Liquorice Burning#2 [ArHi] Part 13-21

First Previous

Page

108

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Tas.Chow

@Tas.Chow

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

It's a reallly nice storyline! Read the whole thing in one go! Great work! PM me when you update it!

Quote

rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Just stumbled upon this story and read it all in one go !!

Amazing story. I so want to read this further, I am sending you a buddy request. Please,Please, Please,Please, send me PMs also.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis
wonderful update aria
so raul and Natasha guessed it right, I guess

loved their meet -

liquorice burning indeed

will wait for ur next update

Credit for the title goes to Sookie :)

Thanks you A :)

Quote

@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: SS88
What a drama-filled update. For a minute there, I almost wondered if Arnav would punch poor Raul. Ah, and now the real drama begins. Update soon please :)

Thats a real possibility but they are still reeling under the shock in this update to do anything else!

Quote

@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Congratulations on new thread🥳
Nice update.

Thanks J.

Quote

@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: raws
let him woo her soone

I agree, that's a start for him ;)

Quote

@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: gifttag
Amazingly wonderful and written beautifully as always.
What a scene you created with Arnav and Khushi that the undercurrent were felt even through the screen, you bought passion and intensity like a live thing in this update and I am still reeling under the impact.

This Raul he should come with a warning 'dangerous' written in him, Arnav has got tough compitiion with him around and a jealous and possessive Arnav is always a treat, because of that reason things might move quicker from Arnav's end as in he will not keep quiet instead will be quite vocal about his displeasure regarding lots of things, looks like man of few words will not remain so.

Khushi is't ready not by a long shot to forgive and forget and reconcile, he has got his work cut out for him so I think my dear boy better get to it and prove that why should she consider coming back to you, Khushi is not without feelings...she does feel for him and there is intense attraction there too but Arnav needs to cover lots of ground...the hurt and pain is very deep and I don't even know how she will start to get over it.

I love the way you are taking this story forward. Please continue soon.
Thanks for the PM.

I'm loving all these reactions to Raul. Seems like he is doing something right or wrong, depends how you look at him ;)

I agree, a jealous Arnav is a treat. Something we missed out on a lot on the show itself. When he is spurred on by jealousy, things tend to move faster with him. Typical I guess.

@bold, it does make me wonder too at times whether reconciliation is really possible! Lets see how this evolves as we proceed forward.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the update.

Aria

Quote

@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: 124555
loved the update...
atlast they meet...
but arnav has to try very hard to win khushi back

I agree, its not going to be easy for Arnav.

Quote

@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: katunkka
Aww they have still not lost the atraction or the love. Lets see how arnav get her back or woo her. Is raul interested in Natasha or Khushi?

They sure haven't lost that attraction but a lot has happened and both have changed, whether they acknowledge it or not...and yet the thing between them remains the same!

Who does Raul want? May be he doenst know either!