it superb...that email talks...her mehndi scene...his uneasiness ...her understanding of his pain after seeing mehndi...wow...and ...just simply wow..


last part was having such a powerful impact that i just wanted to keep quiet and enjoy and absorb each and every bit of it...wow,loved it deeps...her arthi ...his understanding of her pain in it...the way he acknowledged her efforts for him...kaka u r awesome man...love u for telling arnav that ladoo story...which results in such a perfect end to such a perfect maha update...hyee if u have done it as its tradition then I guess even I have to follow the tradition
...ufff and wow...
two kisses ...hyeee 🤗❤️...love u deeps...just hats of writing every emotion ,pain,happiness,cute moments,craziness all soo so so beautifully...
sorry i know bauhat saar khaya but kiya keron control nahi horaha tha after reading the update...i just wanted to ask like in arnav style
"tum theek ho"????????? 🤗



Edited by lalarukh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh so beautiful update...thanks dear...continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Phew dis is wat i say a perfct maha update..! 👍🏼

khushi,dis girl truly amazes me..!

She has changed her evrythng nly so dat she can bring arnav out of d cacoon in which he is shielding himslf since past 8 yrs..!

Khushi was all set to make d janmastami pooja perfct nd for dat she was actually running around d house wit kaka nd den finally wen she realised dat ladoo has been still prepared nd so as usual her mom came up to her rescue nd she prepared d ladoo for her hubby..!

But dat part where she called up payal nd asked abt arnav checking her in d hospital or not nd getting a positive reply nd arnav being in tension made khushi actually did a happy dance wit a prominent blush on her face..!

Nd finally aftr hearing d whole story she noted mentally dat her hubby is indeed cute..!

Nd there at AR sumone is getting all lost in his wife's thoughts 😉

her blush,her nervousness nd his proximity actually is bothering her nd dis only thought is making him feel happy nd content..!

Nd finally wen he got back to home khushi asked him why he is back early nd he started to tease her..!

Cute scene

Den khushi calling him "AAP" making arnav realise dar she alwaz used to do dis nly wen they r in front of anyone,awww now dis is sweet..!

Loved d tea scene where she brought d cup of tea for him nd seeing him sipping it she again started to gaze at his lips nd was all talking to herslf nd wen arnav nnoticed it he started wit his teasing nd finally wen he could not control more he burst out laughing making khushi hugging him tightly wit tears in her eyes nd arnav could easily understnd why she is in tears..!

Aftr sooo many years she is seeing arnav smkiing all freely nd d soul reason behind dis is nly nd nly she..!

Nd den d stomach growling sound,oh goddd dat was hilarious how khushi was trying to hear it 🤣

nd finally khushi made him accpt dat he is also fasting just like her for her nd their family..!

Awww nothng can get better dan dis

den their convo abt khushi's life before marriage nd arnav trying to knw how she has been in these 8 years deffo made him realise dat khushi has entirely changed her life style nly for him which indeed made him feel good..!

Diaper scene,goddd hilarious 🤣

oh goddd i was laughing throughout d whole convo,i mean arnav singh raizada in diapers,holysh*t 🤣

den khushi's question abt him answering to her mails nd arnav's reply,all in all cute nd mostly where to make her happy he said her he would have rplied actually telling her not to distrb him 😆

nd den her confession abt her loving his signature making him blush wit her compleament..!

Nd den asking her to sign his name nd getting stunned how she can make it mostly perfct nd den holding her hand nd making her sign his own signature letting her heart go dhakdhak wit his close proximity..!

Nd arnav watching her continuously seeing how much affected she has got..!

N but d mehendi scene gave a glance of khushi not getting out of her past but i thnk she is already over it but it will take tym for her to realise dat she is totally out of it..!

But witout xtending their convo he let her go nd den d pooja nd d song fitted perfctly wit d situation nd i loved it how arnav just got dragged away to d mandir..!

Beautiful scene ❤️

nd den kaka narrating d whole childhood story making khushi blush profusely nd arnav as usual started to smirk seeing khushi's helpless state..!

Den finally their kiss,their first kiss,hayeee

i loved it how arnav ordered her to open her mouth nd she obediently did it nd finally aftr feeding her nd eating himslf he kissed her saying dat she has got watever she has wanted from him by giving her ladoo..!

Nd d way she was possessively holding him as if he nly belongs to her nd den her running away shyly pushing him was simply beautiful ❤️

fantastic update 👍🏼

loved it to bits ❤️
Edited by ara_000 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was an awesome MAHA update
Just loved reading it especially part 4
But I'm confused about one thing that why did she hv NK's initials in her mehendi design or maybe I missed out on something
Pls continue soon
Thanx
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Posted: 12 years ago
phew...that was one long update ...thank u so much 🤗
khushi followed the tradition and kept everything according to it...
kaka was over whelmed as things are changing in the house and khushi s doing it...
he so loves teasing her...
she was so dam nervous around him all the time...
totally in love with the conversation they had...
lots of things they could share and open up to each other...
khushi was sure arnav will come to the pooja and she did...
its a beautiful song she sang and arnav was mesmerized by her and her voice...
he couldn t take his eyes off her when she got dressed up...
he kept the fast for them...that was amazing part...
he did come and that moment the way she held him and was there with him understanding everything...it was dam emotional...
kaka revealed one of her secrets...
n khushi did get the reward to it 😉
even that small gesture between them makes me blush ☺️
khushi s getting a beautiful and positive change in his life..thats the reason inspite of nk s name he hid his disappointment...
n even didnt let her get disappointed when his answer was no for the reply to mails...
payal and khushi moment was fun...
loving the change and happiness both are surrounded with...touch wood...
superb update 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
update the next soon dear😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KtotheM

That was an awesome MAHA update
Just loved reading it especially part 4
But I'm confused about one thing that why did she hv NK's initials in her mehendi design or maybe I missed out on something
Pls continue soon
Thanx


At the time of marriage she was in love with NK not Arnav She didnt wanted any of those rituals at that time. Since she was in love with NK she had his initials painted. I didnt mention it at the time of marriage as I didnt wanna reveal what she had in her hands.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hayeee superb cute upd yaar ! Last part is damn cute. ! Arnie is bckkk ... Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kudos 2ur mahaupdate 👏 totally entertaining n mindblowing!!!!!! Jst like Masala movie flick...emotional,romantic n hilarious!!!! 😆 loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Khushi is so adorable and funny too. Adult diapers? 😆 Bechara Arnav.

Oo, Khushi can do Arnav's signature quite accurately... do I sense trouble in the future or is my mind working over-actively here? 😆

They are slowly getting to understand each other and Arnav is being very patient. I would have thought that he would have flipped after seeing NK's initial on Khushi's palm. He's showing maturity in this case.

The ladoo story was so cute. Arnav doesn't leave an opportunity to tease Khushi. Ah it's so heartwarming to read about the progress between the two of them. I hope they realise their love for each other soon.

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