Arjun FF: The Lady in Red T2. Edits n new link Pg. 147

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Niki

@luvzindagi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Firstly Congrats Avantika Di for the 2nd thread...!!! 🥳

Coming to the update... I don't know how but I can say that it was my favourite update in this fic!
So many questions were answered... And Arjun's acceptance to himself that he loved and still loves Arohi brought a smile on my face...
Felt really sad for Roshni and her unrequited love...
And finally today when Arjun accepted his inner turmoils that I truly relised how much he had hidden within himself! How much he must have suffered due to his guilt and helpless feeling!!! I salute him for his strength and the source (Ro's love) where it came from... You are right even though painful her memories only gave him the strength to go through the clogging and restraining feelings...
Rosy... I know you have said about her marriage before as well... But I dont know why, just like Arjun felt her to be only his soulmate even after knowing she is married, I also wonder if it is the truth?? I mean did her marriage really happen? Did she really become someone's wife? Why do I feel that she didn't really marry? And if she did, why didn't a slightest mention of it come in her thoughts ever?? (Just my point of view)
And secondly, who was the other person who betrayed her trust? who hurt her?
So many questions...
But I loved this update... really touching
And now I am really scared about the moment when they both will really face each other... What will be their reactions!!
Please update soon... Thanks for the PM Di...😊

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Unresed my comment on Pg 3 😳😳😳😳

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Haleemah

@hal96

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Wow

Awesome chapter

So Arjun loved Rosy even b4 he married Roshni

Dat was a secret

I thought he loves Roshni but found out dat he loved Rosy urff Arohi

Loved da way Roshni was tryin 2 get Arjun out of the bound of their relation

Da 2nd part was reali emotional

Both thought dey let go of each other 5 years ago but ther hadnt

Update soon

Cant wait

Onlii God knows wat will happen when Arjun n his miss A come face 2 face

😊

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Unres Only my comment on Page3 not the smileys😉😃

Congratulations for the new Thread Avantika.🥳🥳🥳

But lemme tel you this,you are the first one to start a new thread with such an intense & emotional BADA WALA update.Subah Subah rula diya mujhe.Tissue too didnt helped me much.EMOTIONAL ATYACHAR kiya tumne.😭😭😭😭
Mr.A,his Miss A & Roshni.Trust me Avantika It made me mum for sometime reading this.It was POIGNANT.Beautifully penned down.👍🏼⭐️Girl,no one can beat you when it comes to penning down something like this.👏
They say the best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched. They must be felt with the heart .I felt it with this update.

Back to the update:
1st Part:

Starting with Arjun:
YOu have shown arjun being in vulnerable state before as well but this one just broke the dam of emotions in him.😭Here we saw him confessing about his feelings towards his Soulmate,his Miss A.
Main Sach mein akela pad gaya hu Ro.
Ek baar,Miss A bass ek baar laut aao.

Tham sa gaya hai yeh waqt aise
Tere liye hi thehra ho jaise

The lyrics itself speaks up what is his state of mind without him.

He was heartbroken & guilty both at the same time.He was not able to let go of his love for Ro.Also the guilt of not having given back the love to Roshni who loved her selflessly & helds himself responsible for her's death.😭

Roshni:Now i get it, y is she called Mishti by her friends.My heart goes out to her.She is a perfect example of a SELFLESS individual.She not only accepted the fact that her husband loved her best friend but also is trying to make him come of the guilt which he feels he is responsible & took a step forward to make him accept the fact that Ro was,is & will always be his SOULMATE & none can take her's place in his life.👍🏼⭐️

That 1 gesture of her's helding his hand forcibly & placing the bracelet gently was heart wrenching not only for Roshni & Arjun but for me as a reader as well.😭😭😭
It hurts to love someone and not be loved in return, but what is the most painful feeling is to love someone and never find the courage to let the person know how you feel.

She masked herself with a smile on her face to let him free from the skackles of their marraige & to begin afresh👏👏👏

The 1 question which was a mystery to me of what made him marry Roshni was answered here in this update.

2nd Update:
You know whats so special about this whole update.Its the 1 wherein both Mr. & Miss A confessing to themself what they meant to each other.
YOu have amazingly handled the toggling of scenes between Ro & Arjun with their state of mind POVs 👍🏼

A glimpse of a video clip of him being in danger brought the restlessness in her.I wonder how would have she reacted seeing him in his present state.
Her cherishing the anklets & him her's bracelet to him was heart touching.I guess thats y ppl say,first gift from a loved ones is above all & is special in many ways.

