Arjun FF: The Lady in Red T2. Edits n new link Pg. 147

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Jannat

@Jannat94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Congratulations Avantika for new threat
update was awesome
liked it a lot dear😊
waiting 4 next part
update soon

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Radhika Shah

@Radhi12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Awesome update

Congrats on new thread!!

Continue soon

Thanks for the pm

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

AMAZING story!

I just love how all the elements came together beautifully.

Update soon;)

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

congrates for new thread.

awesome update.

continue soon.

and thanx for pm.

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Amit

@Swaronvrushan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Awsum update dear...
feeling as if all this is happening in front of me really well written...
loved the way mishti tried to console arjun...tried to realize him that he still loves his miss a...
but I felt really bad arjun he is so alone yaar...plzzz jaldi she use uski miss a she milado na...

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Congrats for the second thread of this awesome work!

Loved the update...The alternating POVs of Arjun, Rosy was brilliant

The mind processes of Miss A and Mr A were emotional and intense as always

I am sure Arjun will find out soon why Miss A doesnt visit him like Roshni...

The circumstances which led to Arjun marrying Roshni were always a mystery and this update solved it...His love for Miss A was already visible and now things have become more clear...

Felt real sorry for him...so Miss A was already married when that tragedy happened or is there more to it?

Why do i get a feel that Arjun's mysterious boss who used to give him orders was someone from the same family...and Miss A was already doing a double role of Rosy even then!

Arjun's anger to Aisha's deceit is understandable and well justified...anxious to see what happens when he knows that Ro is alive

And the blame game of who did what and who was the reason for the tragedy was portrayed superbly...

Waiting for may answers now...

Cont soon!

Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago

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1likeNoOther

@1likeNoOther

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

First of all Congratulations on Thread 2! 😊 This is one of the best stories I have ever read so thank you for giving us an amazing story to read. 😊😊😊

Coming to the update and like you said, it was an intense one 😊

The relationship between Mr and Miss A is beautiful yet so complicated. And I feel for Roshni a lot, there is nothing worse than knowing that the person you love so much can never love you because they already love someone else. But Roshni's love is still strong, she still want her Arjun to be happy, even if that means letting him go. 😭 The bracelet and anklet bit was very touching and the bit when Arohi had stayed up for 3 nights just to know if her Mr A was safe 😭😭😭.

The way you write is so beautiful, it just makes the story so much more entertaining and keeps the suspense high aswell.

Great update and once again Congrats 😛

BTW. could you post the name of the song when you incorporate any in plzzz

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

It was another intense update..
Just read it..
Her comes out some of the secrets..
Between Mr. A and Miss A..
Full marks~for my guess..
I had guessed it right back then..
Arjun was in Love with Rosanna..
but what was that kept them away from eachother??
And made them marry someone else??
Wait..
Ro was married to someone else..?
I don't think so.. maybe something had stopped her marriage..
Well, time will tell it all..
Roshni, made Arjun realise it all..saying it herself..
She wants the two lovers to be together..
Rosy responsible for Misthi's death..that's another tragic part..HOW??
..The anklet and the bracelet..
The two gifts..forever with them..
Loved the entire update..
It was beautifully and brilliantly written..
Waiting and waiting and waiting..
So continue asap..

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

it was a very emotional update
loved it

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

first congrats for the 2nd thread...
I'm so happy to say it loud...
You have done a terrific job in this update...
the lump in my throat need more time to subside... dear...
what an update dear!!!
lots of events happened here...with loads of jhatkas...
Roshni's coming in was at the apt time... can't even imagine the pain of Mr. A
the way she was letting him off... damn it girl... you are hell bound to put me in tears... surpassing all my emotional athyachar updated till date...
but the shocker was... Ro was married before Arjun... ???
maybe she was reliving him for Mishti... but that did hurt...
I feel loads of secrets yet to be opened... was Ro betrayed to a very unimaginable extend? whats that secret other than her existence that is going to hurt Arjun and also that will make him blame himself for it??
Mishti's death was not due to Arjun but because of RO????
ithne sare secrets... and trust me I'm loving every bit of it...
aur bhi bohot sare jhakas thi...
the payal and bracelet part was so touching...
come back soon...
and thanks a lot for the special thanks... I'm honored...
ab jaldi update kar...SYS!!!