Arjun FF: The Lady in Red T2. Edits n new link Pg. 147

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@Chocolate_barun

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

congrats for second thread dear

amazing part

loved it

you are very talented

update soon

thanks for pm

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Unres

Arjun into street fighting? OMG ... imagining him fighting like John abraham in Race 2 😉

Also, Pappu guitar bajata hai... oops... Arjun Guitar bajata hai ... wow ... of course... Ro had music in her soul 😊

Breaking glass, feel of bracelet, Arjun-Roshni confrontation, Ro's painful memories, Arjun state of mind, Ro sitting on floor leaning onto the wall, Ro brushing her hair with thoughts going on in her mind ... I could visualize everything as if i'm watching it 👏👏👏

"us dard se tumhe takleef nahi hoti balki sukoon milta hai, kyunki ye dard hi tumhe uske hone ka ehsaas dilata hai"

This line hit me too, just like it did to Arjun ... I couldn't find an emoticon to express my emotions and my feelings of the moment when I read this line...

Aisha sent that fire video to Ro? 😲😲😲 ... Why?

So, Arjun or any of his missions against Sikandar had nothing to do with that fire accident and Roshni's murder... It was something that Ro did that infuriated Sikandar... 😳😳😳😳

Now please don't tell me that Sikandar will find out that Ro is alive or he already knows that she is alive ...

Then why did Sikandar sent that video to Arjun? 😲😲😲

This is getting more interesting... 👏👏👏

please update soon 😊

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Res'ing my comnt n Cong0 on 2nd thread.

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Awwssmmly awwssmm as always..
loved it
brillently written
cont sooon plzzz
thnx 4 pm

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Pihu Sharma

@pihu_angad

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

congrats for new thread

amazing update

continue soon..

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

first of all...i loved th banner avantika...

this update...it ws kind of a special POV update...

so arjun love Ro...bt had to leave her...nd marry Roshni...bt he still feels dat he didnt do justice to both Ro nd Roshni...this guilt is nw taking a toll on all their lives...

even Rosy is guilty for hiding smthng to hetr Mr.A...

who ws th one whom Rosy trusted...bt he ruined her trust...???

continue soon..

love
Aisha

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

🥳CONGRATULATION

Congo shongo avni for the new thread,clearly showing how an amazing writer you are,you're one of the best writer here,whose work i totally enjoy reading every single time,hope you have moore thread ahead👏👏👏

As far as the update is concern,it was simply amazing as always⭐️

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

congrats on the new thread
awesome update
loved it so much
loved arjun and roshni scene
rosy responsible for roshni's death..how?
so rosy was married before arjun
loved the bracelet and anklet bit it was touching
waiting for more
thanks for pm
continue soon

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floral

@floral

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

wow awesome update i just loved it to the core of my heart thanks for the pm and plzzz do continue soon😊

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

I don't know but somehow this is one of my favorite chapters in this fiction. One reason being a lot of my questions has been answered in this chapter. Yeah, you have no idea how many questions raised after every update of yours but this one cleared a lot. Now, I am just waiting for that dreading truth to be out which is been hidden behind many folds. Somewhere I feel so very excited to just imagine arjun's reactions because as per the entire scenario the truth is quite harsh and I am sure it will change a lot for many, Mr. A and Miss. A especially.

Another reason for this one to be my personal favorite is due to the emotions that have been portrayed. You have been a pro in narrating each and every emotions of any kind. But, this one actually had my three most favorite characters.. Off course.. Miss. A and Mr. A and the other one being Roshni. I have always thought about her take on the fact that her husband is in love with one of her best friends. I love all the dialogues+all the emotions+ feeling you narrated. I have always preferred books and novels over movies and serials. The reason being we could read and know about the thoughts of the characters. And, this had all of it.. every update of your has but I loved this.

Lastly, the song selection so apt for the entire scenario and situation. I love the song Kuch Kam.. One of my personal favorites. I actually listened to the song while reading.. Loved it.

Amazing update.

Continue soon!!!

Dee