New Arshi SS: The Unknown Mind Imp Note Pg.22 (12/08/2014) [On Hold]

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Welcome back. Nice updates. It was a smart decision to talk to them separately. Arnav did a blunder and they both gave different reasons as to why Khushi was sleeping outside the room. I hope Payash will dig into this matter. I am glad that Payal unknowingly gave Khushi the hint that Arnav might know about Shyam. Thanks for the PM. Hope you will update soon :)

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Welcome back Hun, I'm so glad you have finally updated.

I have so missed reading this awesome story,

Wow we got a double treat with two updates, I'm so happy.

The updates were amazing and awesome, both parts were brilliant.

Loved the conversation between Payal and Khushi, it's a shame she could not speak the truth but I'm glad Payal made her realise that she will always be there for her.

Wow the conversation between Arnav and Akash was fantastic I love the way Akash was being very direct with his questions.

I'm glad Akash made Arnav realise to what extent Khushi has been treated at home, I hope Arnav speaks to the family.

Loved the updates, a brilliant read.

Thanks for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next part, please please please don't make us wait to long for the next part as this story is far too interesting xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

awesome update loved it loved the conversation between arnav n akash thanks for the pm

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Wonderful Update...

Glad to know that Payal and Aakash was trying to get ARshi together...

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

fantastic updates !!! loved payal & akash and their concern for their siblings.. arnav and khushi the way they both covered up.. loved the update..

thanks for pm 😊

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88sandy

@88sandy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

wow dat ws amazing...payal n akash r so mch cncrnd 4 khushi...n dey both tld d difrnt reasn behind khushi sleeping at poolsyd...so r dey find d truth

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-SOBTIAN-

@.LadyHitler.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Beautiful update.. Well-written..
I always wanted to see akash and payal like this in the original serial.. But i couldn't..
Loved both of their conversation..
Continue soon..

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Saranya

@saran3339

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

read in one go update soon

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namita11

@namita11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Akash with a steel backbone...better

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musicfan5

@musicfan5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#110

Very intriguing story... Loving this strong payal and Akaash who r understanding enough guess some serious issues behind this marriage and r digging deeper to try and find n resolve the reasons behind it

Update soon