Arjun FF: The Lady in Red T2. Edits n new link Pg. 147 - Page 5

Originally posted by: ll-Shilpa-ll

*Edited*

Sia, sorry baby.😛


First of all, I just want to say it has always been a pleasure discussing this particular story with you because this is my favorite fiction story on Arjun of all the stories, including mine.🤗

It is that brilliant and I will always stand by to cheer you on until I read the last line of this epic love story.😛

What I am trying to say in my round about way is that I will always be here.😉


Okay now to the update...Phew, that was intense, heartbreaking and very emotional but I loved every bit of it and want more. And thank god for the advance notice to have tissues handy, I definitely needed them after reading this emotional update.


This one was dedicated exclusively to Mr. A and Ms. A, and I can't thank you enough for it, this was so needed.


I have no words to describe how I felt as I read his POV and Roshni't inputs.

Although I had figured out Arjun and Rosy's relationship in the past long back this goes beyond love between them. They were made for one another and one doesn't exist without the other and this was described so well through Arjun's thoughts.

I really felt for him, he loved one who he was forced to let go or she left for his own good yet he couldn't let go even when he found another who loved him more than life.

How devastating for him to feel guilty for both women. On one hand he was heartbroken because he couldn't be with the one he loved and on the other he felt guilty for not loving the one who loved him completely.

He compromised with his situation yet he was the one who lost the most. No wonder he is loner and I now completely understand his anger at Ayesha.

I fear his reaction once he gets to know she is still alive yet his wanting to see her just once to talk to her, to fight with her, to be angry at her...all those things his wishing for give me hope.

Hmm...has he yet realized why Rosy doesn't visit him like Rosh? Ding...ACP Rawte, it's time to put that sharp brain of yours to work.

You know up to this update, I was more partial to Rosy and her strength, but after reading Arjun's thoughts on past and present, I feel they are both equal in strength.

Arjun thinks he is not strong as everyone says he is but he doesn't realize it that he is very strong and this strength is going to get him thru what is to come in future. Not only will he get thru it he will also get his miss A thru it too.

P.S. that bracelet is a nice touch, and here is where begins to get stronger I believe.

Now to Rosy...

You already know how much I love and adore her already but I also feel proud of her.

Yeah..I know bit dramatic, but still I can't help the feeling.

I think her strength to keep going not only comes from what all she has lost but also from why and for whom she made the sacrifices she made back then.

She loved him too much to shackle him and she ended up paying a big price for it, any other person would have regrets for that sacrifice but not Miss A aka Roseanna. She not only has no regret but she continues to ensure that his future is safe, that he is safe from what has happened.

I have yet to figure out just how big her sacrifice is, although I have some idea, I still don't know why she is blaming herself for the loss of her entire family and his too.

What happened back then? I am more curious than ever now. Who was her husband, and what was in her father's past that brought on such tragedy in their lives?

If he is wishing to see her just once she is just as determined to avoid him at any and all cost. How will they both react when they finally come face to fact?😭 I am scared and excited at the same time.


There is so much more I want to say, but I am going to stop here because I don't have the words behna for this brilliant update.

I don't think I have to tell you how much I loved this, but I will anyway, I just loved it to death.

P.S. I have nothing to say for Rosh, I couldn't help but feel her pain at her unrequited love, I think in this update I cried for her more than Arjuna and Rosy.


Now one more thing...

For you, your lady and thread 2.😊

Originally posted by: -Siyaa-

Do not Comment unless I update the title..

- yeh Likha tha..

See thts y i say consipracy, aapne title change hone se phele kiya

Unres

Arjunwa - Street Fighting haila kitna gussa bhar rakha hai hamre munde main...i would so wanna read this in future😉

Guitar...Music does bring peace but to him its the memories connected with it too...where will he find solace..

He really had to watch that clip na ..just holding to a thin hope that maybe she was alive ...So Ayesha and Ro secret darwaze se bhage ..ya shooting bad main hui...

I loved Roshini ke thoughts ..thy are brilliant written...no matter how difficult it is for her ..she needs to let him go back to the women he loved who actually is a sister too her ...requires lot of strenght and it started with the braclet

The whole SYS from Roshini is too beautiful ...and cant be described ...both realized there feelings and ran away from it ..or maybe thy knew a truth ..(Ro abt Rosh)...But whatever had happened ...would have been to difficult on them...

They are souls connected ...

2nd Part

The tides outside and same turmoil in Ro heart...Her Mr A rules it ...and yes..the pain of not being able to meet him , not be with him would take its toll one day or the other ..

The day that self restraint breaks ..i really dont knw how will they handle everything

Why did she think new and better life awaited him ??

Big Shehar and Roshini...If town ki baat thi toh she could have gone with him na

Arjunwa ko Guilt main dooba diya ...haila

Ro ka dhula ..okies ..but life most precious belonging ...Photo wali kya

Okies ro knows everything why the kilings happened..and if Arjun knws abt it he will break down..Hmm Cheif ka toh koi connection nahi hai na ...

Its 1 and main pagal ho gayi hun..

Jaldi jaldi update karo

Luv

Samba

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

Hey ...
Firstly congratulations for the new thread !!! :D
Honestly, I'm over the moon after reading my name mentioned ...
Awww thank you so much !! 😃

Okay so right in the beginning we got to see a frustrated ACP Raute ... :O

Oh how I wish we could actually get to see our ACP strumming a guitar ...

