Ray of sunshine - VIRMAN - SS - part 10 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww ...it's just awesome
Virman convo 😉
Haan baba. I am sure. Can you stop killing my mood with these irrelevant and frankly shocking scenarios?Hey, dont rip my dress. It costs a fortune.Teri dress kit toh main...omg typically manvi...
Yaar what about next?? Curious to know. ...
Tussi great ho 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely updt...the flashback scene was superb...ohhh that means she was pregnant before the marriage...lolzzz...very good...awww manvis condition is so horrible pls relise her frm his torture...i cant c her like this...diya is so cute she always reminds me riya frm addicted...n at the same time she is so smart only she can c the hidden witch behind tanyas sugery sweet face...dadys protecter...lolzz...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
chap 3

i learnt that fate is very challenging thru dis story

manvi is alive!! dats awesome BUTT its so pathetic!
''She used to be amazed at the twist of her fate when she thought about how nobody would even know what she had gone through in the past one year'' how truthful this line is.. for her family she's dead an year ago,, even IF she died after an year of torture, no one wud ever know.. its such a cruel fate and i adored the pathetic situation and the truthful thought of her..
ur description of the deserted manvi was awesome!! her pleadings to reach her husband and her daughter,, later getting tired and giving a silence response to the torture,, finding solace in recalling the sweet memories.. these are making me to hate their cruel fate.. vl she ever return??? its a biiiggg question.. no one is aware of her presence, if she is s'posed to escape it wud be by her own challenging act or a loop hole to inform her virat..
as u chose to bring back an alive manvi and the purpose of the kidnap,, i have the opinion dat u'll save her and give us a happy ending..
the very fact dat she's a nuclear scientist is giving me alot of hopes.. change the topic from os to ss di.. i'm expecting alott from dis story..

the minute flashbacks are giving life to the story..
"You have no idea what that angelic looking monster is capable of"
mahnn the dialogues!! virat is a childish dad.. seeking help from manvi to look after Diya is soo adorable.. its sweet and very much helping to the plot.. he misses her already but the mere thought dat he cant handle his daughter in the absence of manvi is making him to miss manvi more.. its beautiful and again making me to hate deir cruel fate

virat's family!!! how can dey plan to hook him up vt somebody??? manvii return as quick as possible!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

chap 4

loved the convo between father and daughter.. one dialogue or the other keeps on reminding manvi! dat's awesome.. i mean "Acha? Then why don't you just ask your mommy to rea" he stopped himself. This was his default reaction whenever Diya complained that he wasn't doing something the right way; he used to just give up and send her back to Manvi'' both of them can never get over her ryt?? pathetic again!

kids are innocent but possess dis special ability to judge people at first sight and they never lie or act,, dey listen to themself alone, never bother to give it a second thought if dey are ryt or wrong.. one thing for sure, if dey dont like a thing, dat means dey DO NOT LIKE IT,, REALLY!!
so Diya judged Tanya ryt!! may be she sensed her cunning eyes.. she hates her clinging to her dad vt in seconds of their meeting.. interesting..

Diya's immediate dislike for Tanya and her designd dress showed her opinion about Tanya
her recalling of manvi's handmade honeybee suit and all her friends' eyes on it and deir wanting to dress up the same made the situation more beautiful.. a lady like Tanya can give Diya 'the most beautiful dress in the world' but her mom, manvi alone can give a handmade, made for her daughter alone dress, not only vt material and glitters but aLSo vt uniqueness and LOVE! being a small girl she understood the difference between her mom and other ladies.. adorable!!

loving the turn of events in the story!

