Ray of sunshine - VIRMAN - SS - part 10

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pink1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

nice update he was broken down
seeing her in bad condition
daughter mother duo of fab
update soon

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Anaida

@iamanaida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

Anu, I loved every bit of it. Glad you wrote on Virat's breakdown. How he make his sis realise that Diya needs to know about her mom's condition.

I just loved Mother - Daughter conversation. It was awesome. The innocence of the child displayed by Diya. Elders learn alot from children. Loved the way she was complaining about daddy not adding more chips as her mom did.

I found Maanvi not meeting Virat's gaze too good. She must have felt that she now had nothing to offer her husband, etc.

Inshort i loved every bit of it. I must have read this chapter atleast 3 times.

Cant wait for your next update.

Muah

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shaalivirman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

I came back frm my colg...and became...shoked to see this update...😲

thnq sooo much fr updating tis...😊

and the update...speechless...i just luved the emotions of virat manvi and innocent diya...👏

it was sooo heart melting...❤️🤗

awsome awsome...luved it...👏👏👏

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Fairysara

@Fairysara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Oh tht's an amazing update !!!! How sweet !!!!and abt Manvi !!! What shd I say am really feeling bad

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lujeyn9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

update was fabulous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

continue soon

thanx 4 pm😊

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jayanthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Awesome update. I liked Diya talking to Manvi as if she was not gone more than a day. How she was expressing her views so easily. Virat's breakdown after seeing Manvi and controlling himself and becoming strong was awesome . Continue soon. Thanks for the pm.

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floral

@floral

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Posted: 12 years ago

#287

wow VirMan r back togthr... Diya taught his dad a new lesson..and 1 more lesson that we get is mother daughter relationship or bonding will be same even in the worst condition

anyways it was an awesome update i just loved it to the core of my heart please do continue soon and thanks for the pm dear😊😊😃😃👏👏⭐️⭐️

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aman-2

@aman-2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

Superb update glad that finally they are together

Hope manvi will forget her horrible past and recover soon

Thanks for the pm

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Anamta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#289

I lovedd it...Virat's emotions are being portrayed brilliantly...his apprehentions...seeing his beautiful wife who has never experienced pain and hardships in her life...who was being treated like a princess by her parents...and like a queen by her love of life...was being tortured brutally every possible way!! ...he wasn't able to face her...seeing ur love one's in pain makes u weak...that is even more painful then being in that state urself...he was dying thousand deaths that time...fate...Diya-Virat conversation was short but it reflected their own special bonding...Then came the mostt beautiful moments...that angel recognized her mother...sometimes children are being wiser then elders...more then being wiser they have their own magical ways their innocence make them see what others can't the purity of their souls...it was soo captivative...and beautifully explained the way Diya hugged her mom...it healed her...she lovedd listening to her daughters non stop chatter like always...even laughed...that echo of her laughter showed Virat the way... Diya, in her blissful ignorance, didn't even notice all her wounds and bruises, all her scars and burns. To her, she was her mother, as pretty as ever, as lovely as ever, as loving as ever...This write up is the best write up for me these lines are the best lines of best write up 👏 👏 👏 they will always be for me...Diya showed Virat the way...like Diya is supposed to do...