FF: The Promise Part 20 on Pg35 - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
really awesome👏
esp. the last part about all that Megha has lost😭
good going
continue soon
thnx for PM

Cheers
Yashi
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update continue soon waiting👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
A treat to Beera fans.. Next update will be done soon.. in a day or two.
Part 15:

I went to the address Navika was staying at. I was worried on seeing the door locked. I thought "As if the problems now haven't been enough!"

I asked the neighbor and he said she went out for lunch about two hours back. I was thinking of what to do next. If she went for lunch, it shouldn't have been anything serious. But two hours for lunch? Then again she is a workaholic. While I was going through the multiple possibilities for the locked door, I saw a car stop in front of the building. Navika got down from the car along with another guy in police uniform. Then two other guys got down the car. When I looked closely, I forgot to take a breath.

I don't know if I was shocked or excited or anything, but it was a wave of happiness followed by many waves of questions. I felt a voice whisper in my ears, as if answering my previous thought, "Answer to your problems."

Indeed, an answer to all our problems. If Sirji was alive, then he would never let anything bad befall his family. I ran towards the group around the car. By the time I reached there, they were discussing about how they can set a trap. Unsure of who was that trap for; I called out, "Sirji!"

Sirji looked at me, at first puzzled then smiled, "Beera. You are also here in Mumbai. Don't you have any job other than follow us around?" I might have felt bad if someone else said that. I would have felt bad if Addu said that. But Sirji didn't make me feel bad. He had a teasing tone when he said that. At the back of my head, a relief washed over. How I missed his teasing taunts! He had been my inspiration and role model. Seeing him before me, I couldn't control but hug him.

Navika allowed me take my time with my emotions flowing one after the other and then told me how she found out about Sirji. I didn't need to know all that. I was happy we haven't lost him. She then asked me, "Beera, what are you doing here? When did you come?"

I told her that I came so that Meghaji won't worry about her daughter being alone. I saw the smile on Sirji's face fade away and a frown appeared on his forehead on mention of Meghaji. I didn't want to disturb their moments of happiness so decided against informing them about the issues in Bhopal.

But how long can I hide them?

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Posted: 11 years ago
sUpErB!!! 👏
waiting for the next part


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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part 👏
I've always adored d bonding between Mohan & Beera
So this part really touched me 👍🏼
Waiting for d next update!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
👏 going great loving the bond 😃😃😃 Beera n Sirji ka 😉
wish v had got to see such beautiful scenes in ssn2
waiting for next update 😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Good progress in the treasure hunt 👍🏼!!! A logical and neat flow of events!!!

Mohan teasing Beera and Beera liking it!!! That's very sweet !!! And Beera came to Mumbai, so that his MIL is not worried!!! 😉 What a trick! 😉😆

Nice update!!! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update👏
i always wished to see mohan-beera bonding dey did make an awesome duo
awww beera longed for mohan's teasing taunts😉
waiting for next part update soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Short & sweet update...
I wud love to watch that emotional scene on screen...
Nice update...
Thnx dear...

Ps: thnx fr d pm fr chap 14...
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Posted: 11 years ago
bgscribe :


commenting on six updates together (dunno how i lost track of this FF ) .. i'm so happy that the veil of lies that Addu had created on his numerous misdeeds are peeling off one by one ..seriously, does this guy even deserve to be called a son 😡? not done with killing off his father and usurping all his wealth, now he's hell-bent on maligning his goodwill by involving NAM Foundation in a fraud 😡? about his reactions and notions on Nanhi being the workaholic daughter of Mohan Bhatnagar .. no comments.


finally Nanhi meets her Spiderman officially again two years through ACP Sanghvi😳 ..i loved the way you panned out the story of Mohan Bhatnagar being converted to Vasu Bhau, it acts as a major connecting link as to what happened with him in these two years, unlike the show. wonder what will happen when Nanhi comes to know why Mohan chose to become Vasu Bhau over returning to his beloved family .. i seriously want to know her reaction this time.


but i think the most important of all is Megha coming to know as to what actually transpired between Addu and Mohan on that fateful day .. the price that Mohan actually paid to "buy" back her son. and i loved the line " Mohan, you cant make this decision for me ".. yes, of course, this was exactly what we said during the episodes themselves , how could Mohan make this decision for Megha ? i'm waiting for her reaction and confrontation with Addu now.


and now Beera too knows that his Sirjee is alive. and from what we know of his respect and loyalty to his Sirjee..i'm sure Addu is going to be badly cornered this time. waiting for everything to be known to everyone now and hope Mohan doesnt ( or rather cannot ) come to Addu's help this time when he gets the thrashing of his life .. update soon.😊


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