Ray of sunshine - VIRMAN - SS - part 10

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Bhabani90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

Back to back updates.. Really feeling great. Wat an emotional and awsum update. Children are always this innocent to look above every fall n fissures. Diya is just a sweetheart and m loving her. Wanna a say it dat its a Boltish update.

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virman_superhit

@virman_superhit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

Another awesome and heart wrenching story from you... 😊👏.. Love it.. Diya is such a sweetheart... N poor Manvi...😭😭.. I hope she comes out of her situation soon with our hero by her side... 😊.. Virat is such a nice husband.. N he broke down.. 😭.. But he got his Manvi back.. 😊.. Awesome update... 👏😊.. Waiting to read more and to know how everything becomes perfect again... 😊

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

Awesome yaar loved it...
I really loved Diya and Manvi scne...
Diya was talking soo much love this kid...
Feel really sorry for Virat... But love Diya realitionship with her parents...
Pleasee continue soon...

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TeriKhamoshiyan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

Yeahh!! Manvi is back!🥳

fabulous update!👍🏼

awww...loved the update especially the mother-daughter conversation, it was so adorable! 😔

Diya is so innocent and sweet, she didn't even realize anything and she was talking to manvi as if nothing happened..and what really was the most beautiful part was when diya told manvi that she was beautiful!❤️

and the part where manvi refused to talk to virat because he felt pity for her was so sad! but then as usual our hero picked it up, and fixed the situation!

please do update soon!😆
can't wait for the next update!😊

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vamps1996

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Posted: 12 years ago

#255

firstly i am so sorry anu for not commenting on this one earlier really very sorry...this is another piece no a masterpiece of your thoughts the concept is real but rare and i must say it takes lots of courage to write something like this being a human being and specially being a girl writing such stuff happening to another is very difficult but you have done it incredibly well the first two updates made me feel so low not having one your parents is the worst feeling ever and moreover seeing the other one carving and missing his partner but staying strong for you is even worse and the little angel has seen it all...at the begganing of manvi's part it gave a feel of addicted but later on it turned out to be so different and so beautiful all the feelings and emotions are perfectly described at the right times in the right ways...reffering to the other woman's part i would say it was also copped up really well by you diya's reactions were obvious and then virat being a father what he did was also not above the line it was all perfect the way he promised her that she wont see that lady anymore was amazing i love the father daughter bond you have used as a highlight in this one...and then all what happened with manvi ahh what can i say about that i think you are well aware of you ability to write such crucial things with so much ease...that was all pathetic but it happens everyone knows all the secret nuclear projects and stuff often ends up destroying the most important person carrying it all out but it is a part of life which is not usually picked up as a topic to write but you did and i really appreciate you for this would again say i know its not easy at all and i can clearly feel how much you must have cried or felt bad writing this but at the end it came out so well that i am proud to be one of your readers like always...and the pity part was really important to mention the way virat took his frustration out was incredibly written his dialogues were so deep and painful " worth reading " diya omigoshhh she is such an angel truly said that manvi was the same mother she had before children doesnt care about these things she got her mother back and that was the most precious thing for her and the complains were so adorable...the pity in virat's eyes was an initial reaction any one would react that way in such a situation but he regained himself all thanks to diya and now he knows how to get he back it wont be easy but he will for sure...thank you so much for writing this one anu :)))))

lots of love❤️

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JESMY

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Posted: 12 years ago

#256

FINALLY VIRMAN BACK.
LOVED DIYA'S TALK.
CONTINUE SOON.

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meghna325

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Posted: 12 years ago

#257

Awesome update... Diya is really an angel who brought the old Manvi back... Waiting for the next update.

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dania6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#258

sooo freaking awsm...loved the update sooo dam Much...gosh this story is sooo cute ...loved the way u wrote every single line...its a dam amazing story...please do continue sooonnn...will wait eagerly :):):):):)

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Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#259

Fabulous Update...!!! Diya is an angle..Virat's rage on seeing her back with her wounds..he thought Diya might burst up seeing her mother n i guess i did mention the same in the previous comment..but her innocent ignorance did bring Maanvi back.for her, her mother is the same..wounds didn't matter but the presence did...she had allot to say and she did...And Virat now knew how to bring her back to life...Simply Nice...Waiting for next Anu..!

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nrithyao

@nrithyao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#260

amazing update
this story is just wonderful
cant stop reading it
diya's talk with maanvi was so cute
loved it
loved how she brought her mom back
waiting eagerly for next part
thanks a lot for the pm

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