Ray of sunshine - VIRMAN - SS - part 10

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deepika03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

adorable story 😊 and i just love this father-daughter bonding...lolz...even if its nt so honey sweet at all times 😉 continue soon and pm me too...

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Touch me not flower! I WANT THAT hahahah diya is sooo adorableee such a cute intelligent girl! Knows bitches like womebs r eyeing my boy.. Extra kisses to her! Now virat need to work hard on taking care of his princess... I want some sweet moments of them b4 manvi gets back :p loved the update n how fast u r updating its like double treat for us!!!!! Keep it up girl in love with this story once again!!!

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NushIsh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

This was such a cute update.

You have a way with writing stories about kids. First Ria and Nikki and now Diya, oh she's so cute, the way she know that girls are only nice to her because they want to impress her dad.

Thank heavens that there is a ray of sunshine at the end of this because now we know that Manvi is alive and whatever come what may Virat and manvi will find there way again.

You being on a break is good for us we get to read more new stuff and that too with back to back updates.

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pink1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

nice update diya is so sweet
and he should get back manvi
there life make soon and update soon

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virmanfan013

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

aww such a sweet update. Diya is totally like manvi so adorable even she also doesn't like if any other woman touch her father instead of her mother. Lovely part cont soon thanx for the pm

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GOOGLU

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Sorry, for late comment!!!!!!!! Awsm and emotional update with sweetness,,,,,, luv cuty pie divya!!! miss Virman together

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.LiveLaughLove.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

⭐️Awesome. U r just tooo good man!! 👏👏👏

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jarora97

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Nice update...nd manvi is alive so interesting

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Anamta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

When I read first two parts wanted it to be longer..wish granted 😃..Its beautiful emotional and among most meaningful stories I've ever read 👏...Virat being super busy successful business tycoon...was the most successful person in professional life but when it comes to personal life he couldn't manage to be successful alone without his soulmate...most of the times people who are successful in professional life couldn't be successful in personal life it depends on priorities and circumstances...when his daughter Diya built castle it was castle of expectations built with sand by that innocent angel...Virat was guilty but still he couldn't make Diya happy...Diya's life use to revolve around Manvi...mothers are saviors every time..they know when their kids need what without even uttering a word...they know the best ways to understand their kids & to handle them accordingly..SEE, YOU MADE MY BABY CRY!!...Apologize to my daughter!! only a mother can be this adorable...they can never see tears in their kids eyes...no matter how older the kids are! then came the most beautiful moments when Virat made attempts to convince his little princess...his conversation with her Mr. Fluffy was cute...Mr.Fluffy. Tell papa that he is always going away to the office and I miss him, very, very much. More than mommy." reflected her longing to be with her dad...that was there even before when her mother was there for her but...now she wanted him way more...as only Virat was her everything now...her mom was away therefore she couldn't see her..but the person who wasn't away...was still away from her...daughter daddy duo rocked together!! I lovedd how Virat gave his daughter happiness by spending time with her and getting involved in her activities...so,Manvi is alive..good twist...scientists' life is mostly at stake...I lovedd the way u connected past with present...Like any other family Virat's family was also concerned about Virat and Diya's future..but would any other women be able fit in? No women can be a substitute of mother no matter how loving she is...In this case where Virat has a daughter...who completes his life...there was no need of any other woman in that perfect family...I loved Diya sweetheart...who is smart enough to understand how people are...honey bee costume was made by her mommy...I'm loving Diya and her Daddy...the perfect family