Ray of sunshine - VIRMAN - SS - part 10

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NourinNiShal

@NourinNiShal

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#261

Ahh! U made me senti! Such a fabulous update! Man! Its indeed so touch to hold tears reading such an emotional yet amazing update..And no wonder..none other than u can bring that feeling in me..ur indeed my writing queen ❤️ Diya and Her momma-daddy! Aww..the update simply made my day

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Faria12345

@Faria12345

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Very overwhelmed by back to back updates!!! Anu is on fire n we r buring hereee wat an update sir Ji!!!
Such an emotional one! I just LOVEEE diya n mannu bonding. It was the tochest moment Eva the virat breakdown n his realization. Just superb!!! Loved each n every line n it's just aaah tooo goood! Grand salute! Plz update soon

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Amazing update Anu!! 👏👏 Very emotional.. The one sided conversation between Diya & Manvi was simply awesome ❤️.. Diya's innocent ignorance did the wonder.. Loved the moment when she called her mother pretty and then kissed her ❤️.. It really touched my heart.. Virat's breakdown was beautifully portrayed.. Manvi avoided him because she couldn't bear the pity and sympathy in his eyes for her.. But Diya showed him the right path.. Loved every bit of it ❤️.. Superbly written ⭐️.. Will be waiting for the next part.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊

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Dina

@-DeeNaa-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#264

Spare me anuuu!! How am I suppose to handle 2 freaking fabulous updates at a go!! Like Pshhu4hubfr4us am speechless! What is Diya?? is she like an angel or something??? OMG her innocence and cuteness! the way she just vegan talking to Manvi! It was so bliss full! And Awww :( the way Virat broke down :( felt bad for him :( but Diya is a Doll! I lovee the ending!! <3 Finally!!! Cant wait for the next part!! :D Ohh n now I cant choose between Diya n Ria!! :((( Damnn they are soo cuteee!!

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deepika03

@deepika03

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

fab update :) n hats off to diya fr acting so bright n normal

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Huma

@Huma0301

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#266

Oh my god
such a beautiful update
there is no better way to describe it
fab!!!
Hope manvi does get home soon
update quick plzzz 😉

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Rachel19

@Rachel19

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#267

Hey awesome update very emotional
Diya is such a adorable and understanding girl
Virats breakdown was really necessary that was so sad
Manvi and diyas reunion was so cute diya is just like manvi non stop talking and virat sleeps in sponge bob pajama and diya hating that was pretty hilarious and diya making manvi laugh just loved it love mother and daughter bond
Now just hoping to get the old manvi back
Thank you so much for the pm
Will be waiting for your next update

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#268

Superb updt once again... Virats breakdown was really fantastically portrayed... loved diyas one sided conversation with manvi... And diya made virat realise how to reach manvi, how to bring her back... awsm awsm awsm... mindblowing... diya totally rocked in this updt... cont soon nd thnks fr th pm...

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hangok

@hangok

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#269

uff you have made my day today, first the update to but i love you and now this,
how can someone be so cute only VIRMAN junior😊 diya you are the ⭐️

owww cant wait to see them happy together again

great work as usual

thanks for pm