PYAAR KI RAHEIN-sk fanfic - Page 5

abh baas thoda likhke post kia hai jisse tum ko zyaada wait naa kaarna pade.agge continue aaj hi karungi,aaj nahi balki kaar rahi hoon.so stay tuned.....

ok i am continuing- pratham-haan,wo dekho wo raha.[thats sujal! offcourse]
wo sujal ko ishaare se bulaata hai.sujal comes there.
kashsih is surprised by seein him there with pratham 7 gauri.
kashsih-app dono inhe jaante ho.
gauri-haan,yehi to hai sujal,pratham ka besr frd.
pratham-chalo let me introduce u two.sujal ye kashsih sinha hai meri saali saheba.
sujal-[in his heart]hmmm kashish....kaafi achcha naam hai,tumhe kaafi suit kaarta hai.....kashsish
hi1 kashsih.
kasish ko ek anokha anjaana ehsaas hota hai sujal ke mooh se aapna naam sunkaar
pratham -aur kashish-ye sujal garewal hai mera yaar[pattin on sujal's back]
kashish-[in her heart]suuuu....jaaaa....llll ....hmmm bohot pyaara naam hai,bilkul tumhari tarah
hi sujal,& congratulations also
sujal-congratulations kiss lie?
kahsish di ne kaha aap ko best business man of the year ka award mila hai,thats why.
sujal -oh thanxs[sujal ko aapne dil mein ek ajaab sa ehsaas ho raha hai,jo kya hai usse pata nahi,paar ye pehle kabhi hua nahi.paar jo bhi hai ye ehsaas uske baaki haar ehsaason se alaag hai khaas hai]

taabhi DJ ek gaana lagata hai
gauri-wow pratham ye mera favourite gaana hai,chalo naa dance kaarte hain.
pratham-ys sure,my love
gauri-kashsih u dont mind naa,waiting here.
kashsih no di,not at all,rock the dance floor

gauri & pratham go & sujal & kashish akele reh jaate hain.

wwwo neel
again a very gud part 👏 to akhir humare hero heroine ka formal introduction ho hi gaya 😊 chalo acha hua. waise ye log bhi ajeeb hai dil hi dil me khush huye ja rahe hai 😃 so. waiting for the next part jaldi se bhejna.

maine socha tha ek aur part post karun but sirf 1 comment dekh kaar i felt bad & changed the idea. .abb zyaada bada aur zyaada quantity mein comment karo waarnaaa,mujse bura koi nahi hoga

😳 .....nahi yaaaar dont feel bad...i am sorry ....late comment keh liye par abhi teen char parts saath ssath pare 😳
very cuuuuteee parts...heheh kashish is adorable....aur sujal...lolx....bechara....shareef sharabi hahahahha....continue soon...ab woh akele reh gaye hain....un ko bhi dance floor peh le jao... 😳 ..continue soon...i'll be waitinggggggggggggggggggggg....lovely story 😉 😉 👏

da last 3 partz ver really gud...sorry i cudn't comment b4....i was jus bz wid stuff....itz soo kewl..sujal n kash havin feelingz 4 each oder already.....gud job ...n keep it up...as i m sure u ll do even better wid every part..... 👏

nilanjana dear ur story totally rocks.. it is very different & intresting from other fanfics... i seriously like your fanfic very much....u know tumhare likhne ke style se i don't feel like it's your first fanfic...you write really very damn well... 👏
tho ab sujal kashish have been introduced...yesssss.. & kashish was supporting the person who dropped the drink on her{sujal} & sujal feels as kashish is just like her name kashish.........coolllllllllllll... waise i have a question... ab joh sujal kashish ka introduction ek dusare se ho gaya hain kya yeh ek nayi dosti ki shuruwaat hain yaa phir pyaar ki...... 😉 ab please sujal kashish ko bhi dance floor pe le jao.. woh dono bechare wahan khade khade kya karenge ??? 😆
me think that ab kashish sujal ko sudharegi.. usse sahi raasthe par layegi....mazaa aayega... 😉 please continue soon...me will be waiting for the next part... 😃

thanku 4 ur lovely comments.wah farah i lik ur comment shaarif sharabi very much,too good.ok now the next part-

gauri & pratham go & sujal & kashish akele reh jaate hain.

kashish-[in her heart]patha nahi dance ke lie poochega kii nahi.oh god,ye to kuch bolta hi nahi sirf dekhe jaa raha hai.[kashsih smiles at sujal sweetly]
sujal-[in his heart]kya karoon,poochu yanahi dance ke lie.paar agaar bura maan gai to.aur waise bhi maine pehle kisi ladki se poocha bhi to nahi naa.kya karoon kuch samaj mein nahi aa raha.
aisa sochte sochte 15 min beet jaate hain aur dono hi hi ek baar ek doosre ko dekhte kabhi nazar hatta lete

paar tabhi sujal kashish ke wahan se chaala jaata hai & sits in the bar.
kashsih-inhe kya hua,lagta hai mujse abhi bhi naaraaz hain.
sujal-[sittin in the bar & thinking]yaar sujal tu itna bada buddhu hai ek ladki se dance ke lie nahi pooch saakta.jo sujal kisi se nahi ghabrata wo aaj iss ladki se dance ke lie poochne ke lie kyun ghabra raha hai

kashsih akele bohot bore ho rahi thi.to wo sujal jahan baitha hai uske paas thode distance paar jaakaar khadi ho jaati hai,jisse sujal ko naa laage kii wo uske peeche padi hai.
sujal can see her while having a drink.

kashsih is standing there,tabhi kuch gunde type ladke kashsih ke paaas aate hain.
gunda-aai hai,kya baat hai,kya figure hai ,kya chaal hai,ye figure hai ya topp
kashsih-stop it,leave me alone
gunda-arre wah tera to gussa bhi sexy hai
kashsih-[scared]jao yahan se
gunda-chale jaenge,chale jaenge baas mere saath ek baar dance to karle[holding her hand]
sujal is seeing all this.
kashsih-chodo mera hath,chodo[crying softly]
sujal uthta hai apni chair se goes where gunda & kashsih are.
sujal-ladki ka hath chod de,pata nahi ladki ke saath zabardasti nahi karte
gunda-nahi chodta,kya kaar lega.teri girlfrd laagti hai ya biwi laagti hai
sujal kashish ka haath gunde ke grip se chudaata hai .to kashsih daar ke maare uske seene se laag kaar rone laagti hai bachchon kii tarah.
sujal-[consoles her paating on her back & caressing her hair a bit]kuch nahi hua hai,saab thik hai kashish.kuch nahi hua hai
gunda-arre wah laila majnu kaa romance to dekhlo.oooee majnu apni laila kaa mazza humein bhi to chaakhne de
now sujal gets really angry as the guy disrespected kashsih.
sujal-[kashish ko side mein safely khada kaarta hai.goes to the gunda]kya kaha tune?[punches him on the face]

sujal aur gundon mein bohot zabardast fight ho rahi hai.sujal bohot zyaada gusse mein hai aur unn gundo ko non stop maare jaa raha hai.saab aas paas ke log usse rukne ko keh rahe hain ,paar uske saar paar maano ek junoon sa saavaar hai.abb kashsih bhi tensed ho gai hai.wo sujal ke paas jaati hai aur usse rukne ko kehti hai paar maano sujal ko kuch sunai hi nahi de rahe itne gusse mein.
kashish-sujal...plzzzzz....ruko[wo uska haath pakad leti hai]
sujal kashsih kii taraf gusse se dekhta hai,paar maano kashsih ko dekhte hi sujal kaa gussa kahin gayab ho jaata hai.wo ruk jaata hai aur gunde ko chod deta hai.saare gunde bhaag jaate hain.
kashish dekhti hai kii sujal ke hoth paar chod aai hai.tabhi gauri aur pratham aate hai[pata nahi dono pehle kahan gayab ho gae the kabab mein haddi]
gauri-kashish tum thik to honaa
kashsih-haan main thik hoon
pratham-thanxs yaar
sujal-smiles at pratham thoda sa
kashsih-sujal,kya zarooraat thi tumhe unse aise itna laadne kii,wo bohot khatarnaak log the agaar tumhe kuch kaar dete to ,kya hota tumhare mummy papa kaa...kya hota mera.[she realised what she said,wo apni nazar jhooka leti hai]
sujal-kya kaar dete,jaan se maar dete naa.[smiles sarcastically].aur waise bhi kya farak padta main anaath hoon
kashsish-oh i am sorry[feelin bad 4 sujal].aisa nahi kehte ,main hoo naa tumhare saath

nilanjana dear what a coolll part have you written.. me totally loved every bit of it.. it was simply superb....great...excellent...fantastic... too good...very damn nice.... 👍🏼
i loved the way sujal behaved...shoooo sweet... pehle tho sujal ka thinking whether he has to ask kashish for the dance..then kashish thinking that yeh sujal dance ke liye kyun nahi pooch raha hain.. both are shooooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeee & sweettttttttttttttttt......... 😳 i loved the way sujal fought in order to protect kashish.......un gundo ke saath achcha hua.... 😆 tho ab kashish says main hoon na tumhare saath to sujal....
yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
ab sujal ,kashish kareeb aane lagenge..mazaa aayega.... 😉 dear waise me have a small doubt is sujal's dadi alive or not ???? me confused.. 😕
ab please jaldi se continue karna...me will be waiting.. 😃

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verryyy nice....great action part...awwww bechari kashish hehehe..itni si der mein woh sujal ki ho gayi hehehehe.....speedein hehehe 😳 ...sujal is just muaaaaahhhh love him......hehehehe and you know i love the way he drinks and sees kashish yaaar....bara maza ata hai parne mein hehehehehe..lolx..continue sooooooon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz....luv ya 😉