PYAAR KI RAHEIN-sk fanfic - Page 7

nilanjana me seriously can't wait for the next part please post it soon... 😃

hi nel
yar it was a superb pat. 😃 spl raj and amna scene. 👏 yar pplzzzzz dont stop writing 😭 😭 😭 yaha kafi log hai jo tumhari story parhte hai but time ki kami and net ki wajah se comments nahi likh pate so neeel trust me and plz dont stop writing we all luv ur story u write really well

nilanjana where r u pls post the next part sooon.. Cant wait for the next part

nilanjana dear please jaldi se continue karna..me waiting... 😃

NILANJANA (hope spelling is right) 😃
very well written story till now... 👏 very nice concept.. 👏
just read all the parts at stretch now....
i really liked ur story.... 😛
specially that ajeeb sa ehsaas dono ko... so sweet 😛
aur sujal drink pite pite kash ko dekhta hai wow i can truly imagine that scene how intensely he looks @ her 😉 wow.... ur story is superb till now i really njoyed reading it... 😊
gr8 gng.... 👏
plz do cont soon dear.... 😊
waiitng eagerly for next part.. 😉

ok ill continue,waise i was in no mood 2 continue paar phir bhi....

pratham-sujal yaar plz tu kashsih ko ghar chod dena yaar,plz
sujal-ok no probs ,yaar u go
pratham ok thanxs,bye
they go

sujal[givin a sideways galance 2 kashsish]-chalein
kashsih-chalo[givin a sweet smile]

sujal goes agge agge kashsih goes pichche pichche

they reach the car.
kashsih-[thinks] wow kitni shaandaar gadi hai.
wo passenger seat ka darwaza kholne jaati hai,paar its jammed.she is struggling.sujal sees her struggling.wo door khol deta hai,in the process sujal kaa haath kashsih ke haath ko touch kaarta hai & there eyes meet 4 a second.paar jaab kahsish baithne jaati hai-
kashish-oh... ye saab..chii...kya hai[actually uski saari gaadi mein shaaraab ki bottles bikhri paadi hain]
sujal-[embarrassed,sharmaate hue]wo..ye...wo..main saaf kaar deta hoon[sujal cleans up the mess][pyaar mein bichaara naukaar baan gaya]
they sit & sujal is driving
dono naazre chura chura ke ek doosre ko dekh rahe hain.kashsih window kii taraf dekh rahi hai,to hide that she is blushing uncontrolably,aur sujal ka mood bhi bohot achcha hai.paar dono ek bhi baat nahi kaar rahe,baas kashsih sujal ko raasta baata rahi hai.

they reach kashsih home & sujal realises tht dhe is middle class.kashish gets off saying bye jaldi se to sujal.sujal bhi utharta hai.jaab kashish kuch kadam agge chali gai hoti hai-
sujal-kashish...[with so much intensity & depth]
kashsish-[mudti hai]haan
sujal-maat jao
kashsi-looks into sujal eyes [agaar koi aur hota to usse wo zor ka thapad maarti paar sujal ka yeh kehna pata nahi kyun usse achcha laga,jaise ki wo yehi sunna chahti thi]
sujal[realis wht he said]phir kaab milogi
kashish-pata nahi[naazre jhookake]
sujal-phone number
kashsih-5893691 [agaar koi aur usse ph no maangta to wo kabhi nahi deti paar usse aaj kya hua hai wo khud nahi jaanti]
sujal-[pocket mein haath daalta hai]ye mera card hai[gives it in kashish's hand]
kashish-bye
sujal-bye
kashsih-take care
sujal-u 2
kashish kuch kadaam jaati hai,sujal wahin khada hai,baas usse dekhe jaa raha hai.kashish realises tht sujal abhi taak gaya nahi
kashish-arre,tum abhi taak gae nahi,dont worry main darwaze taak akele chali jaungi
sujal-[intensely]muje pata hai,paar jaab taak tum wahan taak jaogi taab taak main tumhe dekh jo saakta hoon

i know ye part bekaar hai as ye maine adhi neend mein adhi jaagte hue likha hai.so plz isse jhel lena.aa raha hai story mein complete twist.when this perfect live story will be not so perfect.jaab dono made 4 each other couple ek doosre kii paarchai se bhi naafraat karenge paar dono saath rahenge,no matter wht.

hi neel
dont ever say u dont want to write any more samjhi😡 now cuming to ur part. it was very nice. 👏 hai sujal to pura deewana ban gaya. 😳 kashi ke liye apni gari tak saf ki wah kya change aya hai sahab me. and askin phone no......yar ye to pura gaya. waise am glad ki kashish ka bhi yahi hal hai 😃 chalo ab next part jaldi se post karna. jyada wait mat karwana okay

👍🏼

this is 4 ur story

dow worry it wasn't bekaar atleast u continued... plzzz cont... sooooon