Liquorice Burning#2 [ArHi] Part 13-21

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: meem17
Here it begins
Awesome update
Cant wait to see where it goes

Thanks Meem :)

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Prasanthi
And there is lot more to come out :-) .

I liked how you changed the stances of Raul and Natasha all of a sudden.
Khushi, seriously employer?!!! What the...

Looks like you don't approve?😆

Raul is getting on everyone's nerves - some love him while some want to see him back off!

Why should he? May be its Khushi who needs to decide who she wants to be with, if at all it comes down to that ;)

Dont you agree??

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: Dimz13
Raul this is one game you will loose so go after Natasha while you have a chance...!

Between being struck by lightning...it was Kushi who recovered...and managed a few words...Arnav on the other as always..is vocal only when he has Kushi alone...in a crowd he's generally tongue tied...I'd like to believe its the. Kushi effect.

Kushi's response he was my employer was very apt..at least now...Arnav will have a starting point on how he made Kushi feel...!

Love this chapter...!

@bold, you sound very sure about that. I hope you are not underestimating Raul! ;)

I agree Khushi certainly recovered well may be because in a way this was her territory. But Arnav will recover...

He certainly needs to do a lot and also so much there to realise...

Thanks Dimz :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: soppy
Awww...raul likes khushi?...hes soo cute can i have him?
I hope khushi doesnt give in eaisily!
Update soon!

Awww...I fear, you may have to fight for Raul..I see a few admirers on the thread already and that includes yours truly...😆

Don't worry, Khushi won't give in so easily.

Thank you Soppy :)

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

An amazing story...thanx to kalyani for suggesting it...absolutely loved it...keep up the good work

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soaringskies

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Amazing update Aria, their meeting was dhamakedaar 😆 I wish to see more fireworks😉

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: Tulipdulip
This was amazing!!!... Pls continue soon!!

Thank you :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: IronButterfly
Both of them high on emotion after seeing each other.
Happy just to see the other.

You've written their emotions so well.

And the last line...
Amazing.

Glad you liked the update, was fun writing it. Now the real tough part begins😆

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: sanamsky
awesome update love it thank u for pm

Thank you :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: Sisbamboo1
Res...Thread two and you started it off with a bang! I'll unres as soon as I can.

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"He was my employer." Ouch. Burn, baby, burn! And then the knock-out punch "I was your contracted wife, wasn't I?"

Both Arnav and Khushi turned shades of green today and this did not escape Raul and Natasha's gazes. How serious is Raul about Khushi? It's always hard to gauge the level of interest when it comes to the natural flirts.

Awesome chapter!

@bold. Looks like everyone's loves to see the mighty Raizada suffer. And he deserves every bit of it. Agreed that Khushi was pushed to this extreme by everything that happened that evening but still, Sweet victory for her! Until Raizada comes stalking her now.

Well, there will be a brief back-story of Raul at some point, that should help. I'm enjoying reading everyone's take on him for now.

Thank you!