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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

wiwy🤗


Love it...❤️

My grabbers...

His possessiveness and rudeness is very much noticed by Khushi all the time...and that is making her confuse...

NK and his Hinglish is cute as always...nice touch...But their fight was cute



Khushi's jumping up in her defense that she was just helping ut that is some deep thought of your creation...She cares how he thinks and what bothers him...Excellent and fantabulous touch


His, not stopping old dude as he was expressing his heart stance as he can't say by himself...👏

Khushi is eager to confess...What your Kharafati mind is up to wiwy????😕


I feel so honoured to be showered by your grabbers Arshi! 😃And the edits are a fantastic bonus!😃 Thankyou Guruji! Lots is going on in my kharafati mind! He he! Some interesting twists coming up in the tale! BTW Loved how you understood Arnav here
His, not stopping old dude as he was expressing his heart stance as he can't say by himself...👏

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cheesemad

Awesome update

Arnav's reaction was way better than what I thought. LOL I thought he will beat NK black and blue, but I am glad he didn't.

Ap se mil ke khudkhushi hui and he called Arnav Nannav, AWESOME..!!🤣

Arnav isn't ready to accept he is in love with Khushi?! Ahh ASR and his issues. He is the most complex character on Indian Television and I have always believed that our CVs have portrayed him beautifully. And you are doing the same. He loves her a lot but he won't admit it that easily.

Yeh ladka haye allah kaisa hai deewaana, Kitna mushkil hai tauba isko samjhana, Ke dheere dheere dil bekaraar hota hai, hote hote hote pyaar hota hai..!!😉

Khushi brought Khushi in a place like hospital too. It is very easy to make someone cry but very difficult to make someone smile, True..!! She brought same happiness in boring life of Arnav Singh Raizada.😳

Hayeee jodi salamat rahe inki..!! how sweet. And the most amazing thing is that he didn't even bother to correct that old man. ASR falling in love with her:D

Special advice to ASR: Oh don't worry ASR she will understand you no matter how rude and stupid you behave, after all its Khushi we are talking about and our Wiwy Di who is writing 😉

PS: sorry for being late, was out of town:)


Cheesy my dear🤗 loved the song! Certainly apt for this chapter!
Yes, I am trying to remain loyal to the original khaddos image of ASR! Because it is his complexity his enigma that attracts his fans to him!
And that was a cute thing to say...that Khushi brought khushi to all! Like you do! 😃
Don't apologise to me for commenting late etc. I don't deserve it! Look when I am answering back! How do you tolerate me, cheesy?!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: indi52

so cute. usse koi faraq nahin padta. yet nk gets hell just for kissing the top of her head. tomfoolery... ha ha ha, nice word... really nk and his malapropism can be so irritating, especially since khushi ji must help nanhe jii. her towel slipped off? really? and they spoke about fundamental rights and amendments to the constitution? really. oh your asr is such a gentleman despite his foul temper. and just reading he had his arm around her waist has me in dhak dhakland. read last two chapters together. it's hard not to fall in love reading about your asr and khushi. thanks, looking forward to the next.


Genleman, huh? Yes, I guess that is how I like my men! Hot gentlemen!😉😆
Thanks for falling in love, in di!😃 Will post next update soon!
Love and hugs!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy


Cheesy my dear🤗 loved the song! Certainly apt for this chapter!
Yes, I am trying to remain loyal to the original khaddos image of ASR! Because it is his complexity his enigma that attracts his fans to him!
And that was a cute thing to say...that Khushi brought khushi to all! Like you do! 😃
Don't apologise to me for commenting late etc. I don't deserve it! Look when I am answering back! How do you tolerate me, cheesy?!😳


OMG how can you say this about my Wiwy Di😡 I love you dammit..!!
I love it when you quote your readers comments, it makes them feel special😳
Continue soon😎
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cinthiann1758

Wiwy, so cute the jealous Arnav an poor NK receives his wrath!


