Ray of sunshine - VIRMAN - SS - part 10

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niki795

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

fabulous update
loved it
diya is such a cutie pie❤️
loved her
continue soon

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NushIsh

@NushIsh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Wow that was such a beautiful update.

It's so sad what they had to go through but they made it and it will take a while to get back to normal but with Virat by her side they will get there.

I especially loved Virat's breakdown, he couldn't bear the thought of her in pain,

And Diya or she's such a cutie, I love all your child characters be it Nikki and Ria and now Diya.

She knew how to get through to her mom and through her Virat learnt it too.

Perfect update, so emotional I'm still having goosebumps.

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

diya really rocked in this update...

her innocence and the way she was talking to her mom was fab..

wonderful dear...

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

virat's breakdown so amazingly written his frustration and dunno what emotions just soo amazingly written Anu you are just sooo wowww at this 👏👏
Diya awww cutie baby she taught her daddy a lesson which actually she shud be taught she just kept on and on with her talking just like manvi manvi ka chota packet and finally made her mom laugh that was such an adorable scene 😃😃
no matter what for a kid her mom is alwayx beautiful alwayx special 😃
update next part soon and thanx for the pm 😃

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luv nishal

@luv_nishal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

it was such an awesum update anu...sucha emotional update...diya I so so so luv.her n her innocence... virat's break down was written amazingly

finally manvi got her normal virat...hehehe...

update soon anu...

an awsum update dis was

Edited by luv_nishal - 12 years ago

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Jannat

@Jannat94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Amazing update Anu
loved it...firstly I felt sad why Manvi behave like that
but later understand
her daughter is so sweet and virat also
love the update
waiting for next part
update soon
and yes Thanx 4 the Pm 😃

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Suarez

@Suarez

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Posted: 12 years ago

#277

Wooohh .. such an emotional update ! Made me teary at first n smile in the end !!
beautifully written !! Virat break down !! OMG !!! Really tear your heart out !
Even i was scared that Diya will scream n be frightened seeing her mom like that ! That wud hv affected not only Diya .. but Maanvi as well !!
But For her .. it's her mom .. no matter what !!! Love how she started the convo as if nothing happened .. that innocence ...heart melting !!
Finally Virat realised Maanvi will see herself through his eyes !
Loved how he kissed her !!!
Beautiful update !!!!! i just loved it !!!
Do continue soon !!
take care !
😊

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GOOGLU

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Posted: 12 years ago

#278

Hey suprb n emotinl update... U make us teary wd ur wndful wrk !!! First wd so much pain n in the last wd diya's cutness n virman's bondng ,,their trust on each other @@@ wndrful wrk !!!!! U show their pain ,,luv,,care,,evry emotion vry well...luv it !!!!!!!!!! Thanks for pm dear...