Liquorice Burning#2 [ArHi] Part 13-21

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Tanzeela

@ganga16tr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

i have only just come across your story and i LOVEEE it!! please pm when you updateee!!!

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733619

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Great update. Can't wait to read what happens next.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

First of all congrats on the new thread, hope this amazing story has many more.

Loving your character raul, his photo yummy and very gorgeous indeed.

Amazing and brilliant update,

Loved the update, it was written exceptionally well.

I can't believe Rahul interrupted the moment when Arnav and Khushi were about to approach each other,

Wow, a jealous Arnav is always a treat to read, love how raul was encouraging Khushi to taste the wine.

So Natasha and raul have realised that Khushi and Arnav are much more than Arnav being her employer, will he play Cupid.

The kitchen part was fab, loved khushi's response, Arnav will be fuming.

The update was a wonderful read, I don't know why reading the update it seemed so sensual and erotic, not in a dirty way but a nice way.

You are a fabulous writer, the wine tasting part was brilliant, written perfectly.

Eagerly waiting for the next part,

Continue soon please and thanks for the PM xx

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

This was an utterly fabulous and an extremely gratifying update !

Nothing less expected out of this Khushi ...loved her answer to Raul when he questioned her about knowing Arnav and also her retort to "Arnavji" in the end.

Arnav does not even know what has hit him in the face and i am more than happy to see him cringe with anger and jealousy.

Raul is not only a charmer but also quite perceptive to have caught on to the fact that Arnav and Khushi's relationship was more than that of an employer and employee.

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koisk

@koisk

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Read all the updates in one go, loved them. They were really intense and emotional, cannot wait to read more.

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secretsmile

@secretsmile

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Wow!!! Spellbound by your wonderful take on our beloved Arhi. Can't wait for the next update👏

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Congrats on thread 2! This update was just bang on the money! Why did you say that you won't be updating for awhile? This is one of my favourite stories on ARSHI currently! I was waiting for the previous updates!!

I hope you write part 14 very soon!!

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Love.life2

@Love.life2

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Thnx for d pm.

Super update.

Arnav jealous of raul's proximity to khushi.

Khushi sw Arnav came with Natasha n remembered d past abt how natasha ws everythng tht she wsnt n thts wht arnav liked.

Raul's smart guy he figured d underlyin tension spl after khushi sd arnav ws her employer.

He cornered khushi n she lost her cool at his behavior stating she ws his contracted wife..

Waiting for d nxt update..

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

And so they finally meet!

You have literally made me want to devour a whole bottle of wine, forget the swirl, smell, sip and spit rule. I could chug the entire bottle in one go!

With your way of words, I knew I would not see the two creating a scene. Instead, they quietly fought their demons and jealousy in the public. I am sure if situations were different Arnav would have long punched Raul in the face, and Khushi would have chanted her prayers seeing Natasha. Alas, they were still under the shock of seeing each other at the most unexpected place.

I am sure now that Arnav has finally found Khushi, he will not leave her out of his sight, but how will Khushi react to that? Will Arnav be able to break the walls she has created around herself? Or will he return home defeated? the past cannot be erased that quickly, but how big is the impact on their future?