Be-intehaan virman ff #1

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tanishalnk

@tanishalnk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

It's amazing. ..poor manvi...
Plz update soon nd pm me

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@wanderlust09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Awsum update...yet another beautiful story by u...m already luving it!!!!❤️

Virat was a bit too harsh but m sure he wud hav to regret his decision later...poor Manvi...😭

Eagerly waiting for the next...Plz cont asap n do pm me wen u update!! 😊

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shaimah

@shaimah

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Omg!! The update was aweaome
Loved it
Poor manvi felt so bad for her and her baby...it was so sad
Virat is so going to regret this. ..
Who sent those pics? And where is manvi going...so many qns.. excitwd for the next part
Continue soon and please do pm me!!!

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prathe

@prathe

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

super story dear interested to read more after reading first part ...👏
how the story progresses frm this part...
do update soon...😊

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

i guessed it right virat thinks its karan's kid ...jealousy and hatred has overtaken his heart full of love and trust hope he realises that he has committed a grave mistake ...
feeling really bad for manvi she has to be all alone wen she needs virat the most and also virat's harsh words she gt to live with tgem 😭 😭
and the song perfect for the situation ...
awesome update just tooo emotionall ...
plz pls plz next part sooon 😊

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iluviratmanvi

@iluviratmanvi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

nice yaar

next part soon update

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Lovely Start and very emotional as well...Maanvi didn't want clear the confusion which was nice..its time that would clear the air and Virat is the 1 to face the blow..Waiting fr next..!!!

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@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: rasp_berry
Ahh its awesome...virmaan sepreation, their kids n virat lots off rona dhona these r my fvrt concepts...ehahaha...n this is also something like that...cont soon n pm me frm next

Ohhh... these are your favourite concepts... then I hope you are gonna like this ss cause theres a lot of rona dhona in it...Will obviously pm you dear...

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@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: naina927
Awesome... Claps...
Starting was brilliant... Full of happiness n life n then came the shocker... Manvi n karan's morphed photographs which viray believed n doubted manvi... Eagerly waiting for d first chapter...

Thanks naina yaar...

Its really made me feel out of the world getting encouraged by such an awsm writer like you...

Thanks again... 😃