New Arshi SS: The Unknown Mind Imp Note Pg.22 (12/08/2014) [On Hold]

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: -MKM-
nyyc updt..
cont soon..
thnx for the pm..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: star_fan1
Nice and lovely update
Loved it too much
So Akashi is hero here
Waiting for next update
Plz continue it soon

Yes Aakash is the hero along with Arnav 😉

Glad u liked it 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: vijiasr08
I READ BOTH PARI STORY STARTS ON CRITICAL SITUATION.

NICE TO SEE AKASH AND PAYAL HAS SOME HOPE FUL CHARACTERS

NICE WAY OF WRITING

BEING ARSHI FAN EAGER TO SEE ARSHI FILED CHAPTER AND VALUABLE ARSHI PARTS

ENJOYED IT

KEEP ROCKING

WAITING FOR UPDATE

I am so glad you liked it akka!!!

Thanks for reading it 😳

Love you 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: cheesemad
Pari meri jaan, maaf kar de for late comment:(

Coming to the update, Loved it:)
It was nice to see a strong Aakash Singh Raizada. I loved the way he behaved. After all he is brother of our ASR.

Though there was not ASR in the update, i loved the chapter 1:)

Waiting for the brother's conversation:D

Maffi mangne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai chikku 😳

I am glad you liked it ... Thanks for reading this!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: pree2605
amazinggg...
wowww akash... i nvr knew even akash cn tlk...today he proved he is asr ka brother...
thnxx fr pm..
update soon

He can definitely talk but he never got the chance in the show ... thought of changing that in the story 😉 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: phillips_2909
keep it up akash
keep this sprit
nice starting
waiting fr next
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add ne in ur new account
thank u

Thank you dear 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: 88sandy
nyc update...lovd the way akash was in ths chaptr...totally junior ASR...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe
awesome start
loved it

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: sondaryalakshmi
Really really nice n interesting update.

Thank you 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: P4rveen12
Thank you so much for sending me a PM to your story, currently I have been looking on this forum for stories related to the forced contract marriage/Arnav's redemption and yours fits perfectly.

The story so far is brilliant and amazing,

Poor Khushi is being ignored by most of the Raizada family and Arnav is also being his normal cruel and taunting self.

I'm loving Payal and Akash, so far they are the stars of the story.

They both have discovered something is wrong between Arnav and Khushi, especially there sudden marriage.

Can't wait for them to do there own investigation and find out the truth and hopefully tell Arnav who has turned a blind eye.

A Small request please make Arnav follow a big redemption and make him feel so guilty especially after what he has put Khushi through.

The pre cap looks awesome can't wait for the confrontation, hope Khushi speaks the truth. Also the Akash and Arnav conversation will be interesting to read.

Loved the updates they were a brilliant read.

Thanks for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next part xx