Edited by virmanhus - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
chap 5

the flashback!!!!! u are making me to hate deir fate like nothing giving these adorable moments!! mahhnnn if such a horrible blow never crossed deir life,, how happily dey wud have enjoyed and cherished each moment?!

virat is always a romantic hero! the way he seduced her and tookover her control and deir beautiful moments are curving my lips..
''Can you stop killing my mood with these irrelevant and frankly shocking scenarios?''naughtyy fiance he is.. ''Mental, maniac Vadhera and your irrelevant scenarios!'' i was laughing my ass off at the next happening! u made me to forget their present and gave a satisfying amount of laughter thru the flashback.. it wudnt have been funny if manvi hadn't shared her fear and in reply if virat hadn't assured.. sweeettt memories..
the author in u propping inside the flashback and showing wat a gentleman virat is in not freaking out and accepting the baby and the marriage as quick as possible was brilliant!!
also the name 'Diya' and its history lol was awesome!! the little flashbacks never fail to deliver wat a sweetheart manvi is..
u deliver alot of things in a single incident and i adore dat alot

again in learning dat its all just a memory and now according to virat she's no more and the other soul out there recalling the same incident and living her moments only vt it is killing me...
''Get rid of her the leader of the group ordered'' i hope alott for manvi's return but this is killing me.. wat are u planning di?? u wont turn cruel ryt?? i know u want buttt how vl she escape??

wen she's suffering so much,, here, tanya (stupid, monkey, idiot, fool, all animals at the zoo) is trying to hit virat??? let another car crash occur and some kidnappers who want fancy designer take her and burry her alive!!! want to rip her soul and give kicks to her!! Diya,, plan something and push her into a swimming pool!!

I dont know wat's ahead but i only know dat u are capable of making the events ahead rocking in a negative or positive way.. just hoping for the best and cursing my net connection!!


-for dad and daughter, deir mom's dead but is living vt them in their hearts- in reality, manvi is alive- on the other hand, virat's family is planning to hook him up vt somebody- Miss.Tanya, well aware of his money, popularity is trying to TRY him- Manvi alive and not leading a happy life, for us to be happy, but is suffering every moment of her survival- a concerned sissy vyshali is unknowingly inviting the demon- virat is unaware of Tanya's intension- Diya studied Tanya thoroughly and poor girl cudnt express her side and choosing to behave abnormally!! summary so far in short.. wat to do i conclude?? bloody fate!! wat a cruel game it is playing


um sorry for succhhh a delay!! cursing my net connection and free yet busy shedule of mine!! plsss bare vt my delays

stopping for now vt hugs, kisses, love and love only!!
hats off to the writer in u and the new plots arising brain!!
get going my soul sissy!! love u!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
What a sad situation both VIrat and Manvi are in, the torture that she has to go through knowing that her family is going on life without her and the hurt and pain Virat is going through thinking about the happy moments in their life and thinking about going on life without her.

Diya is one smart kid, she knows before Virat what this Tanya is chick is after, you better bring Manvi back from the dead soon because I DONT want Tanya to get any closer to Virat.


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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
loved it
loved the flashback part a lot
hope maanvi tries to escape
loving this story a lot
thanks a lot for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update Anu!! ⭐️⭐️ Their past made me laugh but their present made me sad! Manvi is going through so much pain! She is in miserable condition 😔 .. How will she be saved? Can't see her like this.. Flashback part was cute and funny 😃.. Manvi was lil crazy and naive where Virat was possessive and naughty.. Manvi's reaction on her pregnancy was hilarious! 😆 Glad that Virat handled the situation maturely.. Diya is adorable & very smart ❤️.. She knows Tanya is acting all sweet to impress her dad but Virat is still unaware of it.. Tanya is so annoying.. Hope Diya will do something to save her dad from that witch 😛.. Loved the update ❤️❤️.. Will be waiting for the next part.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Welcome back..!! :)
Thanks for the update..!! :)
I feel really very bad for manvi..!! :\
Diya is amazing..!! ;)
Tanya shud better stay AWAY frm Virat..!!
Awww the flashback was amaaazing..!! ;)
Update soon nd do pm me :)
Heyyy i need an update of BILU tooo..!! :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
update was superb
thanx 4 pm
continue soon😊

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