Liquorice Burning#2 [ArHi] Part 13-21

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prati_incept

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1071

Originally posted by: -Aria-

Thanks Farheen, down with a cold and fever 😔 so staying away from IF for a few days.

Thank you everyone for all the likes and comments, I hope to get back as soon as I feel better.

ciao,
Aria

oh Im sorry.. i did not see the note...

get well soon and take rest

God bless you!

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Dimz13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1072

Arnav is really in it for the long haul. His every action shows it. Kushi is more discerning so she can read his eyes. I wish Arnav was as perceptive as well and was able to understand the unsaid words Kushi had "that" night.

I'm glad Deeya inspite of her reservation did give Arnav a vital piece of information about Kushi's meeting with the dumb ass manager. He does not know what he is in store for does he😆

I want to see his face when the full force of ASR hits him. So now they have a long night to make some talk...will they talk or will it be long stretches of silences...and knowing glances...?

Kushi used to be forthright before now it's a fine art...she has the right words and uses them for the right effect no fumbling or hurting easily...you go girl.

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shona136

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1073

wow... that was great... very much expected of arnav... going and seething in anger seeing that ass misbehaving with his khushi... i was dancing in joy when arnav punched the hell out of him after he bad mouthed khushi...

but i am even delighted to see that khushi agreed to come with arnav to his apartment... good decision... i know she went through hell in the past, but this is what we were all waiting for to happen... the little tension, excitement, heat between these two... all of these coming back again... i am absolutely adoring this arnav... though he was the one to make khushi go through hell, he now knows he was wrong and wants to repent for his misdeeds, to try and make it right again... and as they, half of your wrongdoing is forgiven when you realise and repent for yur mistakes...

waiting for the next one...!!! absolutely brilliant...!!!!

cheers

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Uthra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1074

Time for the slime to rue the day he was born. Some small mercies for arnav.

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Khuarv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1075

The updates of the second thread was awesome. Arnav
finally meeting khushi. The story progressed beautifully.
Arnav realizing that his own family is behind helping khushi
is stirring unwelcoming thoughts in his mind and yet this fact
made him realize his grave mistake( of not letting khushi have
a choice of making her own decision).
I just loved the conversation between Arnav and akash.
It was a heartfelt conversation. I love how Arnav and deeya
are at loggerheads but khushi's wellbeing is the only common
thing between them. Good to know Arnav reached on time
to save khushi from the slimy manager.An amazing job as a writer.