Here are a few answers to your questions.
Is he jealous of NK ? Oh Yeah! Because he loves you dammit!
Why is he so possessive about me? Oh Yeah! Because he loves you dammit!
Does he feel something for me? Oh Yeah! Because he loves you dammit!
Why didn't he correct the old man when he mistook us for a couple?
Oh Yeah! Because he loves you dammit!

Should I confess to Arnavji?! Oh Yeah! Because you love him dammit!

What will be his reaction ?!!!!!!! Oh Yeah! Because he loves you dammit, he's extremely Khushi!!!

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Ha ha ha! Cyn you are so right dammit! Loved your answers!😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: IssPKaur

Hello my dear WIWY! just read last two chapters in one shot...fully enjoyed😊 Aapki Khushi, she is fab, likes to keep things straight, no idhar udhar...i super like that. She feels it, she says it. And ASR...Uff! Glint in his eyes? Life couldn't get better. Jodi salaamat rahe...humen bahut bhudiya laga😃


Thanks Issk for your Bhudiya comment after no doubt a bhudiya vacation! Lucky you!😃🤗
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That was good wiwy by chance I saw this somehow missed your PM
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chalhov

That was good wiwy by chance I saw this somehow missed your PM


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Posted: 11 years ago
😃 Thanks for liking! Looking forward to your comments too!🤗

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Edited by wiwy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey my friends, wrote this short updatewa in a dash!😛

But wrote it nevertheless! 😃Your response compels me to carry on, so I owe it to you all!🤗 I have received PM's from many of you that you are busy with your exams! Hope the story works as a stress buster to you as it does to me!😃

Please make do with my original banner as didn't get time to make new edits!😭 Sorrywa!😳






Chapter 18

A Confession of Sorts

Khushi was lost in her thoughts, wondering whether to confess her feelings to Arnav when his harsh voice startled her.

Khushi, Khushi! Why are you looking so lost? Tum theek ho?(Are you okay?)

Khushi fluttered her eyelashes and looked at him in a daze!

"Kya Arnavji?"she said in a sluggish voice failing to comprehend the worried, angry glaze in his brown eyes.

"Dammit Khushi! What are you thinking? Are you feeling unwell?" The concern in Arnav's voice was now.unmistakable.

Khushi gaped at him and smiled thinking to herself what would she see in those eyes of his if she told him she loved him!

"What the! Why are you smiling like a naughty kid who has been caught with his hand in the candy bag ?" Arnav asked looked at her suspiciously.

"N...N...Nothing Arnavji," Khushi stammered, avoiding his gaze.

Arnav was quiet for a while. Then he asked her in a gentle voice, "Did you eat anything in the morning?"

"Yes, I had tea and a light sandwich."

"And the medicine?" Arnav said, raising an eyebrow.

Khushi looked at him in astonishment. "What medicine?" she said, scrunching her nose, trying to make sense of what he was talking about.

Arnav lost his temper!"You drive me up the wall, Khushi Kumari Gupta! Have you forgotten that you yourself had an accident yesterday and you injured yourself very badly? You were in terrible shock and I had to take you to the hospital!! Did you or did you not take the medicine the doctor gave you yesterday?" Arnav.'s voice rose in frustration.

Hey Devi Maiyya she had absolutely forgotten about taking the medicine in the morning, Khushi grimaced !

"I ha ...have the prescription with me, Ar ..Arnavji, but in the morning wo kya hua ..."Khushi stammered, taking the prescription out of her jhola, racking her brains for a suitable explanation to pacify him!

But Arnav barked at her,"Spare me your stupid excuses Miss Khushi Kumari Gupta!"

Khushi was almost thrown off her seat as he suddenly brought the car to a screeching halt. Khushi looked out of the window. They were in front of a chemist shop. Without a word, he snatched the prescription from her and bought her a packet the medicines. Then he hovered above her like a damocles' sword till she gulped down a pair of biscuits and the medicines as fast as she could! Satisfied, he nodded at her and finally drove her to college.

When the SUV stopped in front of the college, Khushi who had maintained a strict silence throughout turned to Arnav and muttered her thanks. She was about to jump out of the vehicle, when he suddenly pulled her back against his chest. Khushi gasped! An electric current ran through the entire length of her body as he hugged her from behind and bringing his lips close to her ears murmured huskily, "You will be okay, won't you, Khushi? And please don't forget your medicines, understand!"