Her self confession has surfaced many anwers of which I was waiting but yes it brought many new questions as well.

She ended up sacrificing her most precious belongings for his sake.
A big shocker here for me was it was not Arjun but she who is responsible for Mishti's death.Moreover there is more to her baba's past.Her husband is another mystery which is yet to be explored.

She married some1 but is moaning till date for Arjun.I was in the impression tht she knocked out her feelings for Arjun only for Mishti but this is not the only reason i feel.

Many secrets still lay beneath & I guess the correct time for them to be revealed is yet to come.SO will wait for that.

P.S.:Bada wala bear hug for the Special Thank you.I am ecstatic.😃😃Thank you so very much.🤗🤗🤗

Edited by ll-Farheen-ll - 12 years ago

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@MriduB

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Hey Avantika! 😳

Congo for thread two!

And now coming to the updates! Read the update u posted on pg145 of first thread plus the one on pg1 of 2nd thread!

I guess there's no need to tell you that the updates were amazing as usual!😉

Continue soon! Jaldi waala soon!

PS : Proud to be a Raesha pankha! 😳

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nakshatra92

@nakshatra92

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

congrats for the 2nd thread... 👏

awesome update as usual 😊

arjun's anger and street fight...

roshni - arjun cinvo was nice ... she tried her best to convince him and free him from the bound of their relation...

inner turmoils of arjun and ro were beautifully portrayed...

ro thinks that she's responsible for wat happend to mishti , arjun thinks that he's responsible for wat all happend...

ro knws wat happend wid her family and why... someone betrayed her trust... chief???

her husband is still a mystery... guess its not the right time... will wait for it...

update soon

Edited by nakshatra92 - 12 years ago

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

hi avani di...🤗...

first of all congratulations to u on ur 2nd thread of "lady in red"...i'm so happy ...😃...🥳... n i loved ur gulab wala promise😃... thanx for the special thanx😆... and then update...today i my heart goes for mishti😃😭...because the lady has a big wala heart...she loves arjun so that she can let him go away ...from her...how selflessely she did this...👏👏👏... and the way mishti made him realize everything was just aww...🤗...for mishti...and yeah arjun! tried his best to keep mishti hapy always!...but alas! his destiny took her away... and mishti said right arjun ki life mein RO ki jagah koi nahi le skata...DARD KA RISHTA HAI dono ka...and arjun has kept ro alive in his pain ...and this pain gave him feeling of her being with him... and he was xpecting ro in place of mishti😊...he really loved ro...bit now i have answer of my 1st question... but 2nd one 😆...arohi pradhan...i mean ro was she really married to someone else...i dont think so...she loves her mr.a a lot...how could she do this?... and ...but the persons who is pain the most is rosy...she is doing all this to avenge the death of her dear ones and pain of betraying arjun...both!😭😭... "you can sacrafice , and not love...but you cannot love and not scarafice"... perfectly defines ro...and arjun

and ro is now like reva for me...! i admire the trio...REVA...PRIYA ...ROSY...👏👏👏👏...

and finaly arjun accepted that he loves ro...beside knowing that she was married to someone else!😃...

now i'm eagerley waiting for ro and arjun confrontation!😃...

update soon avani di...🤗

Edited by life93 - 12 years ago

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Avni di 🤗
Mera sng de dena
congo fr d thread
n ya thanx fr d pm
yay awesumwa baner 🥳
lov it
my like butn nt wrking
n yup i m d one who mis d update di
i cment later gulab wala promise
lov u
tc
shayad bi de do t2

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Thanku di for mentioning of my name yay!
read d mised chapters in a go!
wel main sis hu
dnt u dare to make urself blind lol ;)
adat se majbur hu :p
firstly d sngs hv grt impact on me
u chose d lines so apt di
grt wrk
hats off di

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Back to d updates di
is dere any need to tel dat in few lines i m numb for few mins
i m crying n my parents ask me wat hapen n i dnt hv answer
i said i remember my frnd jo ab is duniya me ni h di
u made me cry aisa wala!!!!
i cant imagine ro aka arohi state
i lost my frnd bt she saw it !
I hv no wrds di..
no wrds fr d pain of losing ur dear ones
log ate h di
chale bi jate h
par jane walo ki yadein jeene ni deti..