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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 17:

When I didn't receive any answer from Spiderman, I thought he was lost in thoughts and didn't hear me. Just when I was about to repeat, he spoke.

"Nanhi, I know I should have come home. But how can I turn away from my responsibilities. I am alive today because of ACP and Bala. It is my responsibility now that I help them in return. I cannot come back until I am freed from their debt."

Oh.. Spiderman and his principles! "Now I am also part of this debt. If not for ACP Sanghvi, I wouldn't have met you. So tell me how I can help complete your job soon and take you home."

Spiderman, Beera and I spent the rest of the day catching up on what was happening with him in the past 2 years. The next day morning, when ACP Sanghvi and Bala came, I asked them to share about their plans on Aai. Spiderman had already gathered all the required documents as proof. All that was left was for Aai to accept her activities.

ACP Sanghvi then revealed that he has asked Anu ma'am to send me for this part of his plan. They wanted me do sting operation on Aai and then arrest her based on it. But Spiderman refused to go by it as he knew Aai would kill any reporter found on her case, and didn't want me especially in this situation. So he decided to play an interior game to corner Aai. He told us the drama he would like to stage. Bala would be the key character. Hope Bala doesn't get hurt in this drama. To make sure everything goes fine, we rehearsed this play for a few days and tried all possible reactions of Aai to be sure about our moves.

On the D-day, I charged into Aai's house and cried holding her, "Aai, please save me. Bala is tying to kill me." Aai pulled me by my arm and asked, "What did you do that he is behind your life?"

I stammered, "I.. I... saw... him... killing..." Aai shouted at me, "Whom did he kill? your relative?" I cried, "No... yours." Aai was stunned, as expected. Good going, Nanhi!

"I... I.. was near a cliff with my friends... and I saw Bala.. running behind Vasu Bhau trying to catch up with him... When he caught hold of him, I saw them fighting and then.. and then..."

Aai was anxious, "And WHAT?" I wiped my tearful eyes with the back of my hand and continued, "I heard a gun shot and Bala was holding the gun."

Aai looked at me as if I was mad, "Girl, have you gone mad? It was the police who fired at Vasu. But my Vasu is very strong and he survived. Don't tell me such stories. If it had really happened why did you come after 2 years to tell me this? You could have come much before."

I answered, "I and my friends were frightened to witness the murder. So we left the city. Two weeks back I came into the city once again for a relative's marriage. He saw me on a street and warned me that I have to keep my mouth shut. If not, he would kill me as well."

Aai's bloodshot eyes gave her anger away. She summoned for Bala who came in running. I must say he did a good job and hope this will continue.

"Yes, Aai? You called for me?" Aai moved to reveal me to Bala. He was shocked and said, "You... Who is this girl, Aai?"

Aai asked Bala, "Where is my Vasu? This girl has told me everything. Before you kill her, I will kill you. Tell, where is my Vasu and why did you kill him?"

Bala stammered, "Aai, all this is lie.. Bhau, see what Aai is asking for? Aye, Bhau!!" Spiderman walked in, "Kya re, Bala! Why did you scream as if someone died!"

"Bhau, Aai is asking me where are you? Don't know what all this girl said! Aai is asking me why I killed you..." While Bala was explaining all this, Aai took Spiderman at gunpoint and asked, "Who are you? If you don't speak the truth, I will kill you. Don't you dare try to play games with me."

Oh no! We had expected she would take Bala at gun point. What will happen now?

Spiderman's life is filled with criminals - when one gets out, the next comes ready!

Edited by bgscribe - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
such awesome chapter and a wonderful and amazing ff i have ever read and i shall again and again say this would have been the season two of na bole tum na maine kuch kaha really by my heart and you have made all the character amazing and so realistic
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally update from u was waiting 😃
at again 👏 superb yaar.. story is moving fast ...
loved the choti choti convo between Nanhi ,Vasu ,Beera 😃
missing NBT n ur FF make me always feel why this was not ssn2 😭
waiting for next update n make it soon this time 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KKKASANS

such awesome chapter and a wonderful and amazing ff i have ever read and i shall again and again say this would have been the season two of na bole tum na maine kuch kaha really by my heart and you have made all the character amazing and so realistic


Thank you for not losing interest in my FF.. And I am sure everyone of us would have loved to see our ideas as teh story plot of NBT2.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: raokrithika

finally update from u was waiting 😃

at again 👏 superb yaar.. story is moving fast ...
loved the choti choti convo between Nanhi ,Vasu ,Beera 😃
missing NBT n ur FF make me always feel why this was not ssn2 😭
waiting for next update n make it soon this time 😆


Hi raokrithika, thanks for the pm. I was updating the part and teh links all over. So saw your pm late.

I promise the new chapter will be up soon..

I took time to write this chapter because I wanted to close the story fast without losing essence... But that didn't happen before my exams.. Now I have holidays so definitely I will try to deliver 1 part in 2 days max..


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Posted: 11 years ago
finally u updated😃
though i had to read d last two chapters to remind myself of the plot😆
coming to d update just awesome👏
i m loving how all d things r progressing😉 now waiting for megha's take on all this😳 and addu's dhulayi
now pls update early before i loose d plot again🤣
waiting for d next update hopefully soon😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: meg94

finally u updated😃
though i had to read d last two chapters to remind myself of the plot😆
coming to d update just awesome👏
i m loving how all d things r progressing😉 now waiting for megha's take on all this😳 and addu's dhulayi
now pls update early before i loose d plot again🤣
waiting for d next update hopefully soon😳


Thank you..

LOL.. I will try to update asap. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update👍🏼
they hadn't expected this move... what will happen now?
continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey great chapter!! Very well written!! I also had to refresh my memory by reading previous posts!! 😆
Chalo now update as fast as u can!! I want to see mm reunion fast!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice job buddy good episodes

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