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Posted: 12 years ago
Deep di.. My REs
Unres😃

Khushi is so stubborn.. She has done all the arrangements for Pooja just like Arnav's mother used to Do..

She even learnt to make the Motichoor Ladoo

She called Komal MAA

The way Khushi calls Arnav AAP in front of others

the small Discussion ArShi Had at the door...
DECIDE KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA SINGH RAIZADA, What u want me to do

Arnav Drinking Tea.. n Khushi's thoughts

Khushi is incredible

She was Thinking of Summer collection but was looking at his lips
HAYE HAYE

Arnav is another

For first time he caught her n was enjoying her blushing

Arnav is indeed Naughty...

3D floral prints on the LIPS

Seriously

Khushi's eyes Tear... Seeing him laughing like that after all these years...

How much clumsy funny this girl is that much supportive she is


Khushi trying to bend to his tummy to listen the growling sound

Hahaha Di really after a emo Part.. u just cracked me up

Arnav oh my dear.. He was really not ready to take meal n waited for 3 more hours for Khushi

For Every Quest Khushi asked...
His reaction n Response..
Made my day

Arnav's trying to Knw about Khushi's Daily Activities n She protesting as he doesnt share anything with her..
Nice Friendly Convo
Deep Di...
U always know how to lighten up the situation bringin Khushi's innocence with her pervert mind

Arnav asking about Mails n She honestly accepting him that she was missing him...

i was thinking then how come she always had time For that Stupid NK

Arnav's Response TSK with a negative NOD
HAYE... i was going all Dreamy n RED reading it


The Pooja... Khushi Song

The way her voice Reached Arnav Shaking him up

U nailed It Deep Di

I was like

Deep Di u never fail to Push me to this state

U r MEAN DEEP DI

the last part... Kaka explaining about their Childhood Nautanki's

Khushi would have gone digging into Underground hearing all those

Ahh...
Romance

He did all these to make it just like their Childhood...

Nice DEAL they had

Laddu Lao Jhappi n pappi pao

aww Arnav is changing.. i mean Arnie buried inside him is returning


Loved the Maha Update..
Sorry for Late Unres... i'm held with Coll works DI.. they are eating up all my time

But loved the Update

Love you


Edited by MeenuArshiCrazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 1

Khushi really understands Arnav...her conversation with kaka proves that...
So from Payal she comes to know about Arnav's visit to hospital...loved their convo...
WOW she made moti choor ladoo for prashad...with her mom's instruction...
haye haye Arnav babua missed her in office today...
I just love ArShi nokh-jhok...kitnaa pareshan karte hai woh humari Khushi ko...


Part 2

Gosh...his lips again...yeh ladki toh gone case hai...saath mei humara bhi haal kharap hoti hai yeh sab sochke...and 3D floral prints on his lips...OMG...
and growling noise...I am telling u Di...Khushi is mad...
WOW...Arnav too had fast...for him...her...their home...their family...wow...


Part 3

Diaper talk...like really...maine kaha tha Di,yeh ladki pagal hai...
ArShi convo was really nice...about his signature...when he guided her to sign his name...haayyee...
they talked about those emails...i really wanted that...
her throwing water to him,and his wiping his face by her pallu...arre wah...
then NK's name in her mehendi...I really loved how maturely he handled the situation...


Part 4

Arnav's thinking about their relation...he actually notices everything,hai naa...
then "Ab teek hain" moment...wow...
during the pooja,though he didnt come first,but usse aana toh hua e naa...
And the prashad...kaka ko itnaa bada thanks...for telling them their childhood story...
Finally laddoo khilana...and khana...how he praised her...wow...
and then kiss...woh bhi both cheeks pe...haayyee...
aise mein bhi yeh Raizada tease karna nahi chhodenge right...

D i i i i i i i . . . . . THANK YOU...for itnaaa bada mahaaa update...its awesome...thanks for the pm...sorry I'm late again...
Edited by nishu_shorna - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful awesome lovely..

maha updates...


continue soon
Edited by HUMII10592 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally I get 2 read wat I ws longing 2 read d whole day...

