Originally posted by: Aks13
First of all sorry for being so late dr. It's OK:)
Nw back to the update. It's a phenomenal piece of work. Although it a filler part but it's equally intriguing!!!!!! Thanks, i am glad that you liked it.
I'm impressed with Rathod that he kept his prudence even at sudden change of events n glad to knw that Arjun also realised that. You wrote that eavesdropping part exceptionally well. They both are shocked beyond limits.
Thanks again, Rathore is one of the most underutilized characters on the show and I wanted to bring him into the limelight.
Wow his Riya. Sudden realization that she hide something frm him left him baffled n he totally misjudged her.
OMG he really thought so that thy meant something to each other. That's great as all these sudden turn of events somehow helped him to realize his true feelings for her.
You portrayed their emotional turmoil beautifully!!!!!!
That car journey was so intense. Their silence spoke louder than words.
Wow he was equally shattered now as he was at the time of Roshini's death.
I think all that happened for some good reason as may be it help him to realize Riya's place in his life.
After effect of all this on Arjun was a bit emotional.
Arjun can be very impulsive and quick to judge at times? Remember how he shouted at Riya unnecessarily in the show? I also wanted to delineate that the angry young man thing is just a facade, the man is in deep pain, and maybe in love.😉
How easily Aisha caught that Choree lied to her. Impressive!!!!!!
Loved the way she used Rathod's fav phrase n her POV about gender-bias. I hate that too!!!!!!!
Awww she was all praises for Sam. OMG she had fallen in love with him. What about him???????
Aisha had to face wrath of Rathod n that too no fault of her. Feel bad for her!!!!!!!
Loved the way Arjun tried to ease the anger of Rathod n reassured Aisha that he didn't mean anything he had said.
I just loved writing the Raesha scenes😃
Choree were also equally shattered after the realization that Riya hide her true identity from them. OMG they also formed wrong opinion about her. Can I just say that I miss Choree?😭 They're not the same anymore.
Wow she find solace by seeing the beach. She was also devastated after she left ETF but it's a part of her job n she couldn't do much about it.
Awww that akdu sadu rawte always ruled her mind n finally she admitted to herself that she loved him.
Loved her dedication towards her job. I mean how easily she side lined her inner turmoil.
The case is getting more n more suspicious.
Wht the!!!!!! She can also hack accounts. Shree will surely going to faint if he knows that.
The girl's side of the story was dreadful.
Who is the man in their hit list??????
Riya is a far cry from the one in the show in some aspects, but the essential core remains the same😛 So she acknowledges her love and takes power in her hands in my story. I also wanted to show her as having a specific set of skills which makes her an efficient intelligence agent.
I don't knw why I feel like this but I think that the man with whom Siddharth Gupts is involved is Sik.
Rathod's anger somehow cooled down by Chotu's apology otherwise Choree would be in grave danger.
OMG he even avoided taking her name. In the heat of the situation thy all misunderstood her.
Wht happened whn she comes face-to face with thm??????
Hmm, the ETF is very angry at her, and it's justified in a way.😲
Eagerly waiting for the nxt part.
Continue soon.
Again sorry dr for late comments.
It's really okay. Thanks for the delicious long comment.
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