As he spoke his lips lightly grazed her earlobe sending shivers down her spine. Khushi forgot to breathe for a moment before her heart went into overdrive! It took all her self -control not to turn into him and bury her face in his hard muscled chest, feeling the texture of his skin under her lips!

Moving away from his grasp reluctantly, she nodded silently and without looking back at him, bundled out of the car and ran into the college building at top speed and did not stop till she reached the safe haven of her classroom! However, much to her disconcertment she could not concentrate on the lesson as her thoughts kept straying to a hard chest!

After class, handing her a letter, her Principal informed that there had been a change in the schedule in the NSS project and she would have to join the team immediately, preferably day after tomorrow! The first thought that came to her mind was how would she live without seeing him for a month! What was she thinking, she chastised herself. How many college girls get the career opportunity she had got, to work on a project so close to her heart! And Gosak, the village she was going to was so near Lucknow and she would be able to meet her Babuji!

She was jostled out of her thoughts by her squealing friends who surrounded her! The prettiest among them said excitedly, "Yaar Khushi who is the handsome guy with killer looks who came to drop you? Humko bhi usse milao na(Please introduce us to him)!

Before Khuushi could react another classmate came running and panting and she clasped her hand to her heart and said dramatically, "The sexy prince has just come back in his white SUV to take me away to his castle!"

The girls shrieked excitedly,

"Really?"

"OMG!"

"If looks could kill!"

"He is so hot !"

"Hotwa!"

Khushi saw Arnav sauntering towards them, hands in his trouser pockets, a pair of dark shades on his handsome face, a smirk on his lips, and her heart skipped a beat! She saw her friends drooling over him and ripples of anger surged through her veins. She hissed, "Back away girls," and rushed forward to stop him!

She sprinted towards him."What are you doing here?" she whispered at him fiercely.

"I thought you would be happy to see me, Khushi. And I could drop you home." he said smirking at her..

"Arnavji go away. All the girls are staring at you!"

"Oh! I don't mind. Do you?" Arnav winked at her and nodded at the girls standing behind them. The giggles that erupted behind her incensed Khushi ! Making a disgusting face at him she whispered again,

"Anyways don't come looking for me here anymore, samjhe aap?! I am going away for a month..."

"What the! Where are you going? I won't let you go!" Arnav blurted out in shock and anger.

"But...I have to..." Khushi insisted.

"Khushi don't argue with me! Can't you understand why I have come to pick you up? I can't let you out of my sight! Its not safe for you. What if Shyam tries to hurt you? "

Khushi stared at him. He was restless, a nerve in his jaw twitched agitatedly, his brown eyes were anxious for her and her heart welled up! Before it burst she hastily withdrew her gaze from him.

As she settled in his car, a sense of calm and contentment filled her. She was definite he had feelings for her. She would tell him before she left for her assignment, she would tell him tomorrow...

She sighed and snuggled into the seat of the car and dozed off. She was still sleeping when he drew up in front of her apartment building.

Arnav stared at the sleeping beauty in his SUV and smiled. Then slanting forward, tucking the errant strand of hair behind her ear and blowing gently in her ears whispered, "Khushi, you are home! Wake up."

Khushi smiled in her sleep and mumbled, I love you, I do..."

What the! Arnav sat transfixed. Anger enveloped him like a demon. What was she saying? Love? What the! Whom did she love? It couldn't be Shyam. Then was it that fool NK?

Khushi shifted in her sleep and mumbled again,"I do...love...Arnavji !"

Arnav stilled! It took him a second to register what she had just said in her sleep! He raked his hand through his hair! He leaned back to his seat and placing his head on the headrest closed his eyes!!!!

Hey my readers⭐️, do press the Like button😃, that is, if you liked the chapter 😆and please leave your comments while you are at it! 😃 🤗 Buddy me for PMs!

Love and hugs to you all!

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Edited by wiwy - 11 years ago

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