Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...?' *Cont. in Thread 2* - Page 36

Originally posted by: Amri174

Thanks for the beautiful comment, devildiva ji😊

I am glad that you liked the way I portrayed everyone's emotions in this chapter. I took a lot of time including everyone's reaction and was very nervous about it.

Arjun's reaction was the most difficult to write. I wanted to show simultaneously how affected he was by it, and also how he tries hard to show as if he isn't. There's no one to comfort him, and he won't accept anyone' s sympathy either.

Shree, Chottu and Rathore however can voice their pain, their betrayal unlike Arjun who keeps things bottled up. I wanted to show that as well.

Hmm, you liked Ayesha's thoughts? Nice.

When the ETF finds out that their friend is alive...oh God. I don't even want to think about it.🤢

Thanks for commenting, and keep on reading my FF for more;)

Originally posted by: Leki

Looks like competition for who will post long comment is going on... hmm next time i vl make my comment in two lines

..lol

Originally posted by: Leki

Hey its ok yar take your time... give us regular update that will do😛

Originally posted by: Amri174

REQUEST FOR BANNER

A big hello to all my dear readers!

First of all, thanks for encouraging me steadily throughout my journey so far. There's much more to come, (hint- at least 10 more chapters), and I hope that you will continue to read and like my story.

I actually have a request to make of you. As you might have noticed- my banner sucks. Big time.😆 I made it with Microsoft Paint🤢 I am more of a writer, and other than a penchant for literature, I am sadly lacking in any artistic/photoshopping skills whatsoever.

So I would like you to help me make an appropriate banner for my story, something that suits the elements- the passion, the deception, the characters' feelings, etc,.. The banner should have the title, which is "Deception, Intrigue...&Passion?", and the author's name, Amri174, along with that of the banner maker's. Please do inform me if you're interested. Just PM the banner to me and I will surely include it. And it's just me being greedy- if you guys are kind enough to send me more than one banner, I am including all the entries in my thread and crediting you for that.

So kindly send me your creations, I will acknowledge your effort and your ownership, be assured. 😊

Please help me out? *makes puppy face*

And another thing-this thread is about to complete 50 pages, so I am posting Chapter 5 onwards in a new thread. I know that the norm is for the FF thread to complete 150 pages. But since I have a limited number of readers (max 40-45), all of you might not be able to read if my thread gets shifted to the FF forum, since not everyone is on my PM list.

The link to the new thread will be put up on Pg 50 of this one. So kindly keep stalking😉

With regards

Amrutha.

Originally posted by: devildiva21

would have loved to help...1! but don't know how to make banner...!!😃😳

Originally posted by: Amri174

Koi baat nahin😊 Aapne humare baare mein socha, wahi kaafi hai😛

Originally posted by: Amri174

It's just that, you, Devil_diva, rockinggal, Vampu, Megha and Love_Life have been giving pretty long responses and lovely comments, and Leki is taken aback by that😆

Yeah I saw that😆
Well if Divi,Vampu, AR all are competing toh main kaise peeche rahete😉😆😆

Originally posted by: devildiva21

leki ka two line comment😲 bahut badi baat hai😆😉

Shoo Shoo, dont tease my sis in law ji 😳😲😆

Originally posted by: Amri174

Thanks again for the detailed review😊

My reply in bold red.

and Your welcome😳

Originally posted by: Amri174

Hi Priya!!! *waves vigorously*

Ya, we have almost the same choices as far as TV shows go, esp. crime shows and police procedurals. I am really glad to meet you here.

Thanks for your generous praise of my little story. I, however, believe that this praise is quite unwarranted, I can improve a lot, actually. Yet, it does me good when people acknowledge your skill and tell you that you've done a good job.

No need for fast commenting. The occasional comment/reply is more than enough. 😊

*waves back* :P
Same here, glad to meet you again😳
Well ofcorse you can..no one is perfect and everyone has room for improvement :)
And your welcome..again :P😆

And thanks, cause I am super slow at commenting, and editing my reserves lol!!