Liquorice Burning#2 [ArHi] Part 13-21

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: stories.1408
Awesome

Thank you :)

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: reshkn
loved it..its going to be fun watching him pursue her again..!!!
and both are fighting jealousy...
brilliantly written..😊

I hope so!

Thank you R :)

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: rana5
Things are getting too hot to handle! Show him Khushi, we need a strong, independent Khushi and let Arnav grovel please.

😆 Everyone's up for Khushi giving him a hard time.

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: avikasharma
they meet, they meet, they meet!
so arnav's jealous of raul and on the other hand khushi's jealous of natasha. perfect!
the sentence- "i was your contracted wife" was so...erm good, amazing and definitely true!
no khushi, arnav has changed. sort of. change is in the making and he needs you in his life to make that change. so pls come back. but only after lots and lots of sorries and persuasion, kay?!
lovely update!😊

@bold, true words, he needs her. But will she give him that second chance?

I agree, he needs to work hard...very hard to woo her back.

Thank you for your comment :)

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: sandhya-sp
Congrats for the new thread and thank u so much for ur pm. WOW update!!! loved the way u wrote the emotions , tension, jealousy, hurt...what all...their encounter was absolutely fantastic...now i want the next one aspa...can't wait to read...

Thank you :)

Glad you liked the update.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: swetha_ch
Fabulous update..
Thanks for the pm.

Thank you Swetha :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: Anu567
Thread 2?! And a beautiful update to start it off...keep going Aria...cannot wait for the next part...

Anupama

Thank you Anupama :)

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: shree10
This was quite an intense chapter! Khushi introducing him as her former employer.. Well a true slap for Arnav..
Khushi's thoughts when she saw Natasha with Arnav were equally painful. He never confessed he loved her.. and she only has memories where he demeaned her.. How will Arnav redeem all the hurt and pain he gave Khushi? Seems like long way to go for Arnav.
But atleast he has found her..That's a start. And guess what Raizada? time to be a little more vocal..

Yep, Raizada needs to be a lot more vocal, if he wants her back. Cant be pushing her all the time. For Khushi, he brings back a lot of painful memories,...its not an easy task for Arnav to woo her back.

I doubt Khushi meant it as a slap though...she was egged on by Natasha's presence and Arnav's aggression no doubt to react the way she did.

Thank you Shree :)

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: yashal_khan
Awsumm a good answer by khushiii that she was hos empolye...
Loved it
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

Time for Khushi to give some of that back :)

Thank you :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: moomin4455
Thanks for the PM!

My heart is just aching here...employer??? Really??

And yet...he may as well have been. I really want Raul to just...go somewhere else and find another muse. 😆

How will they recover from this? Can they even???

@bold, to be honest, I wonder about that too. But this is fiction and we all want happy endings, in reality, it would be hard to reconcile.

I'd like to believe Khushi was pushed to react that way because of the circumstance...I doubt she would have introduced him as that under other conditions even though it would be hard to explain their past to anyone!

You cracked me up with that comment on Raul, he is harmless 😛 for now! And may just surprise you by the end.

Thank you for your comment :)