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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: KKKASANS
such and wonderful ff and truly justifies the name of it the promise . you are a wonderful writer i must say again i wonder that why season 2 had not beeen as god as your story just awesome and yes i also write so if you take my advice just focus on family part first . good job keep writing

I completely agree with you. Addu's punishment will be the climax.

Thank you for your encouraging words..

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: -...mohini...-
Amazing part!! 👍🏼
You've perfectly described Mohan's point of view & his deep hidden emotions!! 👏
Its so heartwrenching to see him in so much pain...how his heart aches to go back to his family...his Megha his Jaan 😒
Hope the truth about Addu comes out soon & Mohan returns back with Nanhi & Beera & they live happily ever after

When I wrote this part, I had to watch the last few minutes of MB again and again.. The emotions from the episode did flow into my writing. But I felt it was too much and then cut it down to this.

HEA is a must have in our drama. But how it will happen will be a surprise.

Thanks for your encouraging words.

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Shivangi Agarwal

@shivangi838

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

👏nice update after a long time , nice one mohan's side of story eagerly waiting 4 next part😊

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: shivangi838
👏nice update after a long time , nice one mohan's side of story eagerly waiting 4 next part😊

Sorry for the long wait. I have my exams and my commitment for the ff was only for weekend. I will try to give more request updates once my tests get over this week.

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Ishq-high

@Ishq-high

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

i simply loved ur description of mohan's feelings
great part
i think that one person is Addu but i wanna know what happens when everyone finds that out
continue soon
thnx for PM

Love
Yashi

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: yashimalhotra
i simply loved ur description of mohan's feelings
great part
i think that one person is Addu but i wanna know what happens when everyone finds that out
continue soon
thnx for PM

Love
Yashi

You are most welcome!!

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Senpoo

@Senpoo

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#177

Mohan's PoV emotionally written describing his every sensibility with love and affection and hurt for his family!👏 Well done!!!!

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krithika

@Krithzz

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#178

Mohan's love for his family n Megha ...he is craving 😭😭😭😭

very well written .. .Mohan's emotions beautifully u have written .. though it is painful for us to read😭😭😭😭Monu...cnt see Mohan in pain !!!

piddi addu😡

I repeat again this shld have been ssn2 of NBT !!

Edited by raokrithika - 11 years ago

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: raokrithika
Mohan's love for his family n Megha ...he is craving 😭
very well written .. .Mohan's emotions beautifully u have written..though it is painful for us to read😭Monu...cnt see Mohan in pain !!!

piddi addu😡

I repeatagain this shld have been ssn2 of NBT !!

Thank you. Means a lot to me.