I so want Arjun to believe in and stop feeling so much guilt self-deprecating

Awww ... How committed and faithful can Arjun actually be ???
Like seriously he stopped wearing the bracelet just coz he didn't want any emotions that are related with Miss. A ... :$

Roshni is just the most wonderful and selfless wife EVER !! There's no doubt about it ...

And you've picked a beautiful and an apt song yet again !!!

Rosy and Arjun actually mean the world to each other ...
He knows there's something amiss in his life since his Miss. A isn't there with him ... :(

And our beloved Rosy actually can't stop herself from worrying about him and his safety and well-being ...

Oh. My. Gawd !!! I swear I could actually feel a lump in my throat and my eyes literally brimmed with tears after reading the pain, the suffering Arjun and Ro are actually going through ... :'(
It's just heartbreaking ... <\3

Honestly I'm really poor when it comes to all those mysteries but I'm just gonna have a shot ...

Was Rosy's hubby * in that case if the wedding actually took place * a scumbag ???
And is he somewhat responsible for our dearie and sweet Arohi to drastically change into the shrewd Rosy ???
It's just a wild guess ...

I know that you've a wonderful and amazing plot decided and you know what should take place and when but I can't wait for their reunion ... 😳

Thank you so much for the pm ...

P.S: The dialogues in Hindi were really impactful !!

P.P.S : I can finally rest in peace after knowing the reason behind the gifting of the beautiful Payal !! 😉

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe

congrats on the new thread awesome update

Originally posted by: jannat89

Congratulations Avantika for new threat
update was awesome
liked it a lot dear😊
waiting 4 next part
update soon

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Awesome update

Congrats on new thread!!

Continue soon

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Amri174

AMAZING story!

I just love how all the elements came together beautifully.

Update soon;)

Originally posted by: mastmegha22

congrates for new thread.

awesome update.

continue soon.

and thanx for pm.

Originally posted by: Swaronvrushan

Awsum update dear...
feeling as if all this is happening in front of me really well written...
loved the way mishti tried to console arjun...tried to realize him that he still loves his miss a...
but I felt really bad arjun he is so alone yaar...plzzz jaldi she use uski miss a she milado na...

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Congrats for the second thread of this awesome work!

Loved the update...The alternating POVs of Arjun, Rosy was brilliant

The mind processes of Miss A and Mr A were emotional and intense as always

I am sure Arjun will find out soon why Miss A doesnt visit him like Roshni...

The circumstances which led to Arjun marrying Roshni were always a mystery and this update solved it...His love for Miss A was already visible and now things have become more clear...

Felt real sorry for him...so Miss A was already married when that tragedy happened or is there more to it?

Why do i get a feel that Arjun's mysterious boss who used to give him orders was someone from the same family...and Miss A was already doing a double role of Rosy even then!

Arjun's anger to Aisha's deceit is understandable and well justified...anxious to see what happens when he knows that Ro is alive

And the blame game of who did what and who was the reason for the tragedy was portrayed superbly...

Waiting for may answers now...

Cont soon!

Originally posted by: 1likeNoOther

First of all Congratulations on Thread 2! 😊 This is one of the best stories I have ever read so thank you for giving us an amazing story to read. 😊😊😊

Coming to the update and like you said, it was an intense one 😊

The relationship between Mr and Miss A is beautiful yet so complicated. And I feel for Roshni a lot, there is nothing worse than knowing that the person you love so much can never love you because they already love someone else. But Roshni's love is still strong, she still want her Arjun to be happy, even if that means letting him go. 😭 The bracelet and anklet bit was very touching and the bit when Arohi had stayed up for 3 nights just to know if her Mr A was safe 😭😭😭.

The way you write is so beautiful, it just makes the story so much more entertaining and keeps the suspense high aswell.

Great update and once again Congrats 😛

BTW. could you post the name of the song when you incorporate any in plzzz

Originally posted by: ..sweetchilly..

It was another intense update..
Just read it..
Her comes out some of the secrets..
Between Mr. A and Miss A..
Full marks~for my guess..
I had guessed it right back then..
Arjun was in Love with Rosanna..
but what was that kept them away from eachother??
And made them marry someone else??
Wait..
Ro was married to someone else..?
I don't think so.. maybe something had stopped her marriage..
Well, time will tell it all..
Roshni, made Arjun realise it all..saying it herself..
She wants the two lovers to be together..
Rosy responsible for Misthi's death..that's another tragic part..HOW??
..The anklet and the bracelet..
The two gifts..forever with them..
Loved the entire update..
It was beautifully and brilliantly written..
Waiting and waiting and waiting..
So continue asap..

Originally posted by: skrafty

it was a very emotional update
loved it

Originally posted by: kunchu

first congrats for the 2nd thread...
I'm so happy to say it loud...
You have done a terrific job in this update...
the lump in my throat need more time to subside... dear...
what an update dear!!!
lots of events happened here...with loads of jhatkas...
Roshni's coming in was at the apt time... can't even imagine the pain of Mr. A
the way she was letting him off... damn it girl... you are hell bound to put me in tears... surpassing all my emotional athyachar updated till date...
but the shocker was... Ro was married before Arjun... ???
maybe she was reliving him for Mishti... but that did hurt...
I feel loads of secrets yet to be opened... was Ro betrayed to a very unimaginable extend? whats that secret other than her existence that is going to hurt Arjun and also that will make him blame himself for it??
Mishti's death was not due to Arjun but because of RO????
ithne sare secrets... and trust me I'm loving every bit of it...
aur bhi bohot sare jhakas thi...
the payal and bracelet part was so touching...
come back soon...
and thanks a lot for the special thanks... I'm honored...
ab jaldi update kar...SYS!!!