Arnav was missing Khushi at d office n her presence... Awww... 😉

Aap n Tum wala part was beautiful... I luv dere d way dey tease each other... 😆

3D floral prints on LIPS???? 😲

Ye ladki mujhe AUR PERVERT bana k chodegi... As it is my mind is GUTTER... 😳

Arnav fasted wid her???? Thts so cuteee... 😃

Diaper talk, Seriously???? ☺️

I luvd d song Khushi sung implying its meaning on Arnav... 😃

Motichoor k laddu ki mystery solved... I'm so happy... 😃

I cn imagine hw flustered mst b Khushi... 😳

Wen Arnav tuk her 2 d pool area n switched off lights my heart was all going Dhak- Dhak wildly... ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Waise being a Besharam Bhukkad I was expecting more bt abhi k liye Cheek wala kiss se kaam chala lungi mai... 😳

Bt still I need more ACTION btwn dem... ☺️ 😳

I knw, its been really difficult 4 dem 2 keep dere hands off each other bt I WANT MORE... 😳😳😳

Luvd each n every part n detailing of d update... 😃

HATS OFF DI... Muahhh... 👏 👏 👏

Waise, Nxt update ab kab milega???
Edited by asthagarwal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Eagerly Waiting for the Maha Update ⭐️

Update Soon...
Edited by divyashree449 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Pooja

Mil gya mil mjhe update mil gya 🤗

I m the gundi of ur thread rofl 🤣

Btw dii awesome update mjhe toh laga I wnt get it today as bcz dere were no sign of ur frm past three days but u surprised me and I love yo for that[:'(]

Part 1

I love the kaka and khushi talk it was so pleasant to she dere love towards arnav for what he is and how he is changing

I loved how khushi tried to justify well actually nt tried but actually sad with confident that he is nt against it bt running away frm the rituals bcz of his past I m glad she is understanding him in some ways atleast ..

Soo called payal to know about her wedding incidents and wanna know did arnav visited her loll impatient girl she is and cleared her doubt after her offie encounter wid him still I appreciate it

Moti choor ladoo now fnally she remembered it haina dii u made her remember loll

She prepared moti choor ladoo for him omg omg omg wow how does it tasted dii

Awww my arnav is missing khushi rofl he Is gettinghabituated to her presence everywhere nw like I said thinking of her is his permanent job nw he called her and she ignored wat the for booth ..!!

She didn't attend his call bcz he would ditract her frm making ladoo I mean seriously girl grw up

Hayee dere lovey dovey talks and his teasing her was cherry on the cake

Bichara confused arnav wen he heard her calling him aap

Part 2

U think u r smart haan

Dis was short update

U did ramanchi

Poor khushi and her guttery thoughts she kept mumbling and there arnav and heard everything woahhh dats calld luck

Wat a trick to worse her situation loved it to the core dii I love u for dis more and more and more

Summer collection seriously 🤣

Poor arnav hahahaha cnt stop laughing diii 😛

I was actually happy seeing laugh on the couple faces 😊

She came to knw he kept fast ohh how easily arnav get trapped in khushi tricks 😉

I pity him for dis he is rude for the whole world but cnt hide himself infrnt of her 😊

Part 3

Ooo arnav asking about her before being married schedule really raizada dnt have talks to do I guess nowadays 🤓

And she kept on telling him about her waking and ull day routine rofl dats heights nw ahhahaha

You are an loving encyclopedia seriously ahahahahahahah 😉

Peed in her pants really dii yehhh kab hua mjhe q nai pata 🤣

Ohh how loved there diapers talks bcz I m ryt dese raizada dnt have talks nw and specially arnav loll yaa actually he is bad strting convos loll 😆

Now the much awaited question arrived THE MAILS wich was sent by khushi and was unintentionally ignored 😔

How he kept her feeling and didn't hurt her by saying truth and took ans frm her also I seriously had tears wile reading it

Copying mr raizada signature is a tough job wich khushi did almost perfectly I m shocked well dere nthn to be shocked I guess bcz she is mrs raizada

