Liquorice Burning#2 [ArHi] Part 13-21

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: arnkhunostalgic
Finally he found her, the muse really...

Yes he did. And now he won't let her out of his sight!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: savy.fernis
Amazing

Thanks Savy :)

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: neverbefore
Congratulations for Thread 2.

Khushi really needs to stay strong!! She's had her moments of weakness...the chemistry is irresistible BUT she needs to resist!! He needs to work at winning her back...and he needs to work really, really hard on that. 😃

Thank you!

Ha ha the chemistry is indeed irresistable but she does need to resist big time too!!

I agree, she cannot give in so easily and wont either ;) This was just a minor blip...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: frenzyy
congrats on the new thread... whoa they met finally... waiting for the convo b//w dem...

You think they are capable of a convo?😆

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: roseycheek
wow..that was amazing... I wonder how Arnav is going to react to her answer...

I can tell you already, he won't like it one bit. But can he do anything about it though?

Thank you for commenting :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Anupama.
You know its amazing that you successfully got the readers hooked,entertaining us without making them meet! That too for 12 chapters! Kudos.! And when they meet! This has to be by far my most fav chapter for obvious reasons. And How much so ever the rain scene with Arnav in his car, longing for Khushi had me sad for him, this time his jealous possessive yet helplessness in the face of Raul and his muse s' ease with each other gave me pleasure. :D loved it!

And that part where Khushi sights sniff sips was very very well written!

Loved Raul again. Maybe for his perceptiveness this time.

'employer' barging in..and trapping and being pushed.. Oh m very eagerly waiting for the next one. =)

Now that you put it that way, it does sound pretty nice :D

I guess part of that works because it adds up to when they actually meet.

@bold, so Arnav and Khushi no?

Thank you Anupama.

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tinsel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Congrats on the new thread.🥳

Omg! Arnav has found KhushiI... hope Khushi doesn't forgive Arnav so soon.

He ought to repent more. Super updates👏

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: arshina223
You know what you wrote about lucid dreams...i used to think that it only happens with me and that dreams are so scary...the more you try to fight to get out of the more it pull you back.

Khushi is again misunderstanding about natasha..again she felt that she does not belong in his world.

It was very clear to raul and natasha that arnav was not a mere employer. Natasha said that raul got a competition but was he ever in the competition...??

Arnav babua what you will do to woo khushi back..??

Awesome update that was..
update soon

I couldn't agree more on those dreams. Kind of a freak experience to go through. Glad Im not the only one.

The last bit they shared before parting was so painful to Khushi that he is reminder of all of that instead of any happier times :( He did not make things any easier for her with his constant barbs either. They are still stuck where they were years ago even though each has changed no doubt.

Good question, was he ever in the competition, I think all of us know the answer to that. But things change, people change and times change...

Lets see what Arnav Babua has in mind ;)

Thank you A.