Ray of sunshine - VIRMAN - SS - part 10

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

OMG awesome yaar...

Feel really sad for Virat,Manvi and Diya..

Hate that Tanya...

Love how Diya is possesive for her father..

Hope Virat find out soon of Manvi and help there out of there...

Pleaseee continue soon...

Pleasee update But I Love You alsoo...

And thanks for the PM...

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

it was amazing

loved the update

plz cont soon

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dania6

@dania6

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

omg...this story is so freaking awsm...I just love it...waiting desperately for virmaan to meet ...please please update soon please ...:):)

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Bhabani90

@Bhabani90

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

I really dnt knw wat magical spell u cast upon ur work that i get all struck in it.. All ur works equally excite me and as i said b4 each time u update yeh dil maange more...

Cuming to update it was Blotish .. Both past and present were wonderfully penned. And for manvi rly hope sumone cums to her rescue. And i guess virat is safe from tanya as his daughter the great is with him.. Waiting for some major turnover in upcumng updates.

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

awesome Anu
flash back part was superb...fab dear
I want Manvi back...she already suffer a lot
do something Anu...fast plz make it more fast
and bring virman together
loved the update
waiting for next part
update soon...and thanx 4 the PM

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Shivani Rajput

@ShivRajput

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Flashback was super cute.. bt this Tanya 🤔 Hope Diya will do something about her.. 😉 She is naughty like her mother afterall.. And Manvi when is she returning back 😔 Anu.. update soon.. 😊

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shaimah

@shaimah

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Amazing update
Loved it
Cant wait for virat and manvi to come face to face
Hate tanya...hope diya keeps her far away from virat
Continue soon and thanks for the pm!!!

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shaalivirman

@shaalivirman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Diya...is damn cute...eeekkksss!!! hope Tanya is get rid of by Diya...😉

i want Manvi to escape sooon😛

it was a mindblowing luved the flashback...a lot!!!❤️👏

continu sooonnn...thx fr the pm...😃

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luv nishal

@luv_nishal

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

nice updates...

the flashback was so gud...I liked it...

Tanya making all moves to woo virat...hehe ultimately toh hamari manvi wapis aa hi jayegi...

I like dis kiddo dia...so cute she is...

please do sumthing to make virat cum to knw dat his manvi is alive.soon...plz

update soon