*COMPLETED*#2!FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 12 to 20

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IssK.

@IssK.

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#541

Hello my dear WIWY! just read last two chapters in one shot...fully enjoyed😊 Aapki Khushi, she is fab, likes to keep things straight, no idhar udhar...i super like that. She feels it, she says it. And ASR...Uff! Glint in his eyes? Life couldn't get better. Jodi salaamat rahe...humen bahut bhudiya laga😃

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Uzma

@Yoyo-free

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Posted: 11 years ago

#542

Awesome Update! 😃 Loved it! ❤️

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wiwy

@wiwy

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#543

Originally posted by: Barun_Addict
Editing
OMG 😲
Arnav soo angrry !!
He called him a pea brained idiot

He grabbed his collar

Itna gussa 😆
But he still didnt accept that use farak padhta hai

Jal beta tu jal ab
Isse tabhi akal aayegi n samjh aayega that he loves her...

Jealous Arnav 😆

NK n his hindi

Nannav
The hospital scene was too cute

Will Khushi confess ??
N I m sure if she'll cnfess now...
His reaction will be very confusing...

So its better if she doesnt confess now !!

Arnav ko jealousy ki kaafi saari aur dosage chahiye

N yeah ek cheez aur
I also love love love a jealous Arnav
N hopefully we'll see more of him in future updates

Awesome Update Di !!

Love you !!

Terribly sorry for late reply! Am neck deep in rubbish! Came to your post to destress! Your comments always have me 🤣 🤣. Thanks a ton!🤗

❤️Same to you

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wiwy

@wiwy

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#544

Originally posted by: Throne
Nk toh is safe yaar!

I thought he ll head to hospital along with them, just in an ambulance instead of Arnav s SUV!
😉

Arnav is right 😆 I don't think he s good for NK s health!

Ab dekhna yeh hai whether Khushi confesses or takes advantage of Lover boy s jealousy!

And unlike her I am actually looking forward to Lover Boy s reaction on Nk being a potential groom for her!

Thanks for the pm.
Nice update with just right amount of spice!
😊

Tum to sachmuch NK ke peeche par gaye yaar mere!🤣

Thankyou so much for finding my story palatable! Love your suggestion! Kuch sochne ka padi!😃

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#545

Sorry have to rush now! Will try to reply to your comments! Till then, thankyou so very much for your beautiful comments!🤗

Edited by wiwy - 11 years ago

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#546

Allah ke naam pe update de de baba..!! lol

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wiwy

@wiwy

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#547

Originally posted by: Barun_Addict

Me too

Haven't found the time to write a single syllable of the next chapter😆

Will write soon. Pakka promise!😃

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Barun_Addict

@Barun_Addict

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Posted: 11 years ago

#548

Originally posted by: wiwy

Haven't found the time to write a single syllable of the next chapter😆
Will write soon. Pakka promise!😃

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#549

Originally posted by: sohara
I am replying from my phone. So can't give long comment.
Loved it anyway.
Poor nk, feeling bad for him.

Feeling bad for NK?!Tum bhi na! Do you think your sexy boy will like that?!😉 😆

Thanks for reading and commenting from your phone, Sohara!🤗

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#550

Originally posted by: ..Anita..
Lol khushkhushi and cheap lagey...oh nk and his Hindi
I did enjoy how jealous and possessive Arnav was over Khushi?..poor nk must have been freaked out
Wonder if Khushi will confess soon
And it was cute the Arnav did not correct that old man

Yep! NK's Hindi is adorable, isn't it?! I enjoyed writing that part! And also the jelly Arnie! The comment by the old man was a last moment addition! Happy you liked, Anita!

All the best for your exam!🤗