*COMPLETED*#2!FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 12 to 20

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aashi12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#521

NK dude.. You just rocked! Completely on his way to KhudKhushi by his unintentional Cheap talks...:P

poor guy is unaware of the fact that ASR very possesive of his Mujhe kuch farak nahi padta wali girl..:D

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Barun_Addict

@Barun_Addict

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Posted: 11 years ago

#522

Edited on page 80

Love you Di

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#523

Nk n Arnavs conversation was hilarious.

Surely Arnav would kill Nk if he comes to know that his n Khushis parents wanted to get them married.

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#524

wiwy🤗

Love it...❤️

My grabbers...

His possessiveness and rudeness is very much noticed by Khushi all the time...and that is making her confuse...

NK and his Hinglish is cute as always...nice touch...But their fight was cute

Khushi's jumping up in her defense that she was just helping ut that is some deep thought of your creation...She cares how he thinks and what bothers him...Excellent and fantabulous touch

His, not stopping old dude as he was expressing his heart stance as he can't say by himself...👏

Khushi is eager to confess...What your Kharafati mind is up to wiwy????😕

Edited by ArshiHamesha - 11 years ago

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sarozz

@sarozz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#525

Awww loved it...he is such a possessive man...jus admit the fact arnav without beating around the bush...

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Meerah14

@Meerah14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#526

Lovely update
poor NK
do continue soon

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nisso

@nisso

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Posted: 11 years ago

#527

awesome update!

loved it! 🤗
i read the in one go 😊

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cheesemad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#528

Awesome update

Arnav's reaction was way better than what I thought. LOL I thought he will beat NK black and blue, but I am glad he didn't.

Ap se mil ke khudkhushi hui and he called Arnav Nannav, AWESOME..!!🤣

Arnav isn't ready to accept he is in love with Khushi?! Ahh ASR and his issues. He is the most complex character on Indian Television and I have always believed that our CVs have portrayed him beautifully. And you are doing the same. He loves her a lot but he won't admit it that easily.

Yeh ladka haye allah kaisa hai deewaana, Kitna mushkil hai tauba isko samjhana, Ke dheere dheere dil bekaraar hota hai, hote hote hote pyaar hota hai..!!😉

Khushi brought Khushi in a place like hospital too. It is very easy to make someone cry but very difficult to make someone smile, True..!! She brought same happiness in boring life of Arnav Singh Raizada.😳

Hayeee jodi salamat rahe inki..!! how sweet. And the most amazing thing is that he didn't even bother to correct that old man. ASR falling in love with her:D

Special advice to ASR: Oh don't worry ASR she will understand you no matter how rude and stupid you behave, after all its Khushi we are talking about and our Wiwy Di who is writing 😉

PS: sorry for being late, was out of town:)

Edited by cheesemad - 11 years ago

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nadiafarjana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#529

Hey i read the ff in one go.its awesome...
I want to read more plz add me on ur buddy list and pm me when u update..

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#530

so cute. usse koi faraq nahin padta. yet nk gets hell just for kissing the top of her head. tomfoolery... ha ha ha, nice word... really nk and his malapropism can be so irritating, especially since khushi ji must help nanhe jii. her towel slipped off? really? and they spoke about fundamental rights and amendments to the constitution? really. oh your asr is such a gentleman despite his foul temper. and just reading he had his arm around her waist has me in dhak dhakland. read last two chapters together. it's hard not to fall in love reading about your asr and khushi. thanks, looking forward to the next.