She loved his signature well I loved the mann himself

Urgghh again nk name

But I m glad he didn't reflect his hrt to her but she cught him and the way he avoided nk name was awesome trick hahahah

U know I was happy reading the word Pooja dere although I knw wat intention it was used for but still I was happy to it

I so wanted there love marriage wich he was thinking of a content marriage so dey would also enjoy dere life as a normal couple par destiny holded smthng else for them

Ah there sensing power wich I was always admire dat how does anyone knows who is in love senses the presence of the other one

She was waiting for compliment and as usual arnav teased her by just opening her bun and said ab theek hai

Bus itna hi loll she said loud enough to hear everyone I guess

He denied and she didn't pressurized to him knowing that he will come dats called pure trust

She went and answered kaka to start and he will come and did he camr the arti she choosed made him come down

The feeling that songs delivered to both of them was really something required at the atmosphere

She saw him standing on the stairs she made her way and bought him infrnt of the idol was really sweet dii

But the sweet past of him taking over his bitter memories doesn't allow him to bow down infrnt of god

Kaka revealed the ladoos story to arnav also loll I was so enjoying reading this dii

He made her stand dere and saw her blushing and red face how cute of him mannn I m falling for him every second ufff kya kar diya iss barun ne mjh par

He teasing her again urrggh not so done dii bichari khushi kab tk patience rakhegi

I wnt say for last parts bcz I was blushing deeply reading it

Was awesome I love the romance and arnav kiss and hugs wich he gave for the ladoos to khushi

He teased her again seeing her heavy breathing at there closeness and still he didn't kiss her y damnit

But dnt think u r left

Did ramanchi

Pheww almost 1000 words itna toh update par v nai ata mjhe likhna jitna yahan likhi hu

Edited by asthagarwal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 1...
she is making ladoo for him just as his mom used to make for him..
she is doing her best.. she came to know arnav visited to hospital to see her.. lets see what she do now...
waiting for more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update so cute loved how she called her mom to find out how to make the ladood for him for the prayers socute loved how his lips are distracting her so cute loved when she said I was just thinking of introducing 3D floral prints on the LIPS i could not stop laughing asr chocking on the tea poor arnav loved it so cute and when she hugged him and his stomach was making noise so cute when she went down to listen to his stomach poor arnav and him seeing nk in her menhidi he was disappointed but understood loved how he was teasing her so cute and then the best was kaka told him about the story of the laddos and how she used to steal it just to get hugs and kisses from him loved it loved the update beautifully done thanks for the pm




Edited by dumas - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
4updates!!
OMGGG!!
Its maaahhhaaa update ;)
Love the parts!!
khushi is crazy!
she prepared laddos for the bhog and specially for Arnav..
awww..so sweet of her!!
she gets affected by his lips :P
she is hell of a crazy woman :D
I was just thinking of introducing 3D floral prints on the LIPS
@bold I can't stop laughing at her statement !! 🤣
poor Arnav the way she was bending down and tried to listen to the noise his stomach was making made him embarrass 😛
m happy to see him coming out his shell..
love the hug!! <3
I m amazed to see how Arnav hid his disappointment wen he saw NK's initials on her palm!
he's affected deep down but chooses to remain silent..
I love it wen he teases her so much..
and khushi's blush makes me smile sometimes :D
Arnav was smitten by her beauty .. haayyeee RAIZADA ;)
khushi expected him to compliment her but he was loves teasing her..
finally Arnav came to the pooja madir and did the pooja!!
my eyes welled up reading that part..
I know its difficult for him to do all this..
but he didn't disappoint khushi..
awww..kaka told him the story behind the ladoos :D
and he got a chance to tease her more!!
I love the way he make her eat the laddo!!
and TBH I was waiting for him to kiss her..
I waited for it sooo long ;)
the part4 is my favourite ;)
Edited by tushi0310 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsm update
loved it hiw khushi celebrated d festival..
ladoo se lekar Pooja tk...
but i didn't get it if khushi
don't love nk now then y she is writes
his name😕
but otherwise update ws awsm..
aww..arnav kissed her that ws cute
nd romantic
loved d update
Edited by flutterlashes - 12 years ago

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