ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 5 - COMPLETED - Page 50

Originally posted by: lalarukh

🤗awe deeps ur maha update is maha in emotions and sweetness :)

simply too too too too too good,loved it :)

starting from khushi and kaka talks on pooja...the way he remembered how arnav mom used to do that...and he praised khushi for keeping the tradition...it was awesome...

payal and khushi convo was damn sweet...loved there friendship...aik k saath aik free...hahaha...that was super...i think payal and akash wedding will going to be fun to watch...hmm as arnav and khushi will be there too with them...i am eagerly waiting for that now ;)

so finally his hospital visit secret is no more secret...and this news makes khushi realized that indeed he cares abt her...:)...awe and that sweet tu ho hi was superb :)...really khushi needs to do phd...hahaha

u have brought hospital news and ladoos well in time back in story :)

finally she remembered the ladoos...and garima was fun..when she said abh kiya musibaat agaye...hehehe...she knows how crazy her daughter is...

that minute details from making bun of her hair to taking care of bundi's so that they would not burn was great yar...ur decription is always fabulous :)

Zhank you darling 😳

hyee he was missing her remembering their morning encounter...hehehe...and ur use of " uff" and his "pagal" ...was like wah wah wah :)...used very appropriately :)

her ap outside and tum in privacy is really sweet deeps...the way arnav teased her ...she blushing and closing her eyes..that all seemed so romantic yar

awe there question and answering on fast ...for u ...for me...for our home...for our family is latest tag line...i swear ...it stoled the show ....hats off for writing such a beautiful convo btw the two :)❤️

Zhank you once again 😳

u know u r in habit of taking the breathe in every update...earlier mango juice was all on nerves and now even u r making me crazy on a cup of tea...hyeee deeps...ok back to earth...yaaar arnav is so clever ...he understood her so well...that after hearing her blabbering...he enjoyed teasing her...he knows that she is drooling over his lips...like us ;)😳

Tell me how many times you checked his lips after reading the update..You pervert...LOL

that all there pool side talk ...her craziness...really khushi diapers...lol...omg deeps...ur sense of humour in this whole scene was not at all from this world ...u have written it in such a beautiful way...that really thought of khushi along with arnav that she is crazy...love u for writing it superb...that email talks...her mehndi scene...his uneasiness ...her understanding of his pain after seeing mehndi...wow...and ...just simply wow..

last part was having such a powerful impact that i just wanted to keep quiet and enjoy and absorb each and every bit of it...wow,loved it deeps...her arthi ...his understanding of her pain in it...the way he acknowledged her efforts for him...kaka u r awesome man...love u for telling arnav that ladoo story...which results in such a perfect end to such a perfect maha update...hyee if u have done it as its tradition then I guess even I have to follow the tradition

...ufff and wow...

two kisses ...hyeee 🤗❤️...

I know you wanted Khushi to initiate kiss. Sorry to disappoint you if I did but she will be the one to initiate the real kiss if you know what I mean...😉😆😆

love u deeps...just hats of writing every emotion ,pain,happiness,cute moments,craziness all soo so so beautifully...

sorry i know bauhat saar khaya but kiya keron control nahi horaha tha after reading the update...i just wanted to ask like in arnav style

"tum theek ho"????????? 🤗

Hmm Main teek hoon yaar. Honestly, I wasnt too impressed with myself with this update. I wrote it in rush rush. I have to be careful next time...Missed you terribly over the weekend.