PYAAR KI RAHEIN-sk fanfic - Page 4

PLZ TRY N CONTINUE 2DAY....da prev. parts ver awesome....all unknown feelings.....lol....jus 2 gud....gud job...n keep it up....can't wait 4 da nxt part...which u said will b sweeter...

please try & continue soon..me will be waiting for the next part.. 😃

ok.

[kashish felt an unknown protection when she was with sujal,she felt as she was safe with him & no one in this world can harm her.paar jaab abb sujal chala gaya she is feeling lonely ,tensed & unsafe.she is unknowingly missing sujal].

kashish locates sujal sittin at the bar drinking.she wants to go to him but wo nahi chahti ki sujal ko pata chale kii wo uske saath rehna chahti hai.so,kashsih wahan jaati hai jahan sujal baitha hai aur uske saamne jaakar ek khaali seat dekhkaar kehti hai-
kashsih-hmmm....wo...excuse me...main yahan baith jaun, actually koi aur seat khali nahi hai[uff...kya bahana hai]
sujal-[says coldly] jo marzi karo[ wo uthkaar wahan se chaala jaata hai]
kashish feels bad & rally lonely & also nervous,she wants to follow sujal .
abb sujal bhi kashsish ki nervousness ko thoda -thoda samajne laaga hai.
wo 1 table paar drink ke saath baitha hai.kashish wahan bina pooche pure haak se baith jaati hai.
sujal-kya hua?
kashish-kya hua.[innocently]
sujal is constantly drinking.
sujal-[pointin at her dress].tumne dhoya nahi?
kashsi-[timidly]nahi.
sujal-kyun.[very unusual for sujal garewal to talk to a total stranger in such friendly manner ,that to a gal]
kashish-wo....muje washroom nahi pata kahan hai.
sujal-[constantly drinkin]wahan hai[pointin his finger]
kashish-oh......ok...thanxs.[wo uthti hai ,but again sits].main baad mein ghar pe dho lungi[she doesnt want 2 leave sujal]
sujal-[he is having drink aft drink]
kashish-[lookin at sujal]aur matt piijie ...plzzz
sujal-[gives a stern look at her]
kashsih-wo mera matlab hai kii ek limit mein rahiye naa.
sujal-[gusse mein].tum hoti kaun ho meri zindagi mein dakhaal dene wali.
kashish-[feelin a bit bad].koi nahi.paar mamma kehti hai sharaab pina achchi baat nahi.shaaraab pine se liver kharab ho jaata hai.
sujal walks away without a word.
kashish thinks'shayad maine kuch zyaada hi bol dia'

too good...... 👍🏼 i loved the part... 👏
please continue soon... 😛

yaar thoda detailed comment likho naa jissse muje bhi agge likhne mein mazza aae

Originally posted by: belanila

yaar thoda detailed comment likho naa jissse muje bhi agge likhne mein mazza aae

nilanjana dear sorry is baar comments thoda chota ho gaya me promise to give a detailed comment next time...sorry once again...😊😛😃

no sorry's surya ur the besr.tum hi to muje aur achcha likhne ke lie encourage aur inspire karti ho sabse zyaada

Originally posted by: belanila

no sorry's surya ur the besr.tum hi to muje aur achcha likhne ke lie encourage aur inspire karti ho sabse zyaada

so sweet of nilanjana..........🤗please apni story jaldi se continue karna...me will be waiting...😃

great pplzz continue
good 👏

plzz post next part 😡 😡 😡

kash kya hua mujpe itna gussa kyun?
ok nxt part-

sujal walks away without a word.
kashish thinks'shayad maine kuch zyaada hi bol dia'

sujal is sittin g at the bar drinking.
sujal-[in his heart]main bekaar mein hi gussa ho gaya aur uss bechaari ko daant dia,pata nahi muje itna gussa kyun aata hai.muje aise usse akele chodkaar nahi aana chahie tha.kaash kii wo thik ho,kisi musibbaat mein naa paad jae ya akeli ghabra naa jae.

kashsih akeli baithi hui hai tabhi door pe she sees her Gauri di & Pratham jiju.she is very happy to see them,like when a lost child finds his parents.she runs to them.

kashish-diiiiiiii jiiiiiiiijssss 🤗
gauri-hi kashsih !kaisi ho?
pratham-hello ,kaisi hai humari saali ji
kashish-main to thik hoon ,paar app logon ko itni der kahan ho gai,pata hai main kitna ghabra gai thi.aur pata hai di meri kisi se taakaar ho gai aur uski drink muj paar giri aur ,dekho meri saari dress kharab ho gai
gauri-kya 😲 kissse/aaj kaal ke ladke hote hi aise hain,ladki dekhi nahi kii piiche paad gai
kashish-nahi di,inn saab ke beech ek wohi achcha aur shaareef tha
.pratham-aap dono behne battein hii karte rahogi yaa mere dost dhundogi bhi
kashsi-aapka dost....?????[a